07-19-2014, 03:08 AM | #1 |
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Alvin Karpis [VS] murda sho [murda sho WINS]
The Summer Classic VII Netcees Premier Text Battling Tournament @Alvin Karpis @murda sho Rules Due Dates:
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07-23-2014, 12:37 AM | #2 |
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Wassup Karp
Heard u & ur redskin broke up cause she's a whore & likes to screw She said u were the worst date for an Indian since 1492 She loves my dark D, said it's heavy and after I hit she'll be snoring Biccardi is light... and it usually makes her feel like shit in the morning I can do what u can, let the horror begin when I snatch ur daughter & friends Your first round was dope bro... now let me show you how I slaughter a Kin At bars chicks call u "fuckin clown", he gets denied by the bunches He couldn't get chicks to write numbers down with Defiant's top punches But these body shots will bring that pain to fellas... Once I hit him in the Corey'd scream like a bitch so loud it'd make Topanga jealous Zip Him Up!!
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You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition I pull dimes w/ ease, they always fall in love son I’m intelligent & never had a dumb THOT, and well you can’t even fuck one This gay bitch never rocked stages, it’s too easy clownin this man Only time he opened up for a crowd was when he came out to his fam Lately ya verses lack substance and you’re jealous of Kar Homey ya lines need work & Jon Taffer couldn’t help w/ ya Bars You’re not a G, you act sweet as fuck, plus you’re weak n awkward I bet you turn tricks & fuck w/ a John Daly but I don’t mean the golfer |
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I think I'll go with MS here. Great battle, guys. v-MS Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 07-23-2014 at 04:50 AM. |
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Heard u & ur redskin broke up cause she's a whore & likes to screw
She said u were the worst date for an Indian since 1492 She loves my dark D, said it's heavy and after I hit she'll be snoring Biccardi is light... and it usually makes her feel like shit in the morning I can do what u can, let the horror begin when I snatch ur daughter & friends Your first round was dope bro... now let me show you how I slaughter a Kin - Opener was nice. Bu' Kar D was creative and dope, IMO. Slaughter Kin was dope as well. vs You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition I pull dimes w/ ease, they always fall in love son I’m intelligent & never had a dumb THOT, and well you can’t even fuck one - Opener was LOL & THOT was dope, IMO. NON-Quotes: Murda, Defiant's top punches was weak, IMO. I've seen that concept used a lot, and even tho it's something that took place recently, the concept has been done many many times. I didn't like the Corey'd scream PUN either. Felt as if it was missing something. Karp, Opened up for a crowd is basically on the same level as sho's Digits/Numbers concept. Needs work came off stale too me and the same w/ Fuck w/ a John Daly. Just didn't like them. OVERALL: Pretty cool battle, felt like sho's quotes were really effective and his misses weren't as bad as Karps. v/Murda |
07-23-2014, 02:29 PM | #6 |
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I can do what u can, let the horror begin when I snatch ur daughter & friends Your first round was dope bro... now let me show you how I slaughter a Kin But these body shots will bring that pain to fellas... Once I hit him in the Corey'd scream like a bitch so loud it'd make Topanga jealous These were my favorite bars from u. Pretty good verse tho, a few misses. But not bad. Alvin You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition Deaaaad Lately ya verses lack substance and you’re jealous of Kar Homey ya lines need work & Jon Taffer couldn’t help w/ ya Bars You’re not a G, you act sweet as fuck, plus you’re weak n awkward I bet you turn tricks & fuck w/ a John Daly but I don’t mean the golfer Dope shit Karp as usual. Had more quotables and was more creative Vote Karp
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07-23-2014, 03:13 PM | #7 |
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1492, defiant
Amen. Open crowd (lotb). John daly. I thought karp was harsher imo. Felt like ms needed more sting to his wording. Also thought bacardi was forced imo. I got this 3 to 2 karp with lotb goin to karp also. V karp |
07-23-2014, 08:55 PM | #8 |
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Heard u & ur redskin broke up cause she's a whore & likes to screw She said u were the worst date for an Indian since 1492 -damn Your first round was dope bro... now let me show you how I slaughter a Kin -thats it??? coulda at least made a dope flip Once I hit him in the Corey'd scream like a bitch so loud it'd make Topanga jealous neva seen that flipped....cool karp You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition -Fire I pull dimes w/ ease, they always fall in love son I’m intelligent & never had a dumb THOT, and well you can’t even fuck one -ok This gay bitch never rocked stages, it’s too easy clownin this man Only time he opened up for a crowd was when he came out to his fam -haha that one was nice endin' was nice pretty even match feel it came down to the overall better punches in this...styles are pretty similar vote-Karp |
07-23-2014, 10:48 PM | #9 |
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]Wassup Karp
