My homies gotta stay up

2tripple0 · 02-06-2018, 06:08 PM

Right I spent some time away from writing
People look back and they need to reflect on what life is
I hate to be one of them preachy rappers talking gangsta shit
But my life wasn't planned out I aint even know what I gots to equip
I worked hard I put my shit into what I been retaining
But its hard right when you got no one left to blame kid
I was out on the street yeah you can call me a loser er whatever
I wasn't clever I didn't know I needed respect but couldn't explain the texture
My life my world is complex and just like my destiny im ending it in a lie
never knew I would meet the other side since I never even wanted to try
I didn't care about shit I aint really have much to say
I was too concerned with not being a fake or a straight up lame
Im not going be the one to bring you down though
Ill always lift you up high even when you put me through all this shit yo
I gotta explain shit I gotta know more there has to be a reason
My boys left me here all alone my girl my fam left me with no meaning
I aint sad I aint care im hard death is just another part of life
I gotta end this though cause I cant continue when I just feel like I want to die
but im not dead im still here
I cant say the same for roger his life got taken just last year
fuck it how can I go on when that was my homie
and he was the only one I knew who really trust me
how you deal with shit like that
and not turn to drugs or crime like you aint got shit to stack
fuck that I aint know what the fuck the point is
just gotta believe that im real and im going stick to my image
going continue living this gangsters life
I aint need no ones advice I just trust in my fam until the day I die
until the day I die
I wont stop living the way that most people despise
I am what I am no one can take that from me
even though there is no meaning I mean fuck I cant even make me no money
fuck this shit for real
yall know whats up though since you should already know the deal...

Nick James · 02-06-2018, 06:16 PM

HOF this shit..

u gotta post it in the lounge to get the HOF nod tho bro

Geno · 02-06-2018, 06:22 PM

Lol. 2cripple.yo
Werd. Lol best shit youve written so far

ACTIVATE SELF · 02-08-2018, 07:14 AM

The technique could use some work. However the heart and character of the content is what really shines here. Thorough shit.

Dope girl · 02-08-2018, 12:19 PM

This is of the greatest piece from you
You're improving compare to last year
Impact verse keep dropping!

02-06-2018, 06:08 PM	#1
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	My homies gotta stay up Right I spent some time away from writing People look back and they need to reflect on what life is I hate to be one of them preachy rappers talking gangsta shit But my life wasn't planned out I aint even know what I gots to equip I worked hard I put my shit into what I been retaining But its hard right when you got no one left to blame kid I was out on the street yeah you can call me a loser er whatever I wasn't clever I didn't know I needed respect but couldn't explain the texture My life my world is complex and just like my destiny im ending it in a lie never knew I would meet the other side since I never even wanted to try I didn't care about shit I aint really have much to say I was too concerned with not being a fake or a straight up lame Im not going be the one to bring you down though Ill always lift you up high even when you put me through all this shit yo I gotta explain shit I gotta know more there has to be a reason My boys left me here all alone my girl my fam left me with no meaning I aint sad I aint care im hard death is just another part of life I gotta end this though cause I cant continue when I just feel like I want to die but im not dead im still here I cant say the same for roger his life got taken just last year fuck it how can I go on when that was my homie and he was the only one I knew who really trust me how you deal with shit like that and not turn to drugs or crime like you aint got shit to stack fuck that I aint know what the fuck the point is just gotta believe that im real and im going stick to my image going continue living this gangsters life I aint need no ones advice I just trust in my fam until the day I die until the day I die I wont stop living the way that most people despise I am what I am no one can take that from me even though there is no meaning I mean fuck I cant even make me no money fuck this shit for real yall know whats up though since you should already know the deal... __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/ Last edited by 2tripple0; 02-06-2018 at 06:10 PM.

02-06-2018, 06:22 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Lol. 2cripple.yo Werd. Lol best shit youve written so far __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

02-06-2018, 06:16 PM	#2
Nick James death to amen Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 1,279 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 7423715	HOF this shit.. u gotta post it in the lounge to get the HOF nod tho bro

02-08-2018, 07:14 AM	#4
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 732 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584275	The technique could use some work. However the heart and character of the content is what really shines here. Thorough shit.

02-08-2018, 12:19 PM	#5
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,706 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	This is of the greatest piece from you You're improving compare to last year Impact verse keep dropping!