WK 1: BodySnatcher vs. Jabari Black - BodySnatcher WINS!!

[Incredible]

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@BodySnatcher @Jabari Black

[Jabari Black]

Check. 10-12

[BodySnatcher]

Word.

[BodySnatcher]

Calm down or your bitch`ll get American History X…cuz I can’t truly fathom
Why she’d call JB Smoove...now her mouth is gonna Curb your Enthusiasm
Jabari’s outfit is to bear arms but this is a bear trap to prove he can’t bare shit
If he gets a Lil Scrappy, I’ll put the paws on`em, beat his ass with my bare fist
For the Bucks, I’ll be in MIL looking for Duke. Desert eagle safari out the zoo
Red dot headshot, he’s a one & done, that’s how you take Jabari out the Blue
AK lift him up, don’t give a fuck, hop in the whip like I’m about to pick him up
The way I roll up & smoke J, this nigga might think it was Cred that lit him up
I’ll leave my car park...bring a longer barrel & let the whole nine-yard spark
A shot in the dark`ll leave this black panther dead...tongue out like an aardvark
When I left Jabari’s knee cap...he Bledsoe much now he’s balling on welfare
& to be Giannis he tried to defeat me…but ended up with his third ACL tear

[Jabari Black]

Ext

[Jabari Black]

Originally Posted by sraL

lmao real talk, Finny not even the best pizzeria worker we got on this site

@BodySnatcher come get your mans

Im in the whip with the toys near me - itchin to spray the lead/
Soon as I put eyes on em...I’m putting arms on Body like Mr. potato head/
He rap like he from projects but the .40 prove it’s nothing thuggish bout him/
I’ll let this big Wesson spray n give his mid Section 8 like public housin’/
I bet you and that Finny bitch be kickin’ it...sharing pizza recipes or some silly shit/
I let the semi spit and leave ‘Fin on top of Body’ - no fishy shit/
On Team USA you was the weakest link so I see why y’all niggas quit/
They saw them trash bars you sent and said “never mind, forget it bitch”/
Mini Smith - It’s like Incredible’s mag when I confront this hoe/
That mean I grab the little cannon cus you don’t really want the smoke/
They’ll bodybag you after I put the blade to ya dome and stab you/
I’ll get this chicken served with his noodle red like a ragu/

[El Muffin]

Calm down or your bitch`ll get American History X…cuz I can’t truly fathom
Why she’d call JB Smoove...now her mouth is gonna Curb your Enthusiasm
(did a jb smoove /curb line on joe boston..this flip was ehh ok to me..on the bitch angle)
Jabari’s outfit is to bear arms but this is a bear trap to prove he can’t bare shit
If he gets a Lil Scrappy, I’ll put the paws on`em, beat his ass with my bare fist
(nah not fw with the scrappy reference..is that scrappy like the rapper or scooby doo scrappy..either way not fw it)
For the Bucks, I’ll be in MIL looking for Duke. Desert eagle safari out the zoo
Red dot headshot, he’s a one & done, that’s how you take Jabari out the Blue
(this was nice tho. i caught the one n done..jabari out the blue/duke tie ins)
AK lift him up, don’t give a fuck, hop in the whip like I’m about to pick him up
The way I roll up & smoke J, this nigga might think it was Cred that lit him up
(omg no the smoke J/joint shit is super played..points for the roll up part leading from the setup but noo)
I’ll leave my car park...bring a longer barrel & let the whole nine-yard spark
A shot in the dark`ll leave this black panther dead...tongue out like an aardvark
(ehh)
When I left Jabari’s knee cap...he Bledsoe much now he’s balling on welfare
& to be Giannis he tried to defeat me…but ended up with his third ACL tear
(passable. kinda dig this ..cool word association in the setup..bledsoe, etc)

m in the whip with the toys near me - itchin to spray the lead/
Soon as I put eyes on em...I’m putting arms on Body like Mr. potato head/
(kinda played but u did alot here..put eyes on him/ arms on body..i thought this was a pretty cool play on a really old concept)
He rap like he from projects but the .40 prove it’s nothing thuggish bout him/
I’ll let this big Wesson spray n give his mid Section 8 like public housin’/
(ok)
I bet you and that Finny bitch be kickin’ it...sharing pizza recipes or some silly shit/
I let the semi spit and leave ‘Fin on top of Body’ - no fishy shit/
(eh..would of linked in something other than the phrase.."no fishy shit" but as is its ok)
On Team USA you was the weakest link so I see why y’all niggas quit/
They saw them trash bars you sent and said “never mind, forget it bitch”/
(lol...)
Mini Smith - It’s like Incredible’s mag when I confront this hoe/
That mean I grab the little cannon cus you don’t really want the smoke/
(huh)
They’ll bodybag you after I put the blade to ya dome and stab you/
I’ll get this chicken served with his noodle red like a ragu/
(nah)

i got jabari in a close one...thought bodt had 4 lines i really liked..but the rest kinda left much to be desired..with maybe one more ok line

jabari had 4 i liked but less misses...like complete misses..had some ok spread throughout,,that ragu shit was legit lazy n a throwaway bar tho that shit will get u murdered outchear

v/jabari

[Exis]

V/Jamari...

