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Old 07-19-2014, 03:08 AM   #1
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Wassup Karp

Heard u & ur redskin broke up cause she's a whore & likes to screw
She said u were the worst date for an Indian since 1492
She loves my dark D, said it's heavy and after I hit she'll be snoring
Biccardi is light... and it usually makes her feel like shit in the morning
I can do what u can, let the horror begin when I snatch ur daughter & friends
Your first round was dope bro... now let me show you how I slaughter a Kin
At bars chicks call u "fuckin clown", he gets denied by the bunches
He couldn't get chicks to write numbers down with Defiant's top punches
But these body shots will bring that pain to fellas...
Once I hit him in the Corey'd scream like a bitch so loud it'd make Topanga jealous


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Old 07-23-2014, 12:47 AM   #3
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Alvin Karpis:

You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin
Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition
I pull dimes w/ ease, they always fall in love son
I’m intelligent & never had a dumb THOT, and well you can’t even fuck one
This gay bitch never rocked stages, it’s too easy clownin this man
Only time he opened up for a crowd was when he came out to his fam
Lately ya verses lack substance and you’re jealous of Kar
Homey ya lines need work & Jon Taffer couldn’t help w/ ya Bars
You’re not a G, you act sweet as fuck, plus you’re weak n awkward
I bet you turn tricks & fuck w/ a John Daly but I don’t mean the golfer
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Wassup Karp

Heard u & ur redskin broke up cause she's a whore & likes to screw
She said u were the worst date for an Indian since 1492 - LOTB
She loves my dark D, said it's heavy and after I hit she'll be snoring
Biccardi is light... and it usually makes her feel like shit in the morning (you meant to say Bacardi right? I was really confused by the np bc of the misspelling, but I will quote this regardless)
At bars chicks call u "fuckin clown", he gets denied by the bunches
He couldn't get chicks to write numbers down with Defiant's top punches
But these body shots will bring that pain to fellas...
Once I hit him in the Corey'd scream like a bitch so loud it'd make Topanga jealous


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Alvin Karpis:

You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin
Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition
I pull dimes w/ ease, they always fall in love son
I’m intelligent & never had a dumb THOT, and well you can’t even fuck one
Lately ya verses lack substance and you’re jealous of Kar
Homey ya lines need work & Jon Taffer couldn’t help w/ ya Bars
You’re not a G, you act sweet as fuck, plus you’re weak n awkward
I bet you turn tricks & fuck w/ a John Daly but I don’t mean the golfer
Nice battle. I have the battle scored 4-4. Best I've read this round so far. LOTB went to MS for an hilarious opener. Both of the bars I omitted from each verse came 3 bars in, so they both didn't suffer from any loss of momentum. Consistency was equal. I think MS gets another LOTB for the Defiant bar. That was clever. Alvins Mentos and THOT's lines could be consider lotb material, too. Really close. Alvin's read smoother, was more condensed and formulaic. MS, while Alvin's was dope, was funnier to me and the payoff in each of his quotables was more impactful. Not to say Alvin's wasn't.

I think I'll go with MS here. Great battle, guys.

v-MS

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Old 07-23-2014, 01:12 PM   #5
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Heard u & ur redskin broke up cause she's a whore & likes to screw
She said u were the worst date for an Indian since 1492
She loves my dark D, said it's heavy and after I hit she'll be snoring
Biccardi is light... and it usually makes her feel like shit in the morning
I can do what u can, let the horror begin when I snatch ur daughter & friends
Your first round was dope bro... now let me show you how I slaughter a Kin

- Opener was nice. Bu' Kar D was creative and dope, IMO. Slaughter Kin was dope as well.

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You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin
Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition
I pull dimes w/ ease, they always fall in love son
I’m intelligent & never had a dumb THOT, and well you can’t even fuck one

- Opener was LOL & THOT was dope, IMO.

NON-Quotes:

Murda,

Defiant's top punches was weak, IMO. I've seen that concept used a lot, and even tho it's something that took place recently, the concept has been done many many times. I didn't like the Corey'd scream PUN either. Felt as if it was missing something.

Karp,

Opened up for a crowd is basically on the same level as sho's Digits/Numbers concept. Needs work came off stale too me and the same w/ Fuck w/ a John Daly. Just didn't like them.

OVERALL: Pretty cool battle, felt like sho's quotes were really effective and his misses weren't as bad as Karps.

v/Murda
 
Old 07-23-2014, 02:29 PM   #6
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I can do what u can, let the horror begin when I snatch ur daughter & friends
Your first round was dope bro... now let me show you how I slaughter a Kin

But these body shots will bring that pain to fellas...
Once I hit him in the Corey'd scream like a bitch so loud it'd make Topanga jealous

These were my favorite bars from u. Pretty good verse tho, a few misses. But not bad.

Alvin

You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin
Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition
Deaaaad

Lately ya verses lack substance and you’re jealous of Kar
Homey ya lines need work & Jon Taffer couldn’t help w/ ya Bars

You’re not a G, you act sweet as fuck, plus you’re weak n awkward
I bet you turn tricks & fuck w/ a John Daly but I don’t mean the golfer

Dope shit Karp as usual. Had more quotables and was more creative

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Old 07-23-2014, 03:13 PM   #7
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1492, defiant

Amen. Open crowd (lotb). John daly.

I thought karp was harsher imo. Felt like ms needed more sting to his wording. Also thought bacardi was forced imo. I got this 3 to 2 karp with lotb goin to karp also.


