1 Frank vs. 4 Nigma [Requires More Voters and Semi-Finals Can Ensue] - Page 2

06-26-2013, 12:22 AM

Yo, I'm here to save the day

So Nigma's was cool, but it kind of just felt weird when i was reading it. I don't know what it was but something just felt... off to me. I have no idea why, or what just something wasn't right in your verse. I don't know. I did enjoy it though, it wasn't a great story, imo but you executed it well

Frank's i loved. The story had me the entire way through, if I wasnt lazy I would have been on the edge of my seat the entire time just waiting for what was going to ensue. Thought it was dope no complaints. I didn;t love the rhyme scheme but for me, just my opinion the story telling is more important than having slick multi's or what not.

Anyway, cool battle, good luck to both in future writing endeavors

V/ Frank
@Adonis

Adonis · 06-26-2013, 12:24 AM

Frank wins in the nail biter

06-26-2013, 12:24 AM	#22
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	Frank wins in the nail biter __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

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06-26-2013, 12:22 AM	#21
Meth Guest Posts: n/a	Yo, I'm here to save the day So Nigma's was cool, but it kind of just felt weird when i was reading it. I don't know what it was but something just felt... off to me. I have no idea why, or what just something wasn't right in your verse. I don't know. I did enjoy it though, it wasn't a great story, imo but you executed it well Frank's i loved. The story had me the entire way through, if I wasnt lazy I would have been on the edge of my seat the entire time just waiting for what was going to ensue. Thought it was dope no complaints. I didn;t love the rhyme scheme but for me, just my opinion the story telling is more important than having slick multi's or what not. Anyway, cool battle, good luck to both in future writing endeavors V/ Frank @Adonis