06-16-2020, 08:35 PM | #1 |
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Week 10 SPOTLIGHT: UserName vs. Barcotic - USER WINS
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 16 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more Cant remember if you guys were going Pics or Not so sort it out @Barcotic @UserName
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06-16-2020, 08:39 PM | #2 |
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You call it, since you're also busy w SC I'll drop before Fri.
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06-16-2020, 08:52 PM | #3 |
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16 preferably. 20 at the most.
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I will drop 20 tmr. U will be inspired
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Look, buddy...
When ya bodyweight hit 3 hunnid, it queued a frightening humility You're the only Huge Name here that has nothing to do with writing ability I maul most, earning wins despite flawed votes. I'm the best at this art Next time I take a Handout, it'll be in the compost w/ the rest of your parts Careful, a single shot means farewell when I'm blasting Hollows cook raw. Chicago football; 1st Down the Bear'll have you Passing You'll be running like your wet farts if the tec sparks on the fly, bet The only Gun Powder you're using helps with stretch marks on your biceps Obese 'n hella soft, mixed w/ gay. Think you'd ever rob this estate? Approach Bar's..I'll make you a Spirit and leave your Jello Shot w/ the Tray This is NOT a Simple Jack && the blasts are awful-sounding I'll bring this Tropic Thunder that could blow the black off robert downey The crime will not be fast or untold. I cannot relax on a known softy It's fate, not mean. Baywatch scene; I'll make a Splash with a Slow Body I'm not certain its fact, but is every orange haired person a fat loser? Seeking help for food addiction is the only way you'd work on an Ab,User Your waist is big, holmes. Pray it shrinks, go for loss Given the # of floors you Make Shift, you'll need something of thattt^nature to escape the sinkhole you cause You're beaten, bitch. Your speech is twisted & lip is busted U are rocked. Alarm clock; you went to Sleep the Minute I hit your Button 20
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06-20-2020, 10:03 AM | #6 |
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They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit
Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is? Depression's got him, alone in the garage thinking he lost life clearly it inspired your girl the way she uses her mouth to exhaust pipe Talks like he gets ladies, probably lays out a flattering cheese board …Then go to his crib, and more pigs walk out than Atlanta’s police force Listen dawg, I know I joked your girl was a pig and all But that’s just cuz after I stretched her, she can only shop at Big & Tall Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines I’m not saying I’m the best, but I make it work as a hobby & After this, the only spotlight you’ll be in, is the search for your body This week’s a 2 for 1, it’s goat herdin’ the way I’m roping kids Pockets? I’m hitting Neighborin’ Bars harder than COVID did Everyone at NC laughs at you, and i know this guy gets bent When he drops and the 'Cord explodes like his last suicide attempt High scholars will laugh when this guy hollers If he’s cashing checks, they’re all from Ruth and they totaled to five dollars You go to work all day, you should know you can’t fade the Tropics Meanwhile I got my feet up at your crib, gettin’ head while your baby watches
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Bar - Huge name as cool, Chicago could've been dope, nigga said wet farts....gun powder st8, Jello shot is dope, tropic thunder decent... Baywatch ehhhh, sinkhole...we get it he's fat, alarm clock decent closer
User - The Meg funny, shark tattoo type shit...pigs walk out is fire, Big and Tall is aight, lean cusine made me smile, 90s shit, spotlight was fire too, COVID aight, rest is kinda ehh...I feel like Wayne or someone said something like your closer Spotlight...pigs walk out...jelly shot were my top 3 I got User in cool battle. Salute Last edited by BodySnatcher; 06-20-2020 at 11:07 AM. |
06-20-2020, 12:33 PM | #8 |
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When ya bodyweight hit 3 hunnid, it queued a frightening humility
