Iamrhetoric 1-0 Vs Utmost 0-0 -UT WINS BY NS

Allen Knight · 01-12-2016, 05:43 PM

NBL Season 8
Week 2

Due FRIDAYFriday

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You must check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

@IAmRhetoric docked -2 votes for not voting

@Utmost

Utmost · 01-12-2016, 05:55 PM

check

IAmRhetoric · 01-15-2016, 02:50 PM

asking for an ext, i know im not gonna be able to finish in time

Utmost · 01-15-2016, 06:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by IAmRhetoric

asking for an ext, i know im not gonna be able to finish in time

fine with me

Utmost · 01-17-2016, 05:14 AM

the lazyiness was real

Act up n' get snap tackled - then pulla gat nine from my jacket to boot
so prepare a will Iam, you wont JUST have a black eye after we're through
Proof, uve neva been a threat - put the knife to ya innards Rhet
then medics'll listen to I Heart fail faster.. than streamers with bad internet
My eyes might dart n head jerk - but its clear im deadin this square
compare me Tourette's, but God Dam-mmit Im fuc king bett er. I swe ar
U wont win, sorry - This is MY HOUSE!!! n yea Im goin thru quite the phase
but if ur lookin for a hall mark moment.. heres a sharpie for writin ur height n' age
Saw ya shit verse last week, ***kles ensued when i noticed it lackin heaters
I mean, Control did no show.. but I showed no control of my laughter either

Bash · 01-17-2016, 05:37 PM

I liked the opener. You have decent concepts just the wording holds some back. Like the internet bar could have been really good, just needed to be touched up. This would have been an interesting battle. Props.

Allen Knight · 01-17-2016, 06:02 PM

Act up n' get snap tackled - then pulla gat nine from my jacket to boot
so prepare a will Iam, you wont JUST have a black eye after we're through
^^^cool opener
Proof, uve neva been a threat - put the knife to ya innards Rhet
then medics'll listen to I Heart fail faster.. than streamers with bad internet
^^^nah
My eyes might dart n head jerk - but its clear im deadin this square
compare me Tourette's, but God Dam-mmit Im fuc king bett er. I swe ar
^^^nope
U wont win, sorry - This is MY HOUSE!!! n yea Im goin thru quite the phase
but if ur lookin for a hall mark moment.. heres a sharpie for writin ur height n' age
^^^decent
Saw ya shit verse last week, ***kles ensued when i noticed it lackin heaters
I mean, Control did no show.. but I showed no control of my laughter either
^^^solid

overall not a bad verse had some misses but some good shit to, tweak
ur wording a lil an ur bars will hit better, concepts are there.

Orc · 01-17-2016, 06:49 PM

Hallmark was nice. Thought tourettes was funny too.

slech · 01-17-2016, 10:32 PM

Act up n' get snap tackled - then pulla gat nine from my jacket to boot
so prepare a will Iam, you wont JUST have a black eye after we're through
-too wordy, didnt reallly like this concept-
Proof, uve neva been a threat - put the knife to ya innards Rhet
then medics'll listen to I Heart fail faster.. than streamers with bad internet
-nah, wasnt liking this-
My eyes might dart n head jerk - but its clear im deadin this square
compare me Tourette's, but God Dam-mmit Im fuc king bett er. I swe ar
---eh---
U wont win, sorry - This is MY HOUSE!!! n yea Im goin thru quite the phase
but if ur lookin for a hall mark moment.. heres a sharpie for writin ur height n' age
-lol ok cool-
Saw ya shit verse last week, ***kles ensued when i noticed it lackin heaters
I mean, Control did no show.. but I showed no control of my laughter either
-nah

hallmark was the only quote here

01-12-2016, 05:43 PM	#1
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Iamrhetoric 1-0 Vs Utmost 0-0 -UT WINS BY NS NBL Season 8 Week 2 Due FRIDAYFriday Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @IAmRhetoric docked -2 votes for not voting @Utmost __________________ C.O.B

01-17-2016, 05:37 PM	#6
Bash Barrin' Out Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 577 Battle Record: 16-15 Champed - Fight Night 5 Rep Power: 13649167	I liked the opener. You have decent concepts just the wording holds some back. Like the internet bar could have been really good, just needed to be touched up. This would have been an interesting battle. Props. __________________ "You thinkin what im thinkin?" - Danson "Aim for the bushes?" -Highsmith

01-17-2016, 06:02 PM	#7
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Act up n' get snap tackled - then pulla gat nine from my jacket to boot so prepare a will Iam, you wont JUST have a black eye after we're through ^^^cool opener Proof, uve neva been a threat - put the knife to ya innards Rhet then medics'll listen to I Heart fail faster.. than streamers with bad internet ^^^nah My eyes might dart n head jerk - but its clear im deadin this square compare me Tourette's, but God Dam-mmit Im fuc king bett er. I swe ar ^^^nope U wont win, sorry - This is MY HOUSE!!! n yea Im goin thru quite the phase but if ur lookin for a hall mark moment.. heres a sharpie for writin ur height n' age ^^^decent Saw ya shit verse last week, ***kles ensued when i noticed it lackin heaters I mean, Control did no show.. but I showed no control of my laughter either ^^^solid overall not a bad verse had some misses but some good shit to, tweak ur wording a lil an ur bars will hit better, concepts are there. __________________ C.O.B

01-12-2016, 05:55 PM	#2
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320633	check

01-17-2016, 05:14 AM	#5
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320633	the lazyiness was real Act up n' get snap tackled - then pulla gat nine from my jacket to boot so prepare a will Iam, you wont JUST have a black eye after we're through Proof, uve neva been a threat - put the knife to ya innards Rhet then medics'll listen to I Heart fail faster.. than streamers with bad internet My eyes might dart n head jerk - but its clear im deadin this square compare me Tourette's, but God Dam-mmit Im fuc king bett er. I swe ar U wont win, sorry - This is MY HOUSE!!! n yea Im goin thru quite the phase but if ur lookin for a hall mark moment.. heres a sharpie for writin ur height n' age Saw ya shit verse last week, ***kles ensued when i noticed it lackin heaters I mean, Control did no show.. but I showed no control of my laughter either

01-17-2016, 06:49 PM	#8
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	Hallmark was nice. Thought tourettes was funny too.

01-17-2016, 10:32 PM	#9
slech > Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 150 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 3807828	Act up n' get snap tackled - then pulla gat nine from my jacket to boot so prepare a will Iam, you wont JUST have a black eye after we're through -too wordy, didnt reallly like this concept- Proof, uve neva been a threat - put the knife to ya innards Rhet then medics'll listen to I Heart fail faster.. than streamers with bad internet -nah, wasnt liking this- My eyes might dart n head jerk - but its clear im deadin this square compare me Tourette's, but God Dam-mmit Im fuc king bett er. I swe ar ---eh--- U wont win, sorry - This is MY HOUSE!!! n yea Im goin thru quite the phase but if ur lookin for a hall mark moment.. heres a sharpie for writin ur height n' age -lol ok cool- Saw ya shit verse last week, ***kles ensued when i noticed it lackin heaters I mean, Control did no show.. but I showed no control of my laughter either -nah hallmark was the only quote here