Heard u & ur redskin broke up cause she's a whore & likes to screw She said u were the worst date for an Indian since 1492 This shit is bonkers lol. She loves my dark D, said it's heavy and after I hit she'll be snoring Biccardi is light... and it usually makes her feel like shit in the morning The wordplay works...tbis was ok...nothin crazy I can do what u can, let the horror begin when I snatch ur daughter & friends Your first round was dope bro... now let me show you how I slaughter a Kin Meh At bars chicks call u "fuckin clown", he gets denied by the bunches He couldn't get chicks to write numbers down with Defiant's top punches Lol. Nice. But these body shots will bring that pain to fellas... Once I hit him in the Corey'd scream like a bitch so loud it'd make Topanga jealous Ill Zip Him Up!! Alvin Karpis: You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition Men toes is forced. Sorry. Concept w/ mint condition was dope...but yea forced I pull dimes w/ ease, they always fall in love son I’m intelligent & never had a dumb THOT, and well you can’t even fuck one Literally cut a thot/thought line out my verse...wasnt sure how people would react to it....so...ill say its good. This gay bitch never rocked stages, it’s too easy clownin this man Only time he opened up for a crowd was when he came out to his fam Clean Lately ya verses lack substance and you’re jealous of Kar Homey ya lines need work & Jon Taffer couldn’t help w/ ya Bars Had to google that. Took away the impact in doing so. Wasnt that dope anyways You’re not a G, you act sweet as fuck, plus you’re weak n awkward I bet you turn tricks & fuck w/ a John Daly but I don’t mean the golfer That was hot This is mad close. Imma go w sho for his opening line being lotb. After that u guys were pretty even. Sho felt fresher but karp had sum bars. V sho |
07-24-2014, 01:47 AM | #10 |
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murda sho: The opener is line of the round from what I've read so far. That was terrific, a mix of clever and personal while also being worded well. Other than that, you didn't have anything particularly great. Defiant's punches line was good enough to be a second hit. The Kin line was worded for minimum impact, and the Bacardi (why can't people spell that correctly?) and Boy Meets World lines were wordplay stretches.
Alvin Karpis: This easily is the worst verse I've seen from you. The Mentos line was somewhere between clever and stretched. The THOT and crowd lines were pretty good as fillers, but the back half of the verse really didn't do it for me. John Daly has wordplay potential, but you didn't set it up well at all. And Jon Taffer was a little too directly obvious. Moreover, there was nothing personal about this verse (be it direct disses or nameplays) after the opener. Vote: murda sho
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4-2 murda sho
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07-24-2014, 08:15 AM | #12 |
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Murda:
1492 was lol good But ba Kar d, Bacardi is forced and not in a way that's passable. Kin line was weak Defiants punches was cool concept wise, didn't do much for me Corey'd was wack Alvin: Mentos was meh Dumb THOT was ok, a lazy concept Opened up for a crowd is LAWLZ good, sounds like something Your Aerness would write Jon Taffer line was lazy John Daly was dry Overall not a great battle. I added this up by points and both came out to 28/50 so I have to judge by who had worse misses. MVGT Alvin Karpis
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Wassup Karp
Heard u & ur redskin broke up cause she's a whore & likes to screw She said u were the worst date for an Indian since 1492 nice, smooth shit She loves my dark D, said it's heavy and after I hit she'll be snoring Biccardi is light... and it usually makes her feel like shit in the morning nice again, slight stretch for text but feeling it I can do what u can, let the horror begin when I snatch ur daughter & friends Your first round was dope bro... now let me show you how I slaughter a Kin not good but not bad At bars chicks call u "fuckin clown", he gets denied by the bunches He couldn't get chicks to write numbers down with Defiant's top punches lmao liked it But these body shots will bring that pain to fellas... Once I hit him in the Corey'd scream like a bitch so loud it'd make Topanga jealous feeling it Zip Him Up!! Alvin Karpis: You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition nah not good man. good idea but it doesnt work imo I pull dimes w/ ease, they always fall in love son I’m intelligent & never had a dumb THOT, and well you can’t even fuck one nice here This gay bitch never rocked stages, it’s too easy clownin this man Only time he opened up for a crowd was when he came out to his fam okay. light jab Lately ya verses lack substance and you’re jealous of Kar Homey ya lines need work & Jon Taffer couldn’t help w/ ya Bars not feeling You’re not a G, you act sweet as fuck, plus you’re weak n awkward I bet you turn tricks & fuck w/ a John Daly but I don’t mean the golfer nice here bro good shit from both but sho was too consistent. best verse i have seen from him in a long long time. vote murda sho |
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I got sho edging, opener and defiant, Karp, this was not u, Thot was eh ok, ur best to me was the john daly line and that was just ok
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opener and defiant line
vs thot and almost the closer pretty much have to echo the mutual feelings here seems like karp slacked and murda brought that fire v/sho |
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7-3 murda sho wins.
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