You're the only Huge Name here that has nothing to do with writing ability nice opener I maul most, earning wins despite flawed votes. I'm the best at this art Next time I take a Handout, it'll be in the compost w/ the rest of your parts ok Careful, a single shot means farewell when I'm blasting Hollows cook raw. Chicago football; 1st Down the Bear'll have you Passing nah You'll be running like your wet farts if the tec sparks on the fly, bet The only Gun Powder you're using helps with stretch marks on your biceps nah Obese 'n hella soft, mixed w/ gay. Think you'd ever rob this estate? Approach Bar's..I'll make you a Spirit and leave your Jello Shot w/ the Tray cool I liked this This is NOT a Simple Jack && the blasts are awful-sounding I'll bring this Tropic Thunder that could blow the black off robert downey thats played The crime will not be fast or untold. I cannot relax on a known softy It's fate, not mean. Baywatch scene; I'll make a Splash with a Slow Body decent, execution hurt it I'm not certain its fact, but is every orange haired person a fat loser? Seeking help for food addiction is the only way you'd work on an Ab,User ok Your waist is big, holmes. Pray it shrinks, go for loss Given the # of floors you Make Shift, you'll need something of thattt^nature to escape the sinkhole you cause no You're beaten, bitch. Your speech is twisted & lip is busted U are rocked. Alarm clock; you went to Sleep the Minute I hit your Button no 2 good 2 ok 1 decent 5 misses Vs They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is? damn lol Depression's got him, alone in the garage thinking he lost life clearly it inspired your girl the way she uses her mouth to exhaust pipe nah Talks like he gets ladies, probably lays out a flattering cheese board …Then go to his crib, and more pigs walk out than Atlanta’s police force good Listen dawg, I know I joked your girl was a pig and all But that’s just cuz after I stretched her, she can only shop at Big & Tall ehh nah Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines decent I’m not saying I’m the best, but I make it work as a hobby & After this, the only spotlight you’ll be in, is the search for your body fire This week’s a 2 for 1, it’s goat herdin’ the way I’m roping kids Pockets? I’m hitting Neighborin’ Bars harder than COVID did good again Everyone at NC laughs at you, and i know this guy gets bent When he drops and the 'Cord explodes like his last suicide attempt nahhh High scholars will laugh when this guy hollers If he’s cashing checks, they’re all from Ruth and they totaled to five dollars corny You go to work all day, you should know you can’t fade the Tropics Meanwhile I got my feet up at your crib, gettin’ head while your baby watches nah 4 good 1 decent 5 misses Pretty cool battle here, I expected barc to win and I thought he had it until I tallied the bars and saw username had more solid hits, both had the same amount of misses but user had the better hits. Vote UserName |
06-20-2020, 12:40 PM | #9 |
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Barcotic
I maul most, earning wins despite flawed votes. I'm the best at this art Next time I take a Handout, it'll be in the compost w/ the rest of your parts - Flow and multi's here were spot on. You'll be running like your wet farts if the tec sparks on the fly, bet The only Gun Powder you're using helps with stretch marks on your biceps - lol made me chuckle. Obese 'n hella soft, mixed w/ gay. Think you'd ever rob this estate? Approach Bar's..I'll make you a Spirit and leave your Jello Shot w/ the Tray - hate gun bars but this worked on multiple levels so it gets a pass. The crime will not be fast or untold. I cannot relax on a known softy It's fate, not mean. Baywatch scene; I'll make a Splash with a Slow Body - wordplay was decent but I'm feeling your flow and multi's man. Even the bars I left out were smooth in that department. I'm not certain its fact, but is every orange haired person a fat loser? Seeking help for food addiction is the only way you'd work on an Ab,User - this was cool but could be worded differently - I don't think someone who seeks helps technically works on an abuser... . nitpicking, I know. But I like lines that work both ways flawlessly. Good verse overall, flow was butter. Good multi's. I've seen better wordplay from you before but this still was enjoyable. UserName They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is? - lol good opener. Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines - haha. Made me chuckle. This week’s a 2 for 1, it’s goat herdin’ the way I’m roping kids Pockets? I’m hitting Neighborin’ Bars harder than COVID did - Clever way to flip your two battles this week. Everyone at NC laughs at you, and i know this guy gets bent When he drops and the 'Cord explodes like his last suicide attempt - lol. I sometimes feel Barc isn't far off from this... or a school shooting. You go to work all day, you should know you can’t fade the Tropics Meanwhile I got my feet up at your crib, gettin’ head while your baby watches - now this was a mental picture I could've done without lol... but savage all the same. Cool verse overall, User. Flow and multi's on point. Damn you two reminded me I need to work on my flow and shorten up my bars in a battle sense cuz this was impressive. So I got 5-5 here. Hmm. If I got to edge it to one, I gotta go with the one that had more wordplay in it... just a personal preference for me. This battle will be back and forth regardless. Vote - Barcotic Entertaining guys, thanks.
