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Old 10-25-2013, 08:45 AM   #1
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My skillset is sharper. The spiritual father to millions of authors and literary scholars.
On a mission to conquer until your final will is dishonored.
What I’ve written is dogma, it transcends simple limitations of genre.
I’ll kill your supporters. The way I efficiently cut through your roster you’d think I was officially sponsored by big-industry loggers.
Simply, I’m smarter. My position is stronger than vehicular armor,
It marks a significant departure from these other submissions of fodder.
My word is vivid and implicitly chartered, it’s like a mixture of the Magna Carta and Scandinavian saga.
You sit there and ponder in conditions of squalor awaiting the final bliss of nirvana.
Witness the horror, I make you describe the event like a personal injury lawyer.
You’re the type of person to pass someone in the street and tip your Fedora.
Just don’t even bother. There is no chance for you to defeat me when focused.
I grow tired of all those recently quoted, would need to clone myself to find a decent opponent.
Your appearance was noted and then dismissed perfectly, you can’t tire of these recurring themes,
Each line constructed urgently with a fervent speed - the surplus exceeds 10 to the power of 303,
I’m disturbing the peace, you disperse from the scene,
Rhyme is mine - I own the majority, the deed and the purchase receipt.
In other terms, if you search for the beef I’ll serve you extra-sized portions,
Your style is best described often as the early onset of boredom,
You should exercise caution because I pressurize organs.
I only insult opponents with a sense of decorum, and set alight forums with impressive rhymes that exemplify ‘Awesome.’
Step aside you’re done, because my train of thought could turn your brains to naught,
Compared to me you’re like a grain of salt.
I remain appalled at your basic faults, and shouldn’t have to explain it all.
But let’s explain how I’ll break your skull with bare hands driving nails through your cranial wall.
I’ll fillet your corpse in ways that could confuse and impress a professional sushi chef,
I’m truly a threat. While your self-opinion suffers from the Dunning-Kruger effect.
You only present the illusion of depth like a parallax or parallel lines,
Each paragraph of battle rap has a patent design,
The most vigorous word deliverist with a handful of rhymes for any language and time.
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Old 10-26-2013, 05:57 PM   #2
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This is flames

Got me wanting to write now
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Old 10-26-2013, 06:08 PM   #3
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Word. Dope syllable usage zyg, you merked this joint all the way through.
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Old 10-27-2013, 03:16 PM   #4
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Just don’t even bother. There is no chance for you to defeat me when focused.
I grow tired of all those recently quoted, would need to clone myself to find a decent opponent.

Got damnnn

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Old 10-27-2013, 05:44 PM   #5
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This shit was dope as fuck. Been awhile since I read anything from you and forgot how intricate each line of your verses are. Several lines stood out to me as quote worthy, but the one that stood out the most is the one that Gamble quoted. Dope forreal. I think if you ever tried to battle someone with lines like this they would no show just because they'd seem stupid in comparison. Real talk. Keep dropping zy.
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Old 10-28-2013, 04:38 AM   #6
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"I found out just recently that other people rhyme too"

That about sums this verse up. It's awesome in its condescension and ego. This isn't brash or cocky. It's supremely confident. The declarative sentences and unforced rhymes really emphasize that. If you're familiar with Roger Federer, this reminds me of those interviews he does from time to time when he says a lower-tier opponent should be honored that they were able to push him to a third set.
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Old 10-28-2013, 09:24 AM   #7
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Might do a simple but forceful one just like this, very interesting read.
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Old 10-28-2013, 10:43 AM   #8
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yea. this was ill. i know i've read (most) your other battle raps, i couldn't recall them off the top, but this seemed the most polished, and probably the most potent.

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Old 10-28-2013, 10:51 AM   #9
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Old 10-28-2013, 12:36 PM   #10
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dope shit bruh

keep that pen moving!
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Old 10-28-2013, 11:56 PM   #11
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Old 10-29-2013, 05:12 AM   #12
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Rhyme is mine - I own the majority, the deed and the purchase receipt.



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Old 10-29-2013, 07:47 PM   #13
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About time. This reminds me of the fire you had when you were a new person here! Props.
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Old 10-29-2013, 08:00 PM   #14
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Old 10-29-2013, 08:35 PM   #15
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one of my all time favorites...have read every single battle rap. they are all beast. your getting more intune with slanting your rhymes which in my view is making your shit even more appealing. its not so rigid as it used to be.. its way more free and fluid, gives it a little more pop, fuckin dope.

whole first scheme was money. first bar was flames.. big industry loggers, recently quoted clone decent opponent. confuse and impress professional sushi shef??

holy shit, just so original. well done sir. please post more often
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zygote pieces so fun to rap

with sick instrumentals shit is sick
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How many of these dis he do. I think even he lost count dropped like 2 nattle rap 5's or maybe 9's.. Idk. Dude was pure
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