11-17-2015, 08:41 PM | #1 |
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Semi Finals - ill nik-A vs. Tic - ILL NIK-A WINS
The Fall Brawl Line Limits - 14 Min / No Max If not agreed upon in check ins, you must match the first drop. All other rules apply (biting/feeding/recycling/yadayada) Any and all swaying will be promptly deleted, and you will lose 3 votes for every offence. You have ONE second chance to stop being a bitch, then you're banned from every tourney I run from here on out. You'll also lose your spot in this one. DUE DATE IS 11/24/15 @ 11:59 PCT / 2:59 EST Need anything, let me know. @Tic @ill nik-A
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11-17-2015, 08:45 PM | #2 |
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Might have to post in AM. Thought I'd have more time tonight. Need 4 more lines but exhausted.
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You consider yourself a legend, but we think that fact’s reprehensible If you were so busy Crackin Skulls, explain why not even a Fracture remembers you Plus you’re almost 40 & STILL complain, now you’ll crumble w/ Shells Fuck Carrying. You’re a 38 Snub that’d make pro gunmen turn one on themselves For real! Your demeanor is sad, quit raging you queer The way you get Madden Release anger could be action game of the year Cherish family, cuz when you die ya Spirit will haunt them as well 1 wrong move & I’ll have you saying ‘hello from the other side’ like that song from Adele I don’t play around, when I spray the pound @ this aging gringo I’ll Pull it, Dump & Fill this whole Square up..that’s a full card game of Bingo Real textheads despise you, b. So I'll Stab ya gut, blood spillin & such... We'll watch ya Liverpool. The resounding cheers would rival that team winning the Cup Plus ya overweight as FUCK. Ya wife knows it & tmr you'll have stomach pains Cuz all your advances cuttin into Turkey will get shot down like that Russian plane @Meth
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u can lie till u’re blue but PM’ing me ya lines is adolescent shit
u not a crip, tic… just a wack fag who hides behind the wording in private messages a worthless piece of shit that cannot protect his honor more don’t look at us to bounce ideas off… ur creativity’s a security guard at the dollar store on ur own u’d be nothing cuz honestly u just an amateur punk ya best pieces get torn apart & buried… u’d swear voters were playin scavenger hunt cant u see u’re not that good? obviously RB had u spoiled, bitch the little reception u gotten here’s on some rabbit ears with aluminum foil shit I dare u to shoot nik cuz I’ll send goons to erase ur dudes quick My crew ‘travel-In packs’… urs wear Jansport, avoid fights & have bad taste in music Fuck ya team! Robbing Resin got u invested to falsely dream Air u out for bankin off everyone’s money lines… verses were runnin a Ponzy scheme Hurt ya confidence bad; simply by provin u cannot test me With mind games that’ll leave this pea brain in a podcast seen all across Netcees
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11-25-2015, 08:35 PM | #8 |
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The quotes hit heavy & the unquoted were dope concepts, I just didn't like your execution.
The quotes were haymakers & the unquoted were decent, just not as hectic as the rest of the verse. Overall ill Nik-A was nasty & took this one, can't deny his consistency. Last edited by Schadenfreude; 11-27-2015 at 01:25 PM. |
11-27-2015, 07:55 AM | #9 |
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You consider yourself a legend, but we think that fact’s reprehensible
If you were so busy Crackin Skulls, explain why not even a Fracture remembers you Plus you’re almost 40 & STILL complain, now you’ll crumble w/ Shells Fuck Carrying. You’re a 38 Snub that’d make pro gunmen turn one on themselves two nice hits back to back I thought the Madden Release idea was cool, but hated the "Madden Release anger", the anger part felt like it should have been connected too, but wasn't. It just read a little weird to me like that with the whole thing not working. Cherish family, cuz when you die ya Spirit will haunt them as well 1 wrong move & I’ll have you saying ‘hello from the other side’ like that song from Adele dope concept I don’t play around, when I spray the pound @ this aging gringo I’ll Pull it, Dump & Fill this whole Square up..that’s a full card game of Bingo LOL creative but wasnt feeling this one as much as some of your other lines Real textheads despise you, b. So I'll Stab ya gut, blood spillin & such... We'll watch ya Liverpool. The resounding cheers would rival that team winning the Cup this one is super played in UK hiphop, maybe not so much outside but yeah... considering i used to battle in Liverpool every 2-3 weeks, i've heard far too many of these to give it props. Sorry bruh! Plus ya overweight as FUCK. Ya wife knows it & tmr you'll have stomach pains Cuz all your advances cuttin into Turkey will get shot down like that Russian plane cool current event and tied in well, maybe just lacked a little sting to really hit hard nice shit! ill nik-a: u can lie till u’re blue but PM’ing me ya lines is adolescent shit u not a crip, tic… just a wack fag who hides behind the wording in private messages a worthless piece of shit that cannot protect his honor more don’t look at us to bounce ideas off… ur creativity’s a security guard at the dollar store YO, THIS LINE IS DOPE AS FUCK AHAHAHHAA! I'm guessing you guys stateside have the same things we do here with like, a cardboard cutout or a full sized sticker stuck in the windows of those stores of the security guy? LOLOLOLOL never seen this done before. thats hilarious! on ur own u’d be nothing cuz honestly u just an amateur punk ya best pieces get torn apart & buried… u’d swear voters were playin scavenger hunt cool. cant u see u’re not that good? obviously RB had u spoiled, bitch the little reception u gotten here’s on some rabbit ears with aluminum foil shit lol i liked this one too, maybe the reception/signal ish been done but the aluminium foil was a new addition I dare u to shoot nik cuz I’ll send goons to erase ur dudes quick My crew ‘travel-In packs’… urs wear Jansport, avoid fights & have bad taste in music lmao this shits funny, nice line. something kung-fu esque about it Fuck ya team! Robbing Resin got u invested to falsely dream Air u out for bankin off everyone’s money lines… verses were runnin a Ponzy scheme damn that shits dope as fuck too Hurt ya confidence bad; simply by provin u cannot test me With mind games that’ll leave this pea brain in a podcast seen all across Netcees not feeling this one, maybe missed something? nik had some dope fucking lines this round. two real bangers and a lot of solid shit. tic had a few highlights with the Adele and 38 Snub lines i liked, couple other references that were cool i thought, but Nik smashed this those two lines in particular, the ponzi scheme and dollar store sticker security guard shits are fucking ILL, like seriously dope and i've never seen them done in all my years texting nik zipped him up
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11-28-2015, 04:16 AM | #10 |
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You consider yourself a legend, but we think that fact’s reprehensible
If you were so busy Crackin Skulls, explain why not even a Fracture remembers you Plus you’re almost 40 & STILL complain, now you’ll crumble w/ Shells Fuck Carrying. You’re a 38 Snub that’d make pro gunmen turn one on themselves Cherish family, cuz when you die ya Spirit will haunt them as well 1 wrong move & I’ll have you saying ‘hello from the other side’ like that song from Adele Real textheads despise you, b. So I'll Stab ya gut, blood spillin & such... We'll watch ya Liverpool. The resounding cheers would rival that team winning the Cup Plus ya overweight as FUCK. Ya wife knows it & tmr you'll have stomach pains Cuz all your advances cuttin into Turkey will get shot down like that Russian plane vs u can lie till u’re blue but PM’ing me ya lines is adolescent shit u not a crip, tic… just a wack fag who hides behind the wording in private messages a worthless piece of shit that cannot protect his honor more don’t look at us to bounce ideas off… ur creativity’s a security guard at the dollar store cant u see u’re not that good? obviously RB had u spoiled, bitch the little reception u gotten here’s on some rabbit ears with aluminum foil shit I dare u to shoot nik cuz I’ll send goons to erase ur dudes quick My crew ‘travel-In packs’… urs wear Jansport, avoid fights & have bad taste in music Fuck ya team! Robbing Resin got u invested to falsely dream Air u out for bankin off everyone’s money lines… verses were runnin a Ponzy scheme damn this was dope, liked alot of the bars here ... I can't really decide how to choose a winner this shit is almost even to me..... OK IM BACK.... I feel one had 2 Great lines vs. the other who had 1 Great line, some of Tacs personals won me over slightly, They was both sendin flames back n forth But I guess this will come down to preference . v/ Tic Dope match here, 100.
