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05-02-2016, 11:04 PM
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HE / HIM / FRAC
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Reza 0-0 vs Joe Boston 0-4 - JOE WINS
NBL Season 9 @Reza @Joe Boston
Due Thursday Extension available. Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
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05-03-2016, 07:16 AM
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In... Thinking 12 ok?
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05-03-2016, 08:57 AM
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Ight 12 it is gl
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05-03-2016, 09:28 AM
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Lol I hope Reza is John Hensley an Joe Boston gets his soul removed leaving him at 0-5
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05-03-2016, 09:22 PM
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Went 14 my b
^^nah I'm not john. But ima eat his soul bags
He must be nostalgic... No wonder he wants to see '05 so bad Pfft. Beating me?? That defies logic I craft masterpieces... Meanwhile, the art you display couldn't fill a supply closet. Throw shots that'll make his teeth rattle Gun talk? Please. Your piece wouldn't speak in the beast's castle This isn't personal. We can take sum pictures after I pummel ya... Cuz the last hard bar you brought was in a moldy snickers wrapper Dude's washed up and I'm going to clothes the door on this wack chump Quote:
Neighbors. Tv's. Horses... Ya bitch is always looking for something to mount Now that's an ill concept.. Something you know nothing about Read up on ya. Your always stirring up trouble. But here's something he don't know Nobody likes you... You wouldn't be a person of interest on the tv show |
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05-04-2016, 10:05 AM
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14 lets see how many say my wording n execution off this week lol
Fighting me i dont know where the fuck u think u got ur pride See Rez a dence motherfucker he doesnt understand ill kill em where he resides Hide ur face in shame ur not worthy to face an opponent One right and youll let out such a cry it can rival top 5 of best Barcotic moments U dont condone it ur wifes a slut for yrs ur marraige been on hot rocks Ur like i feel unwanted baby and she'll probably put ur newborn in an Indiana dropbox Talk like ur crew got guns cocked im ready if yall pull on a brother I swear Afeni of yall caught reaching gonna be buried right next to 2pacs mother Hide under ur covers all week bet u cant eat n got the shits Come by on a Friday just to leave ur insides hanging out like Ms Parkers tits They say if the shoe fits wear it bitch u couldnt fit in my eleven His barrel kiss a cheek? fag sprinkles gunpowder trails that lead to a romantic setting Must be forgetting with that pound im a traveler Hope i see resonate shots hit em my kickback break the record sound barrier |
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05-04-2016, 12:00 PM
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Make my day
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^^nah I'm not john. But ima eat his soul bags
He must be nostalgic... No wonder he wants to see '05 so bad this is aight Pfft. Beating me?? That defies logic I craft masterpieces... Meanwhile, the art you display couldn't fill a supply closet. not a fan Throw shots that'll make his teeth rattle Gun talk? Please. Your piece wouldn't speak in the beast's castle not sure what beasts castle is referring to This isn't personal. We can take sum pictures after I pummel ya... Cuz the last hard bar you brought was in a moldy snickers wrapper this is beyond played Dude's washed up and I'm going to clothes the door on this wack chump .... No wonder ya verses lack punch Is there something missing here? Neighbors. Tv's. Horses... Ya bitch is always looking for something to mount Now that's an ill concept.. Something you know nothing about not a fan of this either Read up on ya. Your always stirring up trouble. But here's something he don't know Nobody likes you... You wouldn't be a person of interest on the tv show generic flip and nothing really hitting here vs Fighting me i dont know where the fuck u think u got ur pride See Rez a dence motherfucker he doesnt understand ill kill em where he resides dense* pretty generic flip but its a lite hit Hide ur face in shame ur not worthy to face an opponent One right and youll let out such a cry it can rival top 5 of best Barcotic moments this doesn't really work U dont condone it ur wifes a slut for yrs ur marraige been on hot rocks Ur like i feel unwanted baby and she'll probably put ur newborn in an Indiana dropbox this is a miss Talk like ur crew got guns cocked im ready if yall pull on a brother I swear Afeni of yall caught reaching gonna be buried right next to 2pacs mother aight.. Hide under ur covers all week bet u cant eat n got the shits Come by on a Friday just to leave ur insides hanging out like Ms Parkers tits not a fan They say if the shoe fits wear it bitch u couldnt fit in my eleven His barrel kiss a cheek? fag sprinkles gunpowder trails that lead to a romantic setting not a fan of this either Must be forgetting with that pound im a traveler Hope i see resonate shots hit em my kickback break the record sound barrier you fucked a decent concept with shitty wording Fairly close but I got JB takin the dub with better attempts and a couple more lite hits. v/ JB
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05-06-2016, 10:34 AM
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05-07-2016, 05:06 PM
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tutankhamen
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Pfft. Beating me?? That defies logic
I craft masterpieces... Meanwhile, the art you display couldn't fill a supply closet. Vs Talk like ur crew got guns cocked im ready if yall pull on a brother I swear Afeni of yall caught reaching gonna be buried right next to 2pacs mother Yes Joe, at least in my opinion, your execution and wording is all over the place and still very off. Idk what to tell u fam, do you I guess. Still feels like you're trying to say to much & in too much detail. No hate but to me you're like the silkk da shocker of text. Thats the best way I can describe it. Reza was equally as bad to me but had much better wording. Wording is just a caveat tho, the creativity factor and punch lines trump wording and structure. I gotta go with boston for having the better concepts even though he butchered the fuck outta them. I can't get past reza having a hard bar/candy concept, and everything after that was weak. I didn't even understand the beast castle bar, what does that mean. You still got a lot of work to do Joe but u got this one barely. Vote- Joe