I thought he came harder, like El said that potato line was a fresh spin on some really old concept shit...Snatcher's openin' was not great, the middle was straight though...it was a lot closer than it seems if you just peep shit quick, I just think Jabari was more direct in insultin' Body so my votes for him...

Enjoyable battle y'all, stay upwards.

[DynamiCz]

For the Bucks, I’ll be in MIL looking for Duke. Desert eagle safari out the zoo
Red dot headshot, he’s a one & done, that’s how you take Jabari out the Blue

Nice

AK lift him up, don’t give a fuck, hop in the whip like I’m about to pick him up
The way I roll up & smoke J, this nigga might think it was Cred that lit him up

I like this

When I left Jabari’s knee cap...he Bledsoe much now he’s balling on welfare
& to be Giannis he tried to defeat me…but ended up with his third ACL tear

Cooley here as well

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He rap like he from projects but the .40 prove it’s nothing thuggish bout him/
I’ll let this big Wesson spray n give his mid Section 8 like public housin’/
I bet you and that Finny bitch be kickin’ it...sharing pizza recipes or some silly shit/
I let the semi spit and leave ‘Fin on top of Body’ - no fishy shit/

This whole section was nice here

On Team USA you was the weakest link so I see why y’all niggas quit/
They saw them trash bars you sent and said “never mind, forget it bitch”/

Lmao

Cool battle here, i got Jabari edging this one, that section 8 line was nice. Good shit to both

V-Jabari

[Blue Bayou]

Calm down or your bitch`ll get American History X…cuz I can’t truly fathom
Why she’d call JB Smoove...now her mouth is gonna Curb your Enthusiasm
coolish concept and connection, could've been worded to hti harder tho
Jabari’s outfit is to bear arms but this is a bear trap to prove he can’t bare shit
If he gets a Lil Scrappy, I’ll put the paws on`em, beat his ass with my bare fist
mehh, dece
For the Bucks, I’ll be in MIL looking for Duke. Desert eagle safari out the zoo
Red dot headshot, he’s a one & done, that’s how you take Jabari out the Blue
damn, honestly this is absolute fire... dope concept
AK lift him up, don’t give a fuck, hop in the whip like I’m about to pick him up
The way I roll up & smoke J, this nigga might think it was Cred that lit him up
ehh, I get the site relevance but this is still too played an idea
I’ll leave my car park...bring a longer barrel & let the whole nine-yard spark
A shot in the dark`ll leave this black panther dead...tongue out like an aardvark
okay
When I left Jabari’s knee cap...he Bledsoe much now he’s balling on welfare
& to be Giannis he tried to defeat me…but ended up with his third ACL tear
personally I don't like another MIL bucks line in a 12 line verse, Bledsoe played .. still this is cool enough for an attack line

vs

m in the whip with the toys near me - itchin to spray the lead/
Soon as I put eyes on em...I’m putting arms on Body like Mr. potato head/
pretty decent flip here for a mr potato head bar.. cool attack line
He rap like he from projects but the .40 prove it’s nothing thuggish bout him/
I’ll let this big Wesson spray n give his mid Section 8 like public housin’/
solid/dece
I bet you and that Finny bitch be kickin’ it...sharing pizza recipes or some silly shit/
I let the semi spit and leave ‘Fin on top of Body’ - no fishy shit/
mehh.. this culdve been better
On Team USA you was the weakest link so I see why y’all niggas quit/
They saw them trash bars you sent and said “never mind, forget it bitch”/
lol for the personal... dece
Mini Smith - It’s like Incredible’s mag when I confront this hoe/
That mean I grab the little cannon cus you don’t really want the smoke/
dece... lil better then his similar line.. im pretty sick of weed/mag punches at this point if im being honest
They’ll bodybag you after I put the blade to ya dome and stab you/
I’ll get this chicken served with his noodle red like a ragu/
nah, been done to death



Overlal pretty decent battle, both had a mix of some solid punches and a couple played concepts/misses... pretty close but Body Snatcher gets my vote for the fact he had by far the best line in the battle.. Jabari/duke play was illy

Vote - BodySnatcher

[Twodrop]

Bodysnatcher:

