06-16-2020, 08:33 PM | #1 |
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Week 10: Mac 1-3 vs. Artifice 0-0 - ART WINS
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more @Mac @Artifice
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06-16-2020, 08:47 PM | #2 |
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check, 10 lines mate
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06-16-2020, 11:23 PM | #3 |
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check, 10 sounds good.
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06-19-2020, 11:33 AM | #4 |
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I peeped ur body of work, someone give the coroner a call
cuz i'm Art so when I spray cans u end up all over the walls this battle & a spotlight? A lot of lines on your plate but beef w/ a Mac I'll devour... along w/ the fries and a shake in the time that it takes to put your best foot forward chump i'll cut it off, that's a leg up for me & leavin' u more than stumped ur forrest gump with a forward slump, stupid is as stupid does only win's against Sinacog? God, no punch that's just brutal cuz u're less than impressive so gettin' ur second's just a wack thought watch me fold Mac in half, put him in a bag & I ain't talkin' a laptop |
06-20-2020, 07:55 PM | #7 |
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ARTIFICE
i see you havent been the best partner, or the most frisky cuz ur girl has kept her legs open for me so long... something smells fishy so u must not be that tasty snack 10/10 girls that tasted Artificial flavours agree they'd rather eat Mac I don't mean to attack ur family, or crush their confidence UK needed ur mom to top off Brexit, a jump and boom they're a new continent attend the consequences, this topical guy wont bare the fatigue so if you wanna try NBL.. you're better off champing that 3-man league talking bout leagues, I know a game that makes Art scream anyone that LOL's with him it's cuz they're both playin in the same team |
06-21-2020, 02:33 PM | #8 |
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Art:
I peeped ur body of work, someone give the coroner a call cuz i'm Art so when I spray cans u end up all over the walls ^ I've seen this angle before but the name tie in makes it alright this battle & a spotlight? A lot of lines on your plate but beef w/ a Mac I'll devour... along w/ the fries and a shake ^ could have been worded a little better imo but is decent in the time that it takes to put your best foot forward chump i'll cut it off, that's a leg up for me & leavin' u more than stumped ^ cool i liked this ur forrest gump with a forward slump, stupid is as stupid does only win's against Sinacog? God, no punch that's just brutal cuz ^ also seen the sinacog/no punch combo before but still lol u're less than impressive so gettin' ur second's just a wack thought watch me fold Mac in half, put him in a bag & I ain't talkin' a laptop ^ Thought this was a nice closer Mac: i see you havent been the best partner, or the most frisky cuz ur girl has kept her legs open for me so long... something smells fishy ^ bland used concept so u must not be that tasty snack 10/10 girls that tasted Artificial flavours agree they'd rather eat Mac ^ Thought this was an alright angle I don't mean to attack ur family, or crush their confidence UK needed ur mom to top off Brexit, a jump and boom they're a new continent ^ think this is over my head? Or just doesn't hit attend the consequences, this topical guy wont bare the fatigue so if you wanna try NBL.. you're better off champing that 3-man league ^ think you got your leagues confused as NBL is an Australian/New Zealand basketball league as opposed to the 3 man league you're referring to talking bout leagues, I know a game that makes Art scream anyone that LOL's with him it's cuz they're both playin in the same team ^ i see what you tried to do but wording wasn't great Though Art is more of the topical head here he showed a veterans presence nothing too flashy but a bunch of jabs that pushed him over the top, Mac you're a newer dude I'd advise you to work on creativity on your punches make them relevant and just fine tune your wording make your punches a little harsher and you'll be fine. Decent battle gents V/Art |
06-21-2020, 06:28 PM | #9 |
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I peeped ur body of work, someone give the coroner a call
cuz i'm Art so when I spray cans u end up all over the walls Ok opener but can anything is done to death this battle & a spotlight? A lot of lines on your plate but beef w/ a Mac I'll devour... along w/ the fries and a shake Beef wp is ok in the name flip I guess in the time that it takes to put your best foot forward chump i'll cut it off, that's a leg up for me & leavin' u more than stumped Decent ur forrest gump with a forward slump, stupid is as stupid does only win's against Sinacog? God, no punch that's just brutal cuz Lol u're less than impressive so gettin' ur second's just a wack thought watch me fold Mac in half, put him in a bag & I ain't talkin' a laptop Nice closer i see you havent been the best partner, or the most frisky cuz ur girl has kept her legs open for me so long... something smells fishy statementish so u must not be that tasty snack 10/10 girls that tasted Artificial flavours agree they'd rather eat Mac Ehh I don't mean to attack ur family, or crush their confidence UK needed ur mom to top off Brexit, a jump and boom they're a new continent Don’t think this makes sense? attend the consequences, this topical guy wont bare the fatigue so if you wanna try NBL.. you're better off champing that 3-man league Ok talking bout leagues, I know a game that makes Art scream anyone that LOL's with him it's cuz they're both playin in the same team Don’t get it? Vote - Artifice He had some good name flips and better concepts |
06-23-2020, 09:13 PM | #10 |
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Upping for more votes
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06-23-2020, 09:52 PM | #11 |
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walls was ok
sinacog was funny vs nothing yikes. i was once terrible, but Blue Bayou helped me become better.. i think he could help u guys too.. hit em up on the PM.. give em whatever bars u can think of daily, he was a great help to me and i was never a bother anyway, v artifice
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06-26-2020, 11:58 PM | #12 |
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I peeped ur body of work, someone give the coroner a call
cuz i'm Art so when I spray cans u end up all over the walls HMM, OK this battle & a spotlight? A lot of lines on your plate but beef w/ a Mac I'll devour... along w/ the fries and a shake OK in the time that it takes to put your best foot forward chump i'll cut it off, that's a leg up for me & leavin' u more than stumped COOL ur forrest gump with a forward slump, stupid is as stupid does only win's against Sinacog? God, no punch that's just brutal cuz DIDNT REALLY UNDERSTAND THIS ONE u're less than impressive so gettin' ur second's just a wack thought watch me fold Mac in half, put him in a bag & I ain't talkin' a laptop COOL NAMEFLIP VS i see you havent been the best partner, or the most frisky cuz ur girl has kept her legs open for me so long... something smells fishy HMM, OK so u must not be that tasty snack 10/10 girls that tasted Artificial flavours agree they'd rather eat Mac I SEE YOUR ANGLE BUT THIS SOUNDED RATHER CORNY TO ME I don't mean to attack ur family, or crush their confidence UK needed ur mom to top off Brexit, a jump and boom they're a new continent DIDN'T UNDERSTAND THIS ONE, WASN'T COHESIVE attend the consequences, this topical guy wont bare the fatigue so if you wanna try NBL.. you're better off champing that 3-man league OK talking bout leagues, I know a game that makes Art scream anyone that LOL's with him it's cuz they're both playin in the same team HMM, THIS ONE'S A MISS FOR ME I got Artifice taking the W here, much more structured and consistent verse compared to Mac. ya'll stay up. peace. |
06-27-2020, 10:30 PM | #13 |
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Art wins
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