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05-08-2016, 06:42 AM
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^^nah I'm not john. But ima eat his soul bags
He must be nostalgic... No wonder he wants to see '05 so bad eh Pfft. Beating me?? That defies logic I craft masterpieces... Meanwhile, the art you display couldn't fill a supply closet. not great... Throw shots that'll make his teeth rattle Gun talk? Please. Your piece wouldn't speak in the beast's castle don't get what you talkin bout here... only thing that come to mind is I used a bar bout beauty & the beast wit the candlestick is this similar? to keep it 100 I can't even tell what u mean by the wording This isn't personal. We can take sum pictures after I pummel ya... Cuz the last hard bar you brought was in a moldy snickers wrapper not a fan Dude's washed up and I'm going to clothes the door on this wack chump Quote: Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post i boxed since i was 15 stopped in my mid 20s .... No wonder ya verses lack punch okay Neighbors. Tv's. Horses... Ya bitch is always looking for something to mount Now that's an ill concept.. Something you know nothing about lol..... Read up on ya. Your always stirring up trouble. But here's something he don't know Nobody likes you... You wouldn't be a person of interest on the tv show aight vs. Fighting me i dont know where the fuck u think u got ur pride See Rez a dence motherfucker he doesnt understand ill kill em where he resides this is solid Hide ur face in shame ur not worthy to face an opponent One right and youll let out such a cry it can rival top 5 of best Barcotic moments okay U dont condone it ur wifes a slut for yrs ur marraige been on hot rocks Ur like i feel unwanted baby and she'll probably put ur newborn in an Indiana dropbox eh Talk like ur crew got guns cocked im ready if yall pull on a brother I swear Afeni of yall caught reaching gonna be buried right next to 2pacs mother I gotta say some bout this one yo... is that supposed to read 'if any"? her name was pronounced Ah-feeny... maybe I'm missin somethin though but this didn't hit to me Hide under ur covers all week bet u cant eat n got the shits Come by on a Friday just to leave ur insides hanging out like Ms Parkers tits weak execution to me They say if the shoe fits wear it bitch u couldnt fit in my eleven His barrel kiss a cheek? fag sprinkles gunpowder trails that lead to a romantic setting wording was off but the concept wasn't bad Must be forgetting with that pound im a traveler Hope i see resonate shots hit em my kickback break the record sound barrier ...aight this was close but I thought Boston got eem Reza had more misses. Rez a dence was a stiff jab from Joe a couple concepts wit some potential too, and reza didn't have a lot I liked here v/ Joe boston |
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05-08-2016, 01:22 PM
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Reza: talk in the beast's castle, ill concept
Joe: 2Pac's mother Both came inconsistent. But Reza less so. That talk in the beast's castle punch was fire imo. Vote = Reza |
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05-09-2016, 08:28 PM
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HE / HIM / FRAC
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^^nah I'm not john. But ima eat his soul bags
He must be nostalgic... No wonder he wants to see '05 so bad Ok opener but it doesn't really hit Joe Pfft. Beating me?? That defies logic I craft masterpieces... Meanwhile, the art you display couldn't fill a supply closet. not really feeling it. Light Throw shots that'll make his teeth rattle Gun talk? Please. Your piece wouldn't speak in the beast's castle If this is beauty and the beast that could be dope but the way it's done is so unclear This isn't personal. We can take sum pictures after I pummel ya... Cuz the last hard bar you brought was in a moldy snickers wrapper God no Dude's washed up and I'm going to clothes the door on this wack chump .... No wonder ya verses lack punch I dig that it's personal but the flip is really basic Neighbors. Tv's. Horses... Ya bitch is always looking for something to mount Now that's an ill concept.. Something you know nothing about there really isn't much to this. I get what you're going for in going but ways but it really doesn't do that Read up on ya. Your always stirring up trouble. But here's something he don't know Nobody likes you... You wouldn't be a person of interest on the tv show flip is bland Fighting me i dont know where the fuck u think u got ur pride See Rez a dence motherfucker he doesnt understand ill kill em where he resides stretched as hell Hide ur face in shame ur not worthy to face an opponent One right and youll let out such a cry it can rival top 5 of best Barcotic moments you're referencing Barcotic but this feels like a weak punch directed at him U dont condone it ur wifes a slut for yrs ur marraige been on hot rocks Ur like i feel unwanted baby and she'll probably put ur newborn in an Indiana dropbox kind of works? The end of the punch has so little sting and the execution is weird Talk like ur crew got guns cocked im ready if yall pull on a brother I swear Afeni of yall caught reaching gonna be buried right next to 2pacs mother basic but works Hide under ur covers all week bet u cant eat n got the shits Come by on a Friday just to leave ur insides hanging out like Ms Parkers tits seen so many Friday bars... Basic execution They say if the shoe fits wear it bitch u couldnt fit in my eleven His barrel kiss a cheek? fag sprinkles gunpowder trails that lead to a romantic setting cute but not feeling Must be forgetting with that pound im a traveler Hope i see resonate shots hit em my kickback break the record sound barrier Reza nate? What is that really supposed to be? Weird delivery too That shouldn't be 14. Joe got it with the afeni line V/joe |
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