05-21-2015, 02:28 AM | #1 |
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Burn in hell
Stupidity at its finest
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05-26-2015, 09:03 AM | #2 |
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I thought this was cool, not really eye catching at first
I feel how you set up each line makes me feel like I'm looking at a Twista rap it sounds good but when I see all the words together..eh... anyway I thought the most impressive part was the bottom half a different take on what's been going on here lately..but interesting to say the least in the end I didn't feel any different when I saw the structure either way this was a nice little refresher keep writing breh
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05-26-2015, 06:27 PM | #3 |
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raw shit. thought the imagery was solid. dig the fast paced rhyme scheme. shorty short bars
whole thing was solid man. could quote a lot of lines i liked.
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05-27-2015, 10:46 PM | #4 |
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05-28-2015, 12:02 AM | #5 |
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- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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05-29-2015, 04:03 AM | #6 |
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i'd still like to know what an advantage shark is?
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05-29-2015, 04:46 AM | #7 |
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- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
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05-29-2015, 04:58 AM | #8 |
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I can't post anything without uncool and the gang say stupid shit with stupid tags
That's what this site has become It is what it is Advantage shark
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05-29-2015, 10:34 PM | #9 |
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re-post it bruh
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05-29-2015, 11:34 PM | #10 |
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same here
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05-31-2015, 02:43 PM | #11 |
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LOL FUCK
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05-31-2015, 02:49 PM | #12 |
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- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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WHATS POPPIN BRETHREN, MOTHER SAYS YOU A FAGGOT LOL
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06-21-2015, 05:02 PM | #13 |
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this the best shit i seen you write
you nailed the whole less is more thing ....mostly just the 'less' of your whack shit part keep it up holmes |
06-21-2015, 07:19 PM | #14 |
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Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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06-21-2015, 10:45 PM | #15 |
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Ya. Pretty fucking wack tb-unwack
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06-24-2015, 11:15 PM | #16 |
sick shit homeboy
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You thirty-six in a karate class?
You Tae-bo hoe |
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