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Old 02-13-2019, 04:58 PM   #1
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You smear my character and shout
All I wanted you to do was hear me out
Fear and doubt. The latter and the former
Paint myself into a corner
Spiderwebs form near the cracked window
Let's just hope it's not a black widow
Squish it and throw it away
Hopeful today, despite modes of decay
My scar tissue is, hardly the issue
Is this relationship measured in miles?
Spent the afternoon watching Forensic Files
A real thriller. Darling I hope you catch my killer
I'm compiling evidence
on why you are so reticent
All I ask for, is a touch of sentiment
Submissiveness is not good for your health
Would you prefer we make reservations somewhere else?
Stop the nonsense
Stop telling me it's a lot to process
I'm aware you could keep up this fight for days
Hungry? I'll just put some metal in the microwave
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Old 02-16-2019, 07:23 PM   #2
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lol nice read. smooth, slightly comical. big easy enjoyment
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Old 02-17-2019, 11:28 AM   #3
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Ya. This was perfect for the mood im in. Not to long. Not to wordy. Not to fantastic. Just right, really
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Old 02-21-2019, 12:08 AM   #4
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I'm the captain Compiling Lethal Evidence
I take pleasure in Spreading this Illegal Pestilence
Shielding Presidents in a Demon's Residence
Spirit visiting To hell with your past this is Present Tense
Some simplistic Shell is Next to be featured in a Spell Suspence
Vampiristic blood in the air when you Smell the Vents
It will be a Major Offense if we Demonstrate Defense
Beyond auras Disintegrate the Lense Infiltrating Dens
You're the type to leak a fart and hold a shit just to Break the Pens
And for that you end up raped an Ducktaped in Tents
Fill the space they May Indent, I'm Satan Sent to rule and Take your Stems
Harness the essence out of you with runes and Sacred Gems
Steal your ship then leave you suspended in the Air like Gwen'$
Transport, I make humiliating you a Dam Sport in brotha Sam's Court
My hairs are All Short, Saying bye like Andy
I'm the power of dembela cutting your Handy
No time to Lower Sandy, I drink baby urine like Sour Brandy
I see you in rap+pad announcing your Faggy Punches
Go send Mister Shaggy Roses in Daddy Bunches
While Ali sweats doing Mammy Crunches
Holding Massive Torches rising from Annunaki Scorches
The one that steals from a God and Forges
Malevolent weapons not for sale in D Black Market by Moses
ChildrenGuild is so Mad he Announces that Zygote is just a Rat in Pouches
Getting eaten in Packs of Ounces, I make you and you crew eat a Sack of Roaches
For commanding a global evacuation from Illuminati Porches
Causing despair and gloom in The Third World trying to Rest in Churches
I'm a Pest with Grudges who Detest Coaches sending an array of Curses to Affect C Nurses
See you next time Missy Perfect Verses awaiting to catch an octopus fused with a Tarantula There
I see you in the Tabernacle's Glare
Demanding Damocles Share
Blinding all Martyrs that Stare
At the transformation of iceman over Saladin Care
I put wings on a Staggering Mare
Able to separate a Violent Pair
Reencarnating into that Pirate you Fear
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Old 02-27-2019, 05:53 PM   #5
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I can see you wish to Be the Best
But your Evil Text is just a Feeble Threat
You're a Measly Speck, I'll Leave you Hexed and Easily Wrecked
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