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Old 07-05-2020, 09:05 PM   #1
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Old 07-09-2020, 03:38 AM   #2
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people break it down and just put a bolded Nah with no explanation it’s kinda pointless anyway
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Try reading it properly this time maybe
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Based on nothing but my bitterness about losing, dw
GOD... u’ll never stop whining. how much of a faggot is this kid?
More crybaby posts than u can shake a stick at.. so ima let em rattle in ur crib
See u not revered... Its glocks to ur chest fore’ u caught in the throne
Ain’t no Famous Dave’s in here but we’d pay to see ur Rib meat fall off the bone
But congrats on reaching the final! I bet ur needing a moment
Love to say i saw u Smash the last round but u couldn’t even KO that easy opponent
Well u may not of come ur hardest.. but STILL this joker’s a failure
Saved ur best lines for a Rainy Day just to see a downpour of votes in my favour
Keep it old school for ur readers? Them lies I hate.. this faker is killin’ me
Front yard drive by. I’ll ride past & let it fly over ur gate, newspaper delivery
Come this far but u in for a world of trouble now ur stamina’s lost
Yeh u been tryna unlock ur potential... unfortunately from a Pandora’s box
Not been at ease for days. getting this win is somethin u doubt
Funny how the Dread Locks in... & u been doing nothing but pullin ur hair out
Claim u never shook? I’ll come for ur fam...
tuckin the pieces in
Learn ur flesh & blood’s been exposed to me & u wanna Jump right out of ur skin
& u love ur girl’s bed head look but It’s danger if u pound that snatch
Shittt. All that Frisbee... & yet only STDs being thrown around to catch
Team efforts futile so u really wanna test...?? I’ll kill em all & loot
Gimme the wrong answer im taking chunks out ur circle quicker than trivial pursuit
See ur boys can’t track or get to me.. no attack of the century
If Dave see a pack of animals doing their thing it’s an Attenborough documentary
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Old 07-09-2020, 08:46 AM   #3
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Yo

Two months on the site but my name rings out like sonic on the spikes
After 5 years Wand’s only claim to fame is when Barcotic called him Tyke
Everybody gettin outed.. pedophile rings for the famous and rich
Ask Zayn Malik how Wand erection has only EVER been aimed at kids
Can’t believe he even revealed vs Orc with that mugshot picture
Shit was like The Hills Have Eyes, a suspect beard and an ugly sister
This ain’t no street fight son, he gettin rolled with the heat
No wonder his punches are all a stretch when he has Dhalsim’s physique
Wand claims he scrap for a living but it adds an extra relevance
When it looks like ‘Rag and Bone Man’ is both his job AND sexual preference
Everything about his appearance screams ‘interested in male partners’
Shit, if I lit a match up off that stubble the stick would turn into a sparkler
Your fruity cock tales on netcees were never gonna slide
after this war he eatin meals through a straw.. with a pink umbrella on the side
Something missing when all your writtens pedal lies and bullshit
So bullets hitting when I clip-in, he doin bicycle kicks
Not an ounce of fear, strollin up the chopper take off his lid
Only thing sketching ME out? Detectives facial composite.
And yo His girl is so ugly I couldn’t even take a blow job
When I saw her on my bed with legs akimbo.. and the face of Cro Cop
Congrats you made the final, but I want Gold so I’m gonna kill ya
I guess I should take some kinda Pride that I made Wanderlei Silva

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Old 07-10-2020, 02:45 PM   #4
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Wanderer you had a cool verse. Some of your concepts were forced and worded poorly. Newspaper delivery felt like you were trying to do anything to make it work but it fell flat. You did have some good ideas just executed them poorly.

Dave your style is cool. You keep things simple and witty. Throughout you had some nice hitters. Nothing crazy but you were jabbing well.

This was a good battle but Dave got this with better execution and more wit.


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Old 07-15-2020, 06:03 PM   #5
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GOD... u’ll never stop whining. how much of a faggot is this kid?
More crybaby posts than u can shake a stick at.. so ima let em rattle in ur crib
iI really never saw dude whine so this failed as a personal, as a avg punch it weas just that, avg
See u not revered... Its glocks to ur chest fore’ u caught in the throne
Ain’t no Famous Dave’s in here but we’d pay to see ur Rib meat fall off the bone
this I like, could be played onn hjim but idc cuz i never saw it, I dig it
But congrats on reaching the final! I bet ur needing a moment
Love to say i saw u Smash the last round but u couldn’t even KO that easy opponent
low hanging fruit but well utiulized, here the personal hit
Well u may not of come ur hardest.. but STILL this joker’s a failure
Saved ur best lines for a Rainy Day just to see a downpour of votes in my favour
this is on point
Keep it old school for ur readers? Them lies I hate.. this faker is killin’ me
Front yard drive by. I’ll ride past & let it fly over ur gate, newspaper delivery
this hit
Come this far but u in for a world of trouble now ur stamina’s lost
Yeh u been tryna unlock ur potential... unfortunately from a Pandora’s box
nah bro, I see what u tried for but to me this landed flat, didnbt really sting or have much oomph
Not been at ease for days. getting this win is somethin u doubt
Funny how the Dread Locks in... & u been doing nothing but pullin ur hair out
same as aboive, not really feeling this my dude
Claim u never shook? I’ll come for ur fam...
tuckin the pieces in
Learn ur flesh & blood’s been exposed to me & u wanna Jump right out of ur skin
this missed totoally, for me. I truly do not know what u were goin for
& u love ur girl’s bed head look but It’s danger if u pound that snatch
Shittt. All that Frisbee... & yet only STDs being thrown around to catch
kinda cool
Team efforts futile so u really wanna test...?? I’ll kill em all & loot
Gimme the wrong answer im taking chunks out ur circle quicker than trivial pursuit
first I didn't get this, I googled it the nostalgia hit me,. this is fire lmao this was a risky bar bro, but good deal here
See ur boys can’t track or get to me.. no attack of the century
If Dave see a pack of animals doing their thing it’s an Attenborough documentary
no clue what this is about
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Yo

