Aero vs. Ajax {Aero wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

Round Two

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FIGHT!

DUE: Friday, the 12th of June @ 11:59 PM PST aka 3 am on the beast coast

14-20 lines, NO MORE AND NO LESS
The rest you already know, I won't accept tom foolery and fuckery

@Aero
@Ajax

[Aero]

16....

[Ajax]

Fine.

[Ajax]

No more gimmicks...


This token’s whiter than me. Even punks are all laughin’…
His people are marching the streets. He’s in Wisconsin holed up in his Uncle Tom’s Cabin.
You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you;
I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths.
Best believe this African hack is in the red…
The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head.
One uppercut; this battle is BAD news…
This clown will ‘take flight’ like Monty Python’s Flying Circus while I’m relaxin’ sampling craft brews.
You’re a joke. You lack the energy and malice;
I’ll beat you over and over ’til you’re ‘looking at a worse slump’ than Jackie Kennedy in Dallas.
This troubled midget will just never be fly, son…
His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one.
He tapdances 'round the truth. So, ya know this urban ballerina’s lonely...
Watched Magic Mike. Now, he walks up to battles to the background beat from Pony.
Hes a clown. This bitch is just so so loud.
And that fake gunplay only works for the wigger with cornrows crowd...

Goodbye.

[Aero]

Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go
You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote
Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage
Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave
Netflix & chill, rich niggas fuck an entire series she dont even care
Her place is Disney World, the plan's for every baller to finish the season there
Saw your pic Jeremy, the huge nostrils are fucking repulsive
Least you could do's get a nose job, helping police find drugs & explosives
This pale faced Ginger twisted a phrase it made me look twice
I said let's get some sun, he said don't threaten me with a good time
You hate being redheaded, and at forty-five it's a cold fate
but you're having the best time in your old age you can finally go gray
Jax doesn't understand sarcasm, his FB post was a stark display
Shoutout to my teachers who said I'd end up working at Wendy's!! I start today
Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint
Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point

[Zaddy]

This token’s whiter than me. Even punks are all laughin’…
His people are marching the streets. He’s in Wisconsin holed up in his Uncle Tom’s Cabin.
ok
You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you;
I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths.
nah
Best believe this African hack is in the red…
The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head.
nah not feelin, kind of just a corny joke
One uppercut; this battle is BAD news…
This clown will ‘take flight’ like Monty Python’s Flying Circus while I’m relaxin’ sampling craft brews.
nope
You’re a joke. You lack the energy and malice;
I’ll beat you over and over ’til you’re ‘looking at a worse slump’ than Jackie Kennedy in Dallas.
decent
This troubled midget will just never be fly, son…
His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one.
nah
He tapdances 'round the truth. So, ya know this urban ballerina’s lonely...
Watched Magic Mike. Now, he walks up to battles to the background beat from Pony.
Hes a clown. This bitch is just so so loud.
And that fake gunplay only works for the wigger with cornrows crowd...
im honestly just glad this is over


Vs



Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go
You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote
lol ok
Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage
Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave
lmfao
Netflix & chill, rich niggas fuck an entire series she dont even care
Her place is Disney World, the plan's for every baller to finish the season there
no wtf
Saw your pic Jeremy, the huge nostrils are fucking repulsive
Least you could do's get a nose job, helping police find drugs & explosives
ehhh
This pale faced Ginger twisted a phrase it made me look twice
I said let's get some sun, he said don't threaten me with a good time
..what..
You hate being redheaded, and at forty-five it's a cold fate
but
you're having the best time in your old age you can finally go gray
alright
Jax doesn't understand sarcasm, his FB post was a stark display
Shoutout to my teachers who said I'd end up working at Wendy's!! I start today
lol’d
Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint
Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point
nice


Idk maybe I’m not in touch with the UPN style but Ajax verse was pretty painful if we’re being completely honest. Aside from the opener I was just pist off the entire time. No hate. Aero had some funny shit in there, dont think it will work next round but it takes it today.


Vote Aero

[UPN Zuch]

Aero had a good verse, but his misses were rough so it read with a lot of ups and downs. Microwave, Wendy’s, and power point were dope

Ajax had calling station, basket, kennedy, pony. I liked the craft bears wording but it wasn’t a punch. Flowed nice too throughout.

Going Ajax here. Aero had a good verse though.