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06-20-2020, 11:54 PM | #10 |
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Barc...
When ya bodyweight hit 3 hunnid, it queued a frightening humility You're the only Huge Name here that has nothing to do with writing ability and maybe You're beaten, bitch. Your speech is twisted & lip is busted U are rocked. Alarm clock; you went to Sleep the Minute I hit your Button vs. User They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is? Talks like he gets ladies, probably lays out a flattering cheese board …Then go to his crib, and more pigs walk out than Atlanta’s police force best line of the battle to me Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines pretty good I’m not saying I’m the best, but I make it work as a hobby & After this, the only spotlight you’ll be in, is the search for your body Well to sum it up... Barcotic tried and did a real good job, had shit rhyming right ( I read these things in my mind like i'm actually rapping it) did a good job with that. His opener which was kind just a generic you're fat line, but it was good though. As far as punchlines it kind of went all down hill from there. User -- he had some hits and some misses... but the ones I quoted especially liked the atlanta one... and spotlight. Bottom line is he was wittier, I liked his style better he had the harder punches which for me is what its all about... good job to Barcotic though... mos def wasn't a push over but to me it was clearly v---- User
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Huge name Handout Gun powder Baywatch Alarm clock These were all pretty dope to me User Meg Atlanta’s police force Lean cuisine Got Barc taking this. Was feeling his verse more. User seemed like he was reaching more at times. Cool drops from both of you though Vote Barc who i definitely legitimately beat ;) |
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06-21-2020, 06:35 PM | #12 |
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I maul most, earning wins despite flawed votes. I'm the best at this art
Next time I take a Handout, it'll be in the compost w/ the rest of your parts Careful, a single shot means farewell when I'm blasting Hollows cook raw. Chicago football; 1st Down the Bear'll have you Passing You'll be running like your wet farts if the tec sparks on the fly, bet The only Gun Powder you're using helps with stretch marks on your biceps Obese 'n hella soft, mixed w/ gay. Think you'd ever rob this estate? Approach Bar's..I'll make you a Spirit and leave your Jello Shot w/ the Tray This is NOT a Simple Jack && the blasts are awful-sounding I'll bring this Tropic Thunder that could blow the black off robert downey You're beaten, bitch. Your speech is twisted & lip is busted U are rocked. Alarm clock; you went to Sleep the Minute I hit your Button vs They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is? Depression's got him, alone in the garage thinking he lost life clearly it inspired your girl the way she uses her mouth to exhaust pipe Talks like he gets ladies, probably lays out a flattering cheese board …Then go to his crib, and more pigs walk out than Atlanta’s police force Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines I’m not saying I’m the best, but I make it work as a hobby & After this, the only spotlight you’ll be in, is the search for your body those were the punches that landed well for each imo. solid outing by both, I wasn't feeling Barc's opener and really thought User's opener was solid, but I felt like User's verse wasn't hitting as hard toward the end. Barc leaned on the weight punches a bit, but there was still enough variety to make it work imo. Can see this coming down to personal preferences as both drops were dope, but for me... v/ Barcotic |
06-22-2020, 07:49 PM | #13 |
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Huge Name, I felt this needed more just seems like your saying hes fat. Handout, this is nice.. grimey Bears, Yeah Im not sure, dunno that sport very well Gun powder, good little bit complimentary though Jello, like the trey/tray flip jello shot/spirit is ok if kinda played Tropic Thunder, this is a np Baywatch, yeah dope body flip Ab,user, wasnt feeling this as much still ok Makeshift, wasnt feeling as much Alarm Clock, is just ok Ive seen it done before. User: The Meg, dunno is that like a meglodon flip? its alright Exhaust pipe, is ok think the wordings a bit off Pigs, I dunno cool with the current ish, but pigs/police?? Big and Tall, not really feeling this one Lean cuisines, this is cool. seen the microwave/nuke before though Spotlight, this was cool a bit light COVID, I think this concept is pretty played now Suicide, yeah a miss for me, is that a terrorist flip? Ruth, prolly an american thing its ok Baby, yeah didnt really sdee the punch, should have closed out better. V-Barc had a bit more zing |
06-23-2020, 10:06 AM | #14 |
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I had a long vote typed out but the site fucked me when I pressed reply
