06-08-2020, 02:42 AM | #1 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2016
Posts: 1,482
Battle Record: 6-15
Rep Power: 25972892 |
Semi Finals: SMaSH Vs. evaD - EVAD WINS
8-Man Show N' Prove Semi-Finals!! Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due Thursday by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines @SMaSH @evaD |
06-08-2020, 11:23 AM | #2 |
Senior Member
Join Date: May 2020
Posts: 697
Battle Record: 19-10
Champed - BA Show And Prove
- Summer Classic XI
Rep Power: 4156643 |
Ahh my all-dishin for the final
Ready whenever |
06-08-2020, 02:35 PM | #3 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Apr 2016
Posts: 138
Battle Record: 4-7
Rep Power: 3284962 |
Cool...
|
06-13-2020, 01:10 AM | #4 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Apr 2016
Posts: 138
Battle Record: 4-7
Rep Power: 3284962 |
This coulda went from a skirmish to a full brawl....now I'm finna murder this fool y'all
Cuz when I show this Davey boy... Smiths.... It's not the British bulldog If you tubed into the last round, shit was sad ...talk about an easy path We know you gay.... You bottom right? Got put In the best position to skip an ad But you'll be dead in no time, why waste bullets from a 45 But it's no prob, compare him to spongebob just another square wit no drive You can't tell the difference? I know you hear it... And y'all don't like gun bars? But you should fear it Cuz I'll shoot his father and his son... Till they both have a Holy Spirit Didn't like my audition bar? Well all yours remedial , couldn't measure upto me in any show So STAND UP just to get stomped by a big ass force like a ludacris video I'm tired of the fake niggas tactics still, bout as hard as a dafodil you Prolly a rat.... Unable to preform good without singing like Beyonce acting skills And for me.... There is no need for a boast my punching power really makes me a goat Cuz Dave could be off the weed and the coke and it still wouldn't cushion the blow IDK why I sent the verse I shoulda just posted.... Oh well |
06-13-2020, 01:24 AM | #5 |
Senior Member
Join Date: May 2020
Posts: 697
Battle Record: 19-10
Champed - BA Show And Prove
- Summer Classic XI
Rep Power: 4156643 |
“SMaSH"
ima open without a punch, fuck it, just something I wanna say.. if I was in a newcomer tourney after 4 years id be fucking ashamed. I put in work to earn that capital.. what i write down is the same this lil bitch couldn't hold down a shift long enough to type out his own name This verse inspired by Aero, dudes SC battle was a fly caper I got a loada stories to throw you off too but mine'll be a skyscraper Respect to FGR and Wanderer, but worthy he’s never been you're only here to make up numbers, you should’ve been seeded eleventeen Inc whats with these losers you keep feeding me? its like a fall-guy platter cuz I'm a problem and you aint seeing me.....like #alllivesmatter speaking of race relations, it takes one call to mack your bitch She pull up skrt and slides her back end out if you really catch my drift so let this be a lesson man, this time you're fucked and ill warn ya Dave roll with a Beckham gang..my Set Pieces'll curl you up in the corner |
06-13-2020, 09:19 PM | #6 |
low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,738
Battle Record: 37-28
Champed - GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II
Rep Power: 15446142 |
Smash:
This coulda went from a skirmish to a full brawl....now I'm finna murder this fool y'all Cuz when I show this Davey boy... Smiths.... It's not the British bulldog ^ had to google but was decent overall If you tubed into the last round, shit was sad ...talk about an easy path We know you gay.... You bottom right? Got put In the best position to skip an ad ^ I AM OFFENDED lol jp was an alright connection but execution could have been better But you'll be dead in no time, why waste bullets from a 45 But it's no prob, compare him to spongebob just another square wit no drive ^ this is alright I'm sure it's been done before You can't tell the difference? I know you hear it... And y'all don't like gun bars? But you should fear it Cuz I'll shoot his father and his son... Till they both have a Holy Spirit ^ lacked execution but a good idea Didn't like my audition bar? Well all yours remedial , couldn't measure upto me in any show So STAND UP just to get stomped by a big ass force like a ludacris video ^ alright pretty decent I'm tired of the fake niggas tactics still, bout as hard as a dafodil you Prolly a rat.... Unable to preform good without singing like Beyonce acting skills ^ ehhhh not feeling it And for me.... There is no need for a boast my punching power really makes me a goat Cuz Dave could be off the weed and the coke and it still wouldn't cushion the blow ^ pretty decent Dave: ima open without a punch, fuck it, just something I wanna say.. if I was in a newcomer tourney after 4 years id be fucking ashamed. ^ decent statement I put in work to earn that capital.. what i write down is the same this lil bitch couldn't hold down a shift long enough to type out his own name ^ hahaha i liked this! This verse inspired by Aero, dudes SC battle was a fly caper I got a loada stories to throw you off too but mine'll be a skyscraper ^ damn dope. Good hit Respect to FGR and Wanderer, but worthy he’s never been you're only here to make up numbers, you should’ve been seeded eleventeen ^ cool idea Inc whats with these losers you keep feeding me? its like a fall-guy platter cuz I'm a problem and you aint seeing me.....like #alllivesmatter ^ ehhhhh okay speaking of race relations, it takes one call to mack your bitch She pull up skrt and slides her back end out if you really catch my drift ^ nice so let this be a lesson man, this time you're fucked and ill warn ya Dave roll with a Beckham gang..my Set Pieces'll curl you up in the corner ^ i don't know wasn't your best Dave got this pretty convincingly to me, had some good consistent punches where Smash had a couple of misses. Twas a decent battle though V/Davey |
