06-25-2015, 03:02 PM | #1 |
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SHADOW BOXING - Junto vs Tic {Tic wins}
Junto
You made it here by no luck. Hush set ya up to get punk'd now you queer. way to go... read below, it's the suggested route to send you the fuck outta here. I bet you saw my name & puked. Ima see yours like Ha, what a corny fruit... My name ring out in my city nigga. When urs sounds its wit harmonicas & joyful flute U dont shoot outside of ranges on ur birthday. One punch'd put a crack in ur face & only time 'lead out'? is after I drop u wit that jab & ur girl takin me back to her place Fuck cares who ball in the tourney farther when ur chicks such a slutty partner I pick baby girl up right now... she'd take the mic in front of erryone like Curry daughter I fight the best - aim for the jaw and give this fool one right & left And it'll be an early breaking that'd only be acceptable on license tests When u play life like chess you win early - now I could get rich wit past dues ...only moves u been makin is a rotation between your bed fridge & bathroom Tic When it comes to text, put a stop to it cuz ya not legit You come w/ such Horrible Scripts, it could make Jurassic World into an Oscar flick This wannabe homie sucks, to beat me you better pony up My Style is dope. You've struggled to come into your own like a lonely Muff I'll kill you quick - Put you in a Grave for not actin right & once you Meet the Dirt, it'll be you'n that Bitch Forever like Married Life I'll Vent my anger & trust ya life'll end, bet it square When part of you Circulates evenly in every room like Central Air He talks a lot til the heater's aimed & he'll start chokin instantly 'N when the gun go off? That's Chamber Music that could rival Beethoven's symphonies I'm not Often Around, my schedule's a tangled maze But I'll show Availability when I use one to cover ya mangled face
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06-25-2015, 04:31 PM | #2 |
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ring out was good
lead out a bit wordy but cool early breakin could have had a harsher execution moves was nice lol vs horrible scripts was good meet the dirt was nice chambers could have been dopeeee, you were too wordy w/ it tho availability was creative but execution lacked this battle was actually pretty solid. some bars a bit wordy and some lacked harsh executions. this is a matter of personal preference here. wasn't feelin all the simile executions TIC had, tbh. I think he OD'd w/ them in the middle of his verse and examples are central air and lonely muff. those needed harsher tie ins and/or execution in order to hit hard, imo. Junto edged it |
06-26-2015, 09:33 AM | #3 |
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06-27-2015, 05:01 PM | #4 |
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You made it here by no luck. Hush set ya up to get punk'd now you queer.
way to go... read below, it's the suggested route to send you the fuck outta here. Okay.. I bet you saw my name & puked. Ima see yours like Ha, what a corny fruit... My name ring out in my city nigga. When urs sounds its wit harmonicas & joyful flute Lol U dont shoot outside of ranges on ur birthday. One punch'd put a crack in ur face & only time 'lead out'? is after I drop u wit that jab & ur girl takin me back to her place Weird setup. Fuck cares who ball in the tourney farther when ur chicks such a slutty partner I pick baby girl up right now... she'd take the mic in front of erryone like Curry daughter Okay I fight the best - aim for the jaw and give this fool one right & left And it'll be an early breaking that'd only be acceptable on license tests Reach but okay. When u play life like chess you win early - now I could get rich wit past dues ...only moves u been makin is a rotation between your bed fridge & bathroom Sick Tic When it comes to text, put a stop to it cuz ya not legit You come w/ such Horrible Scripts, it could make Jurassic World into an Oscar flick His horrible script would make jurassic world a oscar flick. Idgi. This wannabe homie sucks, to beat me you better pony up My Style is dope. You've struggled to come into your own like a lonely Muff Lol I'll kill you quick - Put you in a Grave for not actin right & once you Meet the Dirt, it'll be you'n that Bitch Forever like Married Life Cool cool I'll Vent my anger & trust ya life'll end, bet it square When part of you Circulates evenly in every room like Central Air Ehh this sounds unfinished He talks a lot til the heater's aimed & he'll start chokin instantly 'N when the gun go off? That's Chamber Music that could rival Beethoven's symphonies Sick I'm not Often Around, my schedule's a tangled maze But I'll show Availability when I use one to cover ya mangled face Sick V tic |
06-28-2015, 03:01 AM | #5 |
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Junto.