With that being said I enjoyed this Respect to both My original vote has User edging this with humor and creativity Blessings bro’s
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When ya bodyweight hit 3 hunnid, it queued a frightening humility
You're the only Huge Name here that has nothing to do with writing ability Light jab, but funny & worded well.. probably would've put this in the middle of the verse instead of the opener I maul most, earning wins despite flawed votes. I'm the best at this art Next time I take a Handout, it'll be in the compost w/ the rest of your parts Average.. the wording on the set-up kinda threw me off, seemed erroneous Careful, a single shot means farewell when I'm blasting Hollows cook raw. Chicago football; 1st Down the Bear'll have you Passing Bear'll/barrel kinda played.. I appreciate the internals & the execution You'll be running like your wet farts if the tec sparks on the fly, bet The only Gun Powder you're using helps with stretch marks on your biceps lol @ wet farts.. this was good; fresh concept & delivered directly Obese 'n hella soft, mixed w/ gay. Think you'd ever rob this estate? Approach Bar's..I'll make you a Spirit and leave your Jello Shot w/ the Tray Again, I appreciate the rhyming ability, but this didn't land for me.. seen the bar/spirit/shot/tray connection done too any times for it be impactful.. & calling his fat "Jello" just seemed awkward lol This is NOT a Simple Jack && the blasts are awful-sounding I'll bring this Tropic Thunder that could blow the black off robert downey Fresh connections & worded well.. not a huge punch, but the set-up lent itself well to it The crime will not be fast or untold. I cannot relax on a known softy It's fate, not mean. Baywatch scene; I'll make a Splash with a Slow Body These set-ups, man.. Idk if you're trying to build up the second line for impact or what, but they just read w/ a lot of extraneous verbiage.. I put this in the same category as the Jello Shot bar I'm not certain its fact, but is every orange haired person a fat loser? Seeking help for food addiction is the only way you'd work on an Ab,User Great set-up, but "Ab/User" & "abuser" is too simple & they're not really pronounced similarly Your waist is big, holmes. Pray it shrinks, go for loss Given the # of floors you Make Shift, you'll need something of thattt^nature to escape the sinkhole you cause Nice multies, definitely helped this land.. decent bar, overall You're beaten, bitch. Your speech is twisted & lip is busted U are rocked. Alarm clock; you went to Sleep the Minute I hit your Button Eh closer.. I liked the swag on it, but this didn't really hit hard & was pretty telegraphed vs. They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is? Funny, relevant opener.. no complaints here Depression's got him, alone in the garage thinking he lost life clearly it inspired your girl the way she uses her mouth to exhaust pipe Exhaust pipe kinda played.. decent flip, could've been worded better Talks like he gets ladies, probably lays out a flattering cheese board …Then go to his crib, and more pigs walk out than Atlanta’s police force Clever & worded really well.. this hit Listen dawg, I know I joked your girl was a pig and all But that’s just cuz after I stretched her, she can only shop at Big & Tall Eh, this was a miss Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines Thought you could've worded this to be more impactful.. the concept itself is fire, though I’m not saying I’m the best, but I make it work as a hobby & After this, the only spotlight you’ll be in, is the search for your body Simple & effective, I surprisingly haven't seen the "Spotlight" concept flipped before.. wording was crisp, too This week’s a 2 for 1, it’s goat herdin’ the way I’m roping kids Pockets? I’m hitting Neighborin’ Bars harder than COVID did Light jab.. good wording & straightforward delivery Everyone at NC laughs at you, and i know this guy gets bent When he drops and the 'Cord explodes like his last suicide attempt Another decent jab.. kinda simple, but execution was clean High scholars will laugh when this guy hollers If he’s cashing checks, they’re all from Ruth and they totaled to five dollars Eh.. this needed more to make it land for me You go to work all day, you should know you can’t fade the Tropics Meanwhile I got my feet up at your crib, gettin’ head while your baby watches Simple ender.. decent generic; would've liked to see you go a little more complex here So this was a pretty close one.. I feel like User's bars were either hit or miss, but his wording & the way he delivered his lines made his misses read slightly better than Barc's.. I liked Barc's verse & I'm a big fan of multies & relevant set-ups, but I felt like his connections were pretty stretched in parts & relied heavily on the rhyme scheme to carry them.. it was still an above average verse, but left something to be desired.. I'm leaning towards User as his punches landed cleaner & his bars did everything Barc's did w/out the excessive wordage.. dope battle, guys v/ UserName