06-14-2020, 06:21 AM | #7 | ||
Senior Member
Join Date: Apr 2015
Location: England
Posts: 587
Battle Record: 24-33
Champed - NPL Roast
Rep Power: 7457538 |
Quote:
Quote:
Vote evaD |
||
06-14-2020, 07:55 AM | #8 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2015
Posts: 734
Battle Record: 33-9
Champed - 1-2 Punch Onslaught II
- Tag Team Tournament V
- 1-2 Punch Season III
- Netcees SOL
- Battle Arena
- SOL Season I
- NBL Season XIV
- Netcees Battle League
Rep Power: 8150227 |
bulldog ryhme was off but that punch was fiiire
seen some ad lines, it was aigh spongebob was a miss for me man holy spirit got me like why didnt i think of that concent, i fucks with it heavy stand up was ehhhh dafodils caught me off guard lol punch missed closer ok but drug lines been done like that before vs starting off swingiin with that newcomer line shift was cool throw u off stories lines been done, this was ok.. fly caper tho lol eleventeen was corny but funny fall guy platter lol.. punch coulda been better also drift was ok bckham coulda been way better this was close, smash started off solid but fell off sharply.. same with dave but his lows werent as low.. first time reading smash, solid potential.. this wasnt up to par from what i’ve read from dave but if he gets more consistant he’s gonna be a problem here v dave v dave
__________________
C. O. B. |
06-15-2020, 12:40 PM | #9 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2016
Posts: 681
Rep Power: 2908895 |
I think this was a great battle. I like smash better in this one, to me he had the more consistent verse, where I felt daves slacked off in the middle of the verse. I also liked the skip ad punch. I think it was a great battle tho
|
06-16-2020, 01:17 PM | #10 |
Senior Member
Join Date: May 2020
Posts: 352
Battle Record: 3-6
Rep Power: 1313631 |
Smash
This coulda went from a skirmish to a full brawl....now I'm finna murder this fool y'all Cuz when I show this Davey boy... Smiths.... It's not the British bulldog Light If you tubed into the last round, shit was sad ...talk about an easy path We know you gay.... You bottom right? Got put In the best position to skip an ad I like the cleverness. I feel the skip an ad part backfired though. To me it came off like it was effortless to get past him But you'll be dead in no time, why waste bullets from a 45 But it's no prob, compare him to spongebob just another square wit no drive Above avg filler. Setup should've been more relevant You can't tell the difference? I know you hear it... And y'all don't like gun bars? But you should fear it Cuz I'll shoot his father and his son... Till they both have a Holy Spirit Set up a little wordy but I chuckled Didn't like my audition bar? Well all yours remedial , couldn't measure upto me in any show So STAND UP just to get stomped by a big ass force like a ludacris video Subpar I'm tired of the fake niggas tactics still, bout as hard as a dafodil you Prolly a rat.... Unable to preform good without singing like Beyonce acting skills Wasn't feelin And for me.... There is no need for a boast my punching power really makes me a goat Cuz Dave could be off the weed and the coke and it still wouldn't cushion the blow If this was intended to be kush wp, it's a reach. If not, this was ok. Skip an ad was my favorite, holy spirit was second. You had much better wording overall than the last few battles I've seen from you. 5.5/10 VS evaD ima open without a punch, fuck it, just something I wanna say.. if I was in a newcomer tourney after 4 years id be fucking ashamed. Basic but I chuckled. I put in work to earn that capital.. what i write down is the same this lil bitch couldn't hold down a shift long enough to type out his own name LOTB so far This verse inspired by Aero, dudes SC battle was a fly caper I got a loada stories to throw you off too but mine'll be a skyscraper The 'throw you off' part didn't work Respect to FGR and Wanderer, but worthy he’s never been you're only here to make up numbers, you should’ve been seeded eleventeen Seems like a bar for SC, not this tourney. Inc whats with these losers you keep feeding me? its like a fall-guy platter cuz I'm a problem and you aint seeing me.....like #alllivesmatter Above avg filler speaking of race relations, it takes one call to mack your bitch She pull up skrt and slides her back end out if you really catch my drift Ok ok so let this be a lesson man, this time you're fucked and ill warn ya Dave roll with a Beckham gang..my Set Pieces'll curl you up in the corner Wasn't feelin The first two lines i liked more than Smash's best two lines. All you had to do was not fumble the rest of the verse. Mission accomplished. 6.5/10 Vote: evaD |
07-05-2020, 09:01 PM | #11 |
NJ Devil
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 12,042
Battle Record: Who Cares
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Rep Power: 84181417 |
Dave wins
__________________
Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk |
|
|