I thought this was statementish n kinda a warmup to ur verse. Like a "check it" line if tht mks sense joyful flute. Lol. That's def influenced by kara. But funny It's a lead jab. Leed. Not lead. Led. N that's what the wp was so it's a miss to me Mic is dope af. But hold on. Did u just. Hmmmm. Detective muff on the job n this time I got u. Lol! This is good tho early breaking ok. rotation ok too Tic opener is ok come into my own. Yeah right. I'm not the one looking like Shang Tsung the archives every week. That's you buddy. But I'll be unbiased n say this was ok. Because the come into ur own is an okay association married life is ok circulates was ass. U compared a result of a shooting to A/c chamber music was nice closer was disgusting I got tic here. Juntos fopener n lead were a miss. The rest was ok/ nice Tic had a bunch of ok bars w/ the last 4 being nice So I got him V/tic
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06-28-2015, 09:05 AM | #6 |
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06-28-2015, 09:19 AM | #7 |
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Tic: I liked the Jurassic World line, more so because it was a current event than the actual idea but I enjoyed it. Come into your own was LULZ, married life was cool too. Last three didn't really connect for me personally, and I completely disliked the avail ability shit loooool
Junto: The only line I really liked from you this time out was 'early breaking' tbh, some either fell a little flat and lacked that sting to the punch or went over my head like the Curry line and I've no shame in admitting that. Even with giving some leeway for that line, I've still got Tic ahead three quoteables to two so I'm giving this one to Tic close battle fellas!
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06-28-2015, 10:29 AM | #8 |
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Curry daughter, license test
vs Married life, chamber music & closer This was a cool battle here both came pretty correct. Curry was lotb shit was fire but i jus felt tic barely edges this one wit one more quote. V- tix |
06-28-2015, 10:47 AM | #9 |
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Junto
Fuck cares who ball in the tourney farther when ur chicks such a slutty partner I pick baby girl up right now... she'd take the mic in front of erryone like Curry daughter I fight the best - aim for the jaw and give this fool one right & left And it'll be an early breaking that'd only be acceptable on license tests When u play life like chess you win early - now I could get rich wit past dues ...only moves u been makin is a rotation between your bed fridge & bathroom Tic This wannabe homie sucks, to beat me you better pony up My Style is dope. You've struggled to come into your own like a lonely Muff I'll Vent my anger & trust ya life'll end, bet it square When part of you Circulates evenly in every room like Central Air This was a cool battle both started off slow then started cooking toward the end... Junto Curry Daughter bar was fuckin dope as was Tic central air shit but I got Junto edging it with one more quote v/Junto
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06-28-2015, 10:55 AM | #10 |
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You made it here by no luck. Hush set ya up to get punk'd now you queer.
way to go... read below, it's the suggested route to send you the fuck outta here. ^uhm. maybe missing smth? idk. I bet you saw my name & puked. Ima see yours like Ha, what a corny fruit... My name ring out in my city nigga. When urs sounds its wit harmonicas & joyful flute ^okay. execution is nice. concept kinda simple U dont shoot outside of ranges on ur birthday. One punch'd put a crack in ur face & only time 'lead out'? is after I drop u wit that jab & ur girl takin me back to her place ^why birthday? lead connects to shooting as led, but to jabs as lead. idk Fuck cares who ball in the tourney farther when ur chicks such a slutty partner I pick baby girl up right now... she'd take the mic in front of erryone like Curry daughter ^oookay. had to do some research and i get it now. good line I fight the best - aim for the jaw and give this fool one right & left And it'll be an early breaking that'd only be acceptable on license tests ^had to some googling again tbh, but this is a solid line When u play life like chess you win early - now I could get rich wit past dues ...only moves u been makin is a rotation between your bed fridge & bathroom ^aite last 3 were pretty good vs. When it comes to text, put a stop to it cuz ya not legit You come w/ such Horrible Scripts, it could make Jurassic World into an Oscar flick ^i kinda have to like this line cuz i been going on about the movie's awful script lol. decent line This wannabe homie sucks, to beat me you better pony up My Style is dope. You've struggled to come into your own like a lonely Muff ^lol okay I'll kill you quick - Put you in a Grave for not actin right & once you Meet the Dirt, it'll be you'n that Bitch Forever like Married Life ^okay I'll Vent my anger & trust ya life'll end, bet it square When part of you Circulates evenly in every room like Central Air ^okay He talks a lot til the heater's aimed & he'll start chokin instantly 'N when the gun go off? That's Chamber Music that could rival Beethoven's symphonies ^aite I'm not Often Around, my schedule's a tangled maze But I'll show Availability when I use one to cover ya mangled face ^ehh okay. very solid consistent verse this was a good read. i think jun had better standouts w/ his last three, but tic wasn't far behind in that regard, but he was more consistent. all of his minus his closer were at least decent. so yea, i think i gotta give it to tic. props to both tho, cool battle. v/tic |
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