Calm down or your bitch`ll get American History X…cuz I can’t truly fathom
Why she’d call JB Smoove...now her mouth is gonna Curb your Enthusiasm
thought this was nice, cool line
or the Bucks, I’ll be in MIL looking for Duke. Desert eagle safari out the zoo
Red dot headshot, he’s a one & done, that’s how you take Jabari out the Blue
sheesh, this one hit hard for me
When I left Jabari’s knee cap...he Bledsoe much now he’s balling on welfare
& to be Giannis he tried to defeat me…but ended up with his third ACL tear
the wp sounds familiar, but thought the way you flipped this was nice

JB:


Im in the whip with the toys near me - itchin to spray the lead/
Soon as I put eyes on em...I’m putting arms on Body like Mr. potato head/
yup
I bet you and that Finny bitch be kickin’ it...sharing pizza recipes or some silly shit/
I let the semi spit and leave ‘Fin on top of Body’ - no fishy shit/
I thought this bar was dope
On Team USA you was the weakest link so I see why y’all niggas quit/
They saw them trash bars you sent and said “never mind, forget it bitch”/
cool personal, Funny shit

man.... Close af to me. I thought BodySnatcher had the lotb, both tied in quotes for me.

I have BodySnatcher barely edging this one out, good showing for both.

V/ BodySnatcher

[GUDELJ]

Calm down or your bitch`ll get American History X…cuz I can’t truly fathom
Why she’d call JB Smoove...now her mouth is gonna Curb your Enthusiasm
ok
Jabari’s outfit is to bear arms but this is a bear trap to prove he can’t bare shit
If he gets a Lil Scrappy, I’ll put the paws on`em, beat his ass with my bare fist
nah simply throwing in Lil scrappy doesn’t make a basic punch any better.
For the Bucks, I’ll be in MIL looking for Duke. Desert eagle safari out the zoo
Red dot headshot, he’s a one & done, that’s how you take Jabari out the Blue
i liked this, good one
AK lift him up, don’t give a fuck, hop in the whip like I’m about to pick him up
The way I roll up & smoke J, this nigga might think it was Cred that lit him up
not bad here either, good
I’ll leave my car park...bring a longer barrel & let the whole nine-yard spark
A shot in the dark`ll leave this black panther dead...tongue out like an aardvark
not sure what this is
When I left Jabari’s knee cap...he Bledsoe much now he’s balling on welfare
& to be Giannis he tried to defeat me…but ended up with his third ACL tear
nah too wordy here

Vs


Im in the whip with the toys near me - itchin to spray the lead/
Soon as I put eyes on em...I’m putting arms on Body like Mr. potato head/
lol dope
He rap like he from projects but the .40 prove it’s nothing thuggish bout him/
I’ll let this big Wesson spray n give his mid Section 8 like public housin’/
section 8 is too played
I bet you and that Finny bitch be kickin’ it...sharing pizza recipes or some silly shit/
I let the semi spit and leave ‘Fin on top of Body’ - no fishy shit/
creative, clever. Solid bar
On Team USA you was the weakest link so I see why y’all niggas quit/
They saw them trash bars you sent and said “never mind, forget it bitch”/
nah
Mini Smith - It’s like Incredible’s mag when I confront this hoe/
That mean I grab the little cannon cus you don’t really want the smoke/
decent
They’ll bodybag you after I put the blade to ya dome and stab you/
I’ll get this chicken served with his noodle red like a ragu
nahhhhh lol

I got body with 3 good ones
Jabari with 2 good ones

Close battle but Jabari hurt himself with the last 3 lines being throwaways

Vote BodySnatcher

[Kill Spree]

Out the blue, cred was light, black panther was ok... giannis was cool

Vs

Potato head was cool, section 8 was cool...cannon was aight fin on top of body was a miss “no fishy shit” was weird to me and your closer was a miss

This was close I got body by half a quotable here... though Jabari started out nice than died down. Both had misses but I got body edging this

[Incredible]

BodySnatcher:
"Calm down or your bitch`ll get American History X…cuz I can’t truly fathom
Why she’d call JB Smoove...now her mouth is gonna Curb your Enthusiasm"

"For the Bucks, I’ll be in MIL looking for Duke. Desert eagle safari out the zoo
Red dot headshot, he’s a one & done, that’s how you take Jabari out the Blue"

"AK lift him up, don’t give a fuck, hop in the whip like I’m about to pick him up
The way I roll up & smoke J, this nigga might think it was Cred that lit him up"

Jabri Black:
"Im in the whip with the toys near me - itchin to spray the lead/
Soon as I put eyes on em...I’m putting arms on Body like Mr. potato head/"

"I bet you and that Finny bitch be kickin’ it...sharing pizza recipes or some silly shit/
I let the semi spit and leave ‘Fin on top of Body’ - no fishy shit/"


Overall, after reading both verses thouroughly thought was a pretty decent battle to read here, couple lines from both opponents I wasnt really feeling, but the Jabari in the blue did it for me after comparing whole verse and quotes, so MVGT - BodySnatcher