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You consider yourself a legend, but we think that fact’s reprehensible
If you were so busy Crackin Skulls, explain why not even a Fracture remembers you --- cool......... Plus you’re almost 40 & STILL complain, now you’ll crumble w/ Shells Fuck Carrying. You’re a 38 Snub that’d make pro gunmen turn one on themselves --- fire........... For real! Your demeanor is sad, quit raging you queer The way you get Madden Release anger could be action game of the year --- madden release could be game of the year? U worded it as if release was part of the name of the game. That hurt it. Madden wp is played and this concept is played hurt it too.......... Cherish family, cuz when you die ya Spirit will haunt them as well 1 wrong move & I’ll have you saying ‘hello from the other side’ like that song from Adele --- aite......... I don’t play around, when I spray the pound @ this aging gringo I’ll Pull it, Dump & Fill this whole Square up..that’s a full card game of Bingo --- do u pull it and dump in bingo. Idk. Don't really like lines like this tho. Gotta be dope for me to like. That just preference I guess.......... Real textheads despise you, b. So I'll Stab ya gut, blood spillin & such... We'll watch ya Liverpool. The resounding cheers would rival that team winning the Cup --- played bro. Muff just did a Liverpool line against a British dude in the LLL cypher like a week ago.......... Plus ya overweight as FUCK. Ya wife knows it & tmr you'll have stomach pains Cuz all your advances cuttin into Turkey will get shot down like that Russian plane --- lol....just decent tho. Not that hard hitting imo........... Vs. u can lie till u’re blue but PM’ing me ya lines is adolescent shit u not a crip, tic… just a wack fag who hides behind the wording in private messages --- never seen cryptic. Fire........ a worthless piece of shit that cannot protect his honor more don’t look at us to bounce ideas off… ur creativity’s a security guard at the dollar store --- lol aite.......... on ur own u’d be nothing cuz honestly u just an amateur punk ya best pieces get torn apart & buried… u’d swear voters were playin scavenger hunt --- lol aiiiite.......... cant u see u’re not that good? obviously RB had u spoiled, bitch the little reception u gotten here’s on some rabbit ears with aluminum foil shit --- nice........... I dare u to shoot nik cuz I’ll send goons to erase ur dudes quick My crew ‘travel-In packs’… urs wear Jansport, avoid fights & have bad taste in music --- lol I liked the flip.......... Fuck ya team! Robbing Resin got u invested to falsely dream Air u out for bankin off everyone’s money lines… verses were runnin a Ponzy scheme --- cool........... Hurt ya confidence bad; simply by provin u cannot test me With mind games that’ll leave this pea brain in a podcast seen all across Netcees --- peabrain/podcast is ehh tbr....only line i wasn't really feelin.......... Overall: damn, usually I'm not a big fan of nik's style but this verse was nice. Tic verse kinda let me down, used to reading better from him. He started off strong with the first two then just kinda fell off for the rest of the verse. Might just be a preference thing but I wasn't a big fan of most those lines. V. Ill nika |
11-29-2015, 08:45 PM | #12 |
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You consider yourself a legend, but we think that fact’s reprehensible
If you were so busy Crackin Skulls, explain why not even a Fracture remembers you -MEH Plus you’re almost 40 & STILL complain, now you’ll crumble w/ Shells Fuck Carrying. You’re a 38 Snub that’d make pro gunmen turn one on themselves -HARD For real! Your demeanor is sad, quit raging you queer The way you get Madden Release anger could be action game of the year -Nah, seen better madden flips Cherish family, cuz when you die ya Spirit will haunt them as well 1 wrong move & I’ll have you saying ‘hello from the other side’ like that song from Adele -OK I don’t play around, when I spray the pound @ this aging gringo I’ll Pull it, Dump & Fill this whole Square up..that’s a full card game of Bingo -OK Real textheads despise you, b. So I'll Stab ya gut, blood spillin & such... We'll watch ya Liverpool. The resounding cheers would rival that team winning the Cup -NAH Plus ya overweight as FUCK. Ya wife knows it & tmr you'll have stomach pains Cuz all your advances cuttin into Turkey will get shot down like that Russian plane -NICE VS u can lie till u’re blue but PM’ing me ya lines is adolescent shit u not a crip, tic… just a wack fag who hides behind the wording in private messages -COOL a worthless piece of shit that cannot protect his honor more don’t look at us to bounce ideas off… ur creativity’s a security guard at the dollar store -LOL on ur own u’d be nothing cuz honestly u just an amateur punk ya best pieces get torn apart & buried… u’d swear voters were playin scavenger hunt -OK cant u see u’re not that good? obviously RB had u spoiled, bitch the little reception u gotten here’s on some rabbit ears with aluminum foil shit -OK I dare u to shoot nik cuz I’ll send goons to erase ur dudes quick My crew ‘travel-In packs’… urs wear Jansport, avoid fights & have bad taste in music -LOL Fuck ya team! Robbing Resin got u invested to falsely dream Air u out for bankin off everyone’s money lines… verses were runnin a Ponzy scheme -NOT FAMIL Hurt ya confidence bad; simply by provin u cannot test me With mind games that’ll leave this pea brain in a podcast seen all across Netcees EH V/Nik. Nice battle, i have him edging it w/ a quote. Real consistent as well
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I just think nik was tooooo consistent here The misses hurt tic :( Props to both for making it this far tho Good shit V/ nik
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5/1 nik wins
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