[Blue Bayou]

This token’s whiter than me. Even punks are all laughin’…
His people are marching the streets. He’s in Wisconsin holed up in his Uncle Tom’s Cabin.
lol good current event dig. nice open
You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you;
I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths.
cool stock/trader personal. calling station is a fresh take, solid jab
Best believe this African hack is in the red…
The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head.
pretty damn racist, but another fresh trader punch. punchline really stretched but the flow doesn't get lost.. i liked this conceptually
One uppercut; this battle is BAD news…
This clown will ‘take flight’ like Monty Python’s Flying Circus while I’m relaxin’ sampling craft brews.
i havent seen this either, but there's enough tie ins to get it.. i imagine the guys are drinking beer in the scene... the idea of uppercutting him while simultaneously drinking beer is a bit much .. this was okay
You’re a joke. You lack the energy and malice;
I’ll beat you over and over ’til you’re ‘looking at a worse slump’ than Jackie Kennedy in Dallas.
dope. this was nice
This troubled midget will just never be fly, son…
His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one.
hahaha
He tapdances 'round the truth. So, ya know this urban ballerina’s lonely...
Watched Magic Mike. Now, he walks up to battles to the background beat from Pony.
lol kinda corny tbh but i chuckled.. this is elevated because of all the great dancer comments he makes
Hes a clown. This bitch is just so so loud.
And that fake gunplay only works for the wigger with cornrows crowd...
nah throwaway... you seem to do this with closers

vs.

Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go
You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote
LOL, this was clever... good open
Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage
Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave
cut the flim to vent is fire. very creative, but i'm upset you used "saw footage of us eating" as opposed to sex tape footage or somehing that wouldve been a lot harder... regardless this was very impressive conceptually
Netflix & chill, rich niggas fuck an entire series she dont even care
Her place is Disney World, the plan's for every baller to finish the season there
i get what you were going for with the netflix/finish the season angle , i didnt like this at first but in hindsight all the tie ins are there and the setup is actually pretty good... this is fresh and hits
Saw your pic Jeremy, the huge nostrils are fucking repulsive
Least you could do's get a nose job, helping police find drugs & explosives
LMAO this was funny and delivered well to me
This pale faced Ginger twisted a phrase it made me look twice
I said let's get some sun, he said don't threaten me with a good time
ehh maybe it's the wording i dunno, but this really fell flat as constructed. miss
You hate being redheaded, and at forty-five it's a cold fate
but you're having the best time in your old age you can finally go gray
lol this is a decently funny jab. wording is really good here which probably helped it land somewhat. funny redhead / old punch
Jax doesn't understand sarcasm, his FB post was a stark display
Shoutout to my teachers who said I'd end up working at Wendy's!! I start today
i dont know if im missing soemthing here...seems like pure filler to me & i usually think most of aeros concepts are funny
Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint
Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point
dope. very creative gunbar thats well worded and delivered here


Mann this is actually a lot closer then i thought it was when i first read this battle... im honeslty a little torn, Ajax was consistently pretty good throughout, but cut the film to vent and power point are the two best bars in the battle for me... On the whole tho i have to edge this to Ajax for being more consistent and having the harder punches... Aero was probably one good bar away from edging this for me , but the wendys and get some sun bars fell really flat for me...ajax i didnt love the flying circus bar and the closer was more of a throwaway diss to NCs then aero tbh, but i do think you had some fresh concepts, had great stock/trader angles, and again were a little less dissappointing in your misses

Pretty fun read. props to both. I have Ajax in an enjoyable close battle

Vote - Ajax

[Barcotic]

This token’s whiter than me. Even punks are all laughin’…
His people are marching the streets. He’s in Wisconsin holed up in his Uncle Tom’s Cabin.
You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you;
I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths.
Best believe this African hack is in the red…
The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head.
This troubled midget will just never be fly, son…
His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one.

Vs.

Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go
You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote
Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage
Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave
Netflix & chill, rich niggas fuck an entire series she dont even care
Her place is Disney World, the plan's for every baller to finish the season there
Saw your pic Jeremy, the huge nostrils are fucking repulsive
Least you could do's get a nose job, helping police find drugs & explosives
Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint
Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point

5-4
Aero deserves the nod here, unlike last rd. IMO
Dope battle tho

[~RustyGunZ~]

2 - 2 Tied up

[evaD]

This token’s whiter than me. Even punks are all laughin’…
His people are marching the streets. He’s in Wisconsin holed up in his Uncle Tom’s Cabin.
It’s personal but it doesn’t seem that clever or witty and even though the setup is short that second bar could’ve been way shorter
You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you;
I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths.
Another decent personal jab
Best believe this African hack is in the red…
The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head.
Bit more harsh, again second bar could’ve been shortened imo
One uppercut; this battle is BAD news…
This clown will ‘take flight’ like Monty Python’s Flying Circus while I’m relaxin’ sampling craft brews.
Lol
You’re a joke. You lack the energy and malice;
I’ll beat you over and over ’til you’re ‘looking at a worse slump’ than Jackie Kennedy in Dallas.
Nice
This troubled midget will just never be fly, son…
His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one.
Nice again although I’m sure I read same concept on here recently
He tapdances 'round the truth. So, ya know this urban ballerina’s lonely...
Watched Magic Mike. Now, he walks up to battles to the background beat from Pony.
Lol nice. Pony rips though.
Hes a clown. This bitch is just so so loud.
And that fake gunplay only works for the wigger with cornrows crowd...
Ok closer



Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go
You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote
Don’t get the in-joke but the wp is cool
Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage
Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave
Lmao this is the most left field diss I’ve seen in a while but it works. Although I bet Ajax hasn’t had a microwave meal ever
Netflix & chill, rich niggas fuck an entire series she dont even care
Her place is Disney World, the plan's for every baller to finish the season there
Decent
Saw your pic Jeremy, the huge nostrils are fucking repulsive
Least you could do's get a nose job, helping police find drugs & explosives
Lol kinda played though
This pale faced Ginger twisted a phrase it made me look twice
I said let's get some sun, he said don't threaten me with a good time
Haha this is cool and well executed
You hate being redheaded, and at forty-five it's a cold fate
but you're having the best time in your old age you can finally go gray
Nice
Jax doesn't understand sarcasm, his FB post was a stark display
Shoutout to my teachers who said I'd end up working at Wendy's!! I start today
Decent
Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint
Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point
Nice closer


Close one here. Ajax had a load of personals which were cool but some came off a bit light. The short bar long bar style was a bit jarring to me as well. Aero came off more polished again with personals and a couple contenders for lotb. Overall I think aero was just more enjoyable to read and had the higher highs

Vote - aero

[~RustyGunZ~]

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[~RustyGunZ~]

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[UserName]

You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you;
I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths.
One uppercut; this battle is BAD news…
This clown will ‘take flight’ like Monty Python’s Flying Circus while I’m relaxin’ sampling craft brews.
This troubled midget will just never be fly, son…
His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one.

vs.

Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go
You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote
This pale faced Ginger twisted a phrase it made me look twice
I said let's get some sun, he said don't threaten me with a good time
You hate being redheaded, and at forty-five it's a cold fate
but you're having the best time in your old age you can finally go gray
Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint
Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point

Came down to 3 lines i liked vs. 4 lines i liked. Usually see Ajax drop much better than this, not sure if he just wasnt inspired this time around or what, but it read kinda sloppy. Aero came correct and scored what, in my mind, is an upset.

V - Aero

[Cashius]

Best believe this African hack is in the red…
The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head.
This troubled midget will just never be fly, son…
His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one.


Vs.



Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage
Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave
Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint
Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point

Tied in quotes but after reading twice more I was feeling Aero a bit more. Felt like his misses were a bit stronger personally. Cool battle, guys.

Vote-Aero

[Coop]

Ajax

This token’s whiter than me. Even punks are all laughin’…
His people are marching the streets. He’s in Wisconsin holed up in his Uncle Tom’s Cabin.
Ok
You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you;
I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths.
Had to look it up. Clever
Best believe this African hack is in the red…
The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head.
These quotations gotta go. This was so-so
One uppercut; this battle is BAD news…
This clown will ‘take flight’ like Monty Python’s Flying Circus while I’m relaxin’ sampling craft brews.
Wasn't feeling
You’re a joke. You lack the energy and malice;
I’ll beat you over and over ’til you’re ‘looking at a worse slump’ than Jackie Kennedy in Dallas.
Hmmm. Maybe?
This troubled midget will just never be fly, son…
His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one.
Aight
He tapdances 'round the truth. So, ya know this urban ballerina’s lonely...
Watched Magic Mike. Now, he walks up to battles to the background beat from Pony.
Almost chuckled
Hes a clown. This bitch is just so so loud.
And that fake gunplay only works for the wigger with cornrows crowd...
This what I've been trying to tell ppl

Other's might be, but I'm not a fan of super short set-ups or excessive quotations. Both detract from the overall bar. Thus, I really only liked rollercoaster & calling station.

5/10


VS

Aero

Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go
You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote
Ok
Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage
Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave
Tf does lobster have to do with anything. Cool twist though
Netflix & chill, rich niggas fuck an entire series she dont even care
Her place is Disney World, the plan's for every baller to finish the season there
Clever. I like
Saw your pic Jeremy, the huge nostrils are fucking repulsive
Least you could do's get a nose job, helping police find drugs & explosives
Aight
This pale faced Ginger twisted a phrase it made me look twice
I said let's get some sun, he said don't threaten me with a good time
Kinda chuckled but you know damn well this didn't rhyme.
You hate being redheaded, and at forty-five it's a cold fate
but you're having the best time in your old age you can finally go gray
Meh
Jax doesn't understand sarcasm, his FB post was a stark display
Shoutout to my teachers who said I'd end up working at Wendy's!! I start today
Above avg filler
Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint
Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point
Clever, but still a gun bar.

6.5/10

The contrast of styles makes this an easy one for me.

Disney > Rollercoaster/Nose Job/Calling station > Discord/TV dinner/Magic Mike


Vote: Aero