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When ya bodyweight hit 3 hunnid, it queued a frightening humility
You're the only Huge Name here that has nothing to do with writing ability lol set up was good, but the punch is pretty meh.. basic, okay jab I maul most, earning wins despite flawed votes. I'm the best at this art Next time I take a Handout, it'll be in the compost w/ the rest of your parts mann handout is doope conceptually, i like these kindve bars...but it really bothers me you used the setup to neg mention voting instead of making a relevant setup...no solid tie in to the handout misdirection, but i still like this because its a cool fresh concept Careful, a single shot means farewell when I'm blasting Hollows cook raw. Chicago football; 1st Down the Bear'll have you Passing maybe its personal preference but ive grown tired of this formulaic gun bar setup youve been doing for a year now...the cypher on RB was dope , this one is kinda avg with some played ideas flipped together You'll be running like your wet farts if the tec sparks on the fly, bet The only Gun Powder you're using helps with stretch marks on your biceps lmao at running like wet farts...lmao i didnt like this at first but its actually quite creative... cool concept i dig it, delivered well Obese 'n hella soft, mixed w/ gay. Think you'd ever rob this estate? Approach Bar's..I'll make you a Spirit and leave your Jello Shot w/ the Tray nah, bunch of played wp and concepts meshed together This is NOT a Simple Jack && the blasts are awful-sounding I'll bring this Tropic Thunder that could blow the black off robert downey lol dug simple jack in the setup..this was a cool crew play The crime will not be fast or untold. I cannot relax on a known softy It's fate, not mean. Baywatch scene; I'll make a Splash with a Slow Body nah.. again with this same gun bar delivery, this i didnt dig as much conceptually .. youve been much better with this approach before I'm not certain its fact, but is every orange haired person a fat loser? Seeking help for food addiction is the only way you'd work on an Ab,User ehh, wording is good but this is just okay to me Your waist is big, holmes. Pray it shrinks, go for loss Given the # of floors you Make Shift, you'll need something of thattt^nature to escape the sinkhole you cause cool conceptually, this is crazy strecthed but the wording is good enough to be smooth enough... cool fat bar You're beaten, bitch. Your speech is twisted & lip is busted U are rocked. Alarm clock; you went to Sleep the Minute I hit your Button nah this is a miss vs. They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is? LMAO. funny fresh take on an often used shark tat personal....dig it Depression's got him, alone in the garage thinking he lost life clearly it inspired your girl the way she uses her mouth to exhaust pipe cant recall seeing an exhaust pipe / girl line like tis before...wording was great, this was funny Talks like he gets ladies, probably lays out a flattering cheese board …Then go to his crib, and more pigs walk out than Atlanta’s police force lmao dope current event punch Listen dawg, I know I joked your girl was a pig and all But that’s just cuz after I stretched her, she can only shop at Big & Tall nah, this is a miss Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines lmao fire. prob lotb for me, wording was perfect I’m not saying I’m the best, but I make it work as a hobby & After this, the only spotlight you’ll be in, is the search for your body pretty nice...good use of the 'spotlight' concept...similar wit bar to his handout misdirection bar... dig it This week’s a 2 for 1, it’s goat herdin’ the way I’m roping kids Pockets? I’m hitting Neighborin’ Bars harder than COVID did ehh, cool attempt but jab at best Everyone at NC laughs at you, and i know this guy gets bent When he drops and the 'Cord explodes like his last suicide attempt lol, not a haymaker but cool discord idea that was executed well High scholars will laugh when this guy hollers If he’s cashing checks, they’re all from Ruth and they totaled to five dollars lol wording prob made this better then it is, but this was a good chuckle...solid personal You go to work all day, you should know you can’t fade the Tropics Meanwhile I got my feet up at your crib, gettin’ head while your baby watches nah, feels like a filler closer...i get the swag attempt but this one didnt resonate for me Pretty solid battle here...I've seen both come better but there was still some good highlights for both... This is a huge contrast of styles so i can somewhat see how votes are split, but Users verse was just more enjoyable to me Both had some misses but Meg and Lean Cuisines were prob my fave lines of the battle for me, and ATL and Spotlight were prob on par with handout and tropic thunder for me.. I liked Users verse better and he gets my vote Vote UserName
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06-23-2020, 09:24 PM | #18 |
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