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Old 11-01-2023, 12:01 PM   #1
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Exclamation MASTER ROCK IS A PUSSY (UNIVERSE TOO)

Rock you’re a pussy, the worst that there is,
Netcee’s consummate rookie at this tournament shit.
You could have reversed your decision and voted for Halo,
it still wouldn’t have earned you a win if Frank had noticed your hate vote.
Yo say it ain’t so, why you take so long to reach a conclusion?
You read the reviews of people’s breakdowns so yours don’t seem fucking stupid.
Really you’re clueless despite the constantly lack of trying
but I’ll take polished elaborate lines over polysyllabic rhyming.
You’ve been bodied by average writers for a decade plus
New heads came punked you even when their text game sucked.
It’s been ten straight months of this godforsaken league
and I doubt Rock can name a decent fucking roster name he beat.
The fact a novice facing me shows the state of the game
should have stayed in your lane before I steamroll you into the pavement again.
Face it you’re basic on every level, nothing you’re producing is heat,
I can do what you do in my sleep, and that includes your studio “beats”.
You’re a loser for real, I’m not even talking the finals bracket
You whiny, passive, spineless-acting fucking tryhard faggot.
Act like you managed to claim your spot here off merit and talent
the best you’ll establish is knowledge you’re not even second best at it.
You were never a challenge, only here to make up the numbers,
patiently wandering by sleeping giants who refused to wake from their slumber.
I won’t say you’re an underdog, I’ll straight up call you a bitch,
What’s a tournament win over YOU do for my resumé after all that I did?
Of course I’ll be pissed off to not go and end on a high
when it’s one-sided and every voter says I swept you aside.
I built a legacy while you struggled character building
It’s amateurism, since you post late most days I’ll let punctuality kill him.
Faggot the difference between us both is you’re nothing to me
I give them something to read, while your novels put ‘em to sleep.
Tell Soule to double the fee if you get an actual vote
that’s deemed appropriate and not one some troll just happens to post.
Your last battle was… Oh, NYC never showed it?
Shame ‘cause if he would have posted I may have had a decent opponent.
You’re here because no one showed against you but Pharaoh and Cereal
don’t act like some serial winner with only two from your actual material.
The fact you’re the lineal contender is insulting to Hal0
He put up a great post last round while you did nothing but take notes.
You’re stuck in the same boat you always have been since you started
somewhere between human garbage as a person and completely retarded.
Three-ways are garbage but if I gotta deal with Uni’s return
then the two of you’ve work to do, cuz I’m already through with my verse!
Franks doing us dirty though, Uni should never be in that
our records are mismatched. Uni 6-3 like my height whenever a chick asks
Lemme review your flick fast: SHITS ASS like your verses
Faggot I’m burning every copy for you being allowed back in the tourney.
We got a master, a journeyman, and then you in between
If losing to me ain’t an option, why you even included this week?
Stupid you been gone MONTHS like you were making editor moves
wonder how that ended for you, since you’re back here with nothing better to do.
Get your reviews up. You ain’t selling us nothing
If you can’t tell by how fuckin forced-our reviews are your film is anything but it.
You ain’t headed for nothing but the trash heap after I’m done
I’d say have you a month off.. but you’d use it just pay Frank for a champion run
You’re average a fuck, what are you smoking?
We got to the top of the totem with hard work, you only got here by trolling.
I’m dropping an Open Mic because I finished work early
just letting you know you didn’t deserve this spot over the competition this tourney.
You can’t just quit then resurface when it’s convenient for you
Keep it the truth, you’re not even top three ranked for the season my dude.
It’s been weeks since you threw the lead away while we stuck with it
writing us lyrics for 12 months solid while you lacked the time or commitment.
Fuck a surprise at the finish line, we put in work every day while you slumbered
Now this fake motherfucker wanna act like he ain’t only here to make up the numbers…

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Old 11-01-2023, 05:42 PM   #2
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Get your reviews up. You ain’t selling us nothing
If you can’t tell by how fuckin forced-our reviews are your film is anything but it.


Ha. Liked this one. But ironically these are actually the reviews we've been getting. 4 out of 5... 9 out of 10, etc. But I digress. Solid piece.
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Old 11-07-2023, 11:18 AM   #3
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This was actually cool. Well written and scathing remarks. Especially against Master Rock.

This is the psychological warfare that Lars is capable of. The question is will it discourage Master Rock and convince him that he is out of his league or will it encourage him to write the best verse he can. We will see
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Old 11-07-2023, 11:27 AM   #4
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Just tryna bring that dog out of him before this went down:

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=156009
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