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Old 03-31-2014, 11:40 AM   #61
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Old 03-31-2014, 11:40 AM   #62
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"Vocab" was thrown around far too much in that thread. I felt it was over done, personally, as @oXus stated. Less is more. You could have said a lot of that in much simpler terms. It seemed like you were overreaching, trying to come across as more intelligent than you were. I wholly don't go for that, in alienates people to a certain extent, when you could just take a universal 'thing' like a feeling that everyone could relate to and put it across simply so everyone got it on some level. I'm not saying dumb it down, i'm saying let it come more naturally to you. I, personally again, don't tend to use many -tion or -ing rhymes as I just feel those are cheap and easy to do. I won't not use them to prove a point, but I use them very sparingly. If you read through my verses you'll see that. I might on occasion as an internal rhyme, but very rarely as an external one. I actually preferred the second verse to the first, it read real Talent-esque.

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Agreed. Overall nice piece tho, tbh. 1st thing I've read from you other then that lame picture battle with some shmuck you had in BA like a month ago that was just recently closed.
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Old 03-31-2014, 11:53 AM   #63
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Old 03-31-2014, 11:53 AM   #64
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Agreed. Overall nice piece tho, tbh. 1st thing I've read from you other then that lame picture battle with some shmuck you had in BA like a month ago that was just recently closed.
STILL WAITING TO SEE A POST FROM YOU THAT IS WORTHY OF ANYTHING BUT THE BACK BUTTON ON MY BROWSER FAGG0T
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Old 03-31-2014, 11:58 AM   #65
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Are you that Master Bates or w.e his name is account I accused you of being?
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Old 03-31-2014, 12:09 PM   #66
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STILL WAITING TO SEE A POST FROM YOU THAT IS WORTHY OF ANYTHING BUT THE BACK BUTTON ON MY BROWSER FAGG0T
Watch your mouth. Not these UK dudes you try and net bully, pussy. I'll Palm slap the bitter taste out your mouth. Are we clear? Ok, carry on.
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Old 04-01-2014, 02:45 AM   #67
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LOL

I aint never called anyone a faggot and used a zero in there

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lma0

Whoever is running @Lars acc ain't me

I can give you that

I ain't about that pussy shit

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