07-15-2014, 12:24 AM | #1 |
Mad fucking dangerous.
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Let fig baby down.
Tabulate everything I owe. It still wouldn't equate. Couldn't we shake and bring the rope back to this frozen corridor that we've existed in. Missing witnesses to everything we envisioned then. Stood as we ate the fruit of the poison apple tree. Passively. Retroactively. Grasping me. Is this still happening? Falling back into old habits'll make you die slow. We're better off with separate time zones. We're better off with nothing left but sudden death. Overtime goals. And we're working overtime. Separate. It never meant anything. Except everything. Except settling for nothing. Evergreen. That's boring. Meddling past torments. What could we be? Except a couple of fools, stumbling around, breaking the rules on rap forums.
I never meant to hurt you. But I never regretted it. Settled for messages. Private. Evidenced testosterone and prevalent gloss cologne. Sentiments. Overtones. I'm sober. My mouth is dry. Knocked over an ounce of rye. Shot glass but it never shattered. Severed matters with bare hands. But you were the empty cup. I was the puddle. Surprisingly muddled. |
07-15-2014, 01:46 AM | #2 |
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this sucked and I hate you
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07-15-2014, 01:59 AM | #3 |
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07-15-2014, 02:05 AM | #4 |
Mad fucking dangerous.
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obsessed
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- smush beer on head and didn't cry
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- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
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07-15-2014, 10:58 PM | #6 |
song genius
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what the fuck is this web site?
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07-15-2014, 11:41 PM | #7 |
obsessed
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Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,716
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Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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Actually, tbh I was joking, and I joined in on the fun. I'm sure you would love feedback as you deserve it. STFU dex. You did a lot of stop and go, which is dull boy esque, but only something dull boy really mastered. and me, of course. cause i'm the best. I have moments on this site where, I'm big baby, then fig baby and now bug baby, but, I know writing, and although I haphazardly joke around and may purposely make myself seem like I suck. I'm actually awesome. This was really good. A lot of like, off kilter references and connections made on a tangent, but they were a bit muddled. I liked it. But then I saw that maybe you may have wrote it quite fast? I don't know. You are pretty good off the top, and it takes this weird connection of writing where you step it up literally just a tad to put out your top tier work. This here was cool. Could do less with the mimicry of DB, but had flashes of certain in and out. Message was kinda cool. Don't know if it was satirical or not in the grandest fashion, but if it was, cool, if it wasn't - cool too. Keep it up. :) @Certain
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07-16-2014, 01:18 AM | #8 |
Mic Check
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this wasn't wack.
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07-16-2014, 07:16 PM | #9 |
WOW
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zenland + zombie = this
so basically ZombieLand, which is a great movie so bravo
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07-16-2014, 09:48 PM | #10 |
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"Falling back into old habits'll make you die slow. We're better off with separate time zones. We're better off with nothing left but sudden death. Overtime goals."
Best sentences. Nice warm up for the championship run. I hope fig appreciated it.
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