Two months on the site but my name rings out like sonic on the spikes
After 5 years Wand’s only claim to fame is when Barcotic called him Tyke
the setup was dope,. punch was ok, as a whole it was just aight
Everybody gettin outed.. pedophile rings for the famous and rich
Ask Zayn Malik how Wand erection has only EVER been aimed at kids
is this a wayfair thing, I don't get it
Can’t believe he even revealed vs Orc with that mugshot picture
Shit was like The Hills Have Eyes, a suspect beard and an ugly sister
eh so so, not reelly doing much for me
This ain’t no street fight son, he gettin rolled with the heat
No wonder his punches are all a stretch when he has Dhalsim’s physique
stretch dhalsim / mr fantastic joints is all meh, I saw the pic so ok, but it loses steam here cuz this aint a pic battle to me, and it wasn't fresh enough as a regular ole punch, in my OPINION
Wand claims he scrap for a living but it adds an extra relevance
When it looks like ‘Rag and Bone Man’ is both his job AND sexual preference
is that a store?" I think it is, this kinda hits better
Everything about his appearance screams ‘interested in male partners’
Shit, if I lit a match up off that stubble the stick would turn into a sparkler
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Your fruity cock tales on netcees were never gonna slide
after this war he eatin meals through a straw.. with a pink umbrella on the side
simple but funny, this style of punch always appeals to me
Something missing when all your writtens pedal lies and bullshit
So bullets hitting when I clip-in, he doin bicycle kicks
say what
Not an ounce of fear, strollin up the chopper take off his lid
Only thing sketching ME out? Detectives facial composite.
this is dope,. it don't rhyme to me but im sure out accents is wayyy diff
And yo His girl is so ugly I couldn’t even take a blow job
When I saw her on my bed with legs akimbo.. and the face of Cro Cop
lol
Congrats you made the final, but I want Gold so I’m gonna kill ya
I guess I should take some kinda Pride that I made Wanderlei Silva
nice but loses steam cuz u went 2 vintage MMA puynches back to back

when I read this when they posted I thought Dave won


now that I sit here really scrutinizing it I got

vote= Wanderer

he had the harder hits,. Evad felt rushed at points, especially the end
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Old 07-16-2020, 02:07 AM   #6
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Wand had trivial pursuit, famous daves, rattle was okay and newspaper

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Opener, zayn Malik, facial comp, cro cop, wanderlei Silva was cool too

Like Zuch was saying some of Wander's concepts fell flat imo and Dave definitely had some meh stuff he hung on the gay concepts a little too long in my opinion but whatever I think he won here with better concepts and execution. Dope battle fellas
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I got Dave here


Better wording and execution. Some decent ideas from wand, but he just can’t word them in a way where they hit well.

Dave good shit here bro. I enjoy your reads.
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Yeah I got Dave here, Wand started really well if it had been a 10 line battle he could have won but he fell off.
Lotb was daves One Direction bar for me, the Barcoticesque wp killed me.
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But congrats on reaching the final! I bet ur needing a moment
Love to say i saw u Smash the last round but u couldn’t even KO that easy opponent
Well u may not of come ur hardest.. but STILL this joker’s a failure
Saved ur best lines for a Rainy Day just to see a downpour of votes in my favour
Keep it old school for ur readers? Them lies I hate.. this faker is killin’ me
Front yard drive by. I’ll ride past & let it fly over ur gate, newspaper delivery
(this was close to being dope, it's not actually dope, but I'm giving you points for the creativity of it... in the future I'd definitely reword something like this, bud)

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Everybody gettin outed.. pedophile rings for the famous and rich
Ask Zayn Malik how Wand erection has only EVER been aimed at kids
(lol)
Wand claims he scrap for a living but it adds an extra relevance
When it looks like ‘Rag and Bone Man’ is both his job AND sexual preference
Everything about his appearance screams ‘interested in male partners’
Shit, if I lit a match up off that stubble the stick would turn into a sparkler
And yo His girl is so ugly I couldn’t even take a blow job
When I saw her on my bed with legs akimbo.. and the face of Cro Cop

going with Dave here, Wand had a decent little middle section, but the rest whiffed hard for me. Dave sprinkled his hits throughout and had more of them, so it was pretty clear cut from the jump for me.

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