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Old 07-23-2014, 08:55 PM   #8
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Sho

Heard u & ur redskin broke up cause she's a whore & likes to screw
She said u were the worst date for an Indian since 1492
-damn

Your first round was dope bro... now let me show you how I slaughter a Kin
-thats it??? coulda at least made a dope flip

Once I hit him in the Corey'd scream like a bitch so loud it'd make Topanga jealous
neva seen that flipped....cool


karp




You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin
Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition
-Fire
I pull dimes w/ ease, they always fall in love son
I’m intelligent & never had a dumb THOT, and well you can’t even fuck one
-ok
This gay bitch never rocked stages, it’s too easy clownin this man
Only time he opened up for a crowd was when he came out to his fam
-haha that one was nice

endin' was nice

pretty even match feel it came down to the overall better punches in this...styles are pretty similar

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Old 07-23-2014, 10:48 PM   #9
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]Wassup Karp

Heard u & ur redskin broke up cause she's a whore & likes to screw
She said u were the worst date for an Indian since 1492

This shit is bonkers lol.

She loves my dark D, said it's heavy and after I hit she'll be snoring
Biccardi is light... and it usually makes her feel like shit in the morning

The wordplay works...tbis was ok...nothin crazy

I can do what u can, let the horror begin when I snatch ur daughter & friends
Your first round was dope bro... now let me show you how I slaughter a Kin

Meh

At bars chicks call u "fuckin clown", he gets denied by the bunches
He couldn't get chicks to write numbers down with Defiant's top punches

Lol. Nice.

But these body shots will bring that pain to fellas...
Once I hit him in the Corey'd scream like a bitch so loud it'd make Topanga jealous

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You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin
Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition

Men toes is forced. Sorry. Concept w/ mint condition was dope...but yea forced

I pull dimes w/ ease, they always fall in love son
I’m intelligent & never had a dumb THOT, and well you can’t even fuck one

Literally cut a thot/thought line out my verse...wasnt sure how people would react to it....so...ill say its good.

This gay bitch never rocked stages, it’s too easy clownin this man
Only time he opened up for a crowd was when he came out to his fam

Clean

Lately ya verses lack substance and you’re jealous of Kar
Homey ya lines need work & Jon Taffer couldn’t help w/ ya Bars

Had to google that. Took away the impact in doing so. Wasnt that dope anyways

You’re not a G, you act sweet as fuck, plus you’re weak n awkward
I bet you turn tricks & fuck w/ a John Daly but I don’t mean the golfer

That was hot



This is mad close. Imma go w sho for his opening line being lotb. After that u guys were pretty even. Sho felt fresher but karp had sum bars.

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murda sho: The opener is line of the round from what I've read so far. That was terrific, a mix of clever and personal while also being worded well. Other than that, you didn't have anything particularly great. Defiant's punches line was good enough to be a second hit. The Kin line was worded for minimum impact, and the Bacardi (why can't people spell that correctly?) and Boy Meets World lines were wordplay stretches.

Alvin Karpis: This easily is the worst verse I've seen from you. The Mentos line was somewhere between clever and stretched. The THOT and crowd lines were pretty good as fillers, but the back half of the verse really didn't do it for me. John Daly has wordplay potential, but you didn't set it up well at all. And Jon Taffer was a little too directly obvious. Moreover, there was nothing personal about this verse (be it direct disses or nameplays) after the opener.

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Murda:

1492 was lol good
But ba Kar d, Bacardi is forced and not in a way that's passable.
Kin line was weak
Defiants punches was cool concept wise, didn't do much for me
Corey'd was wack


Alvin:

Mentos was meh
Dumb THOT was ok, a lazy concept
Opened up for a crowd is LAWLZ good, sounds like something Your Aerness would write
Jon Taffer line was lazy
John Daly was dry



Overall not a great battle. I added this up by points and both came out to 28/50 so I have to judge by who had worse misses.


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Wassup Karp

Heard u & ur redskin broke up cause she's a whore & likes to screw
She said u were the worst date for an Indian since 1492

nice, smooth shit

She loves my dark D, said it's heavy and after I hit she'll be snoring
Biccardi is light... and it usually makes her feel like shit in the morning

nice again, slight stretch for text but feeling it

I can do what u can, let the horror begin when I snatch ur daughter & friends
Your first round was dope bro... now let me show you how I slaughter a Kin

not good but not bad

At bars chicks call u "fuckin clown", he gets denied by the bunches
He couldn't get chicks to write numbers down with Defiant's top punches

lmao liked it

But these body shots will bring that pain to fellas...
Once I hit him in the Corey'd scream like a bitch so loud it'd make Topanga jealous

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You barely beat Amen, I mean the kid was dissin
Yea you stepped on Mentos but ya verse was far from mint condition

nah not good man. good idea but it doesnt work imo

I pull dimes w/ ease, they always fall in love son
I’m intelligent & never had a dumb THOT, and well you can’t even fuck one

nice here

This gay bitch never rocked stages, it’s too easy clownin this man
Only time he opened up for a crowd was when he came out to his fam

okay. light jab

Lately ya verses lack substance and you’re jealous of Kar
Homey ya lines need work & Jon Taffer couldn’t help w/ ya Bars

not feeling

You’re not a G, you act sweet as fuck, plus you’re weak n awkward
I bet you turn tricks & fuck w/ a John Daly but I don’t mean the golfer

nice here bro


good shit from both but sho was too consistent. best verse i have seen from him in a long long time. vote murda sho
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I got sho edging, opener and defiant, Karp, this was not u, Thot was eh ok, ur best to me was the john daly line and that was just ok

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opener and defiant line
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thot and almost the closer

pretty much have to echo the mutual feelings here
seems like karp slacked and murda brought that fire

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