04-03-2016, 04:44 PM | #1 |
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Joe Boston vs. Adverse - OPEN FOR VOTES
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04-04-2016, 10:03 AM | #2 |
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Links: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=123272 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=123323 @Adverse 10 Be a man and protect your family this pussy runs to make an escape If His plan is to Trust The Shooter ill release faster than Royce Da 5'9s mixtape Rock a cape plotting the hero but never at the destination where the fight is right hand giving your bones a breakthrough each knuckle will affect ya like the Opiode Crisis Your a ball of Fright bitch those faggot traits seem to strike a few Afraid of Ghost, Right Verse? U only come from under ur bed when someone actually writes for you Got some mixed screws in my head dont make me turn the crazy level up to 10 One punch have your Jaw Sailing across the floor youll never feel the same watching Love n Hiphop again I have my suspicions u love men your the most feminant of human beings I think they know what u Want Ad so ur gonna leave sore without a Car,Boat or house from that magazine Last edited by Joe Boston; 04-04-2016 at 07:27 PM. |
04-04-2016, 10:33 PM | #3 |
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You ain't hard you amateur, you're a wobbly battler...
Funny he acted like the King of the Street... ......Then we ended up actually seeing a Boston massacre Love and hip hop do not conincide, end of discussion So Tahiry won't be around when this Joe B gets shot down in public Catch Boston while he's hobblin', put him in a headlock Throw em down, curbstomp em until I end up with Red Sox.. I bet your arthiritis is kickin in, and the first stages of menopause I mean 35?!...And I thought 'senior member' was a bit too harsh.. And your game with the women? That shit is feeble right? Only girls I heard 'sippin joe' same ones who can't sleep at night |
04-04-2016, 10:36 PM | #4 |
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04-05-2016, 08:09 AM | #6 |
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Be a man and protect your family this pussy runs to make an escape If His plan is to Trust The Shooter ill release faster than Royce Da 5'9s mixtape -the opener didnt tie in with the punch at all. I thought the punch was decent but could have used some help to make it better Rock a cape plotting the hero but never at the destination where the fight is right hand giving your bones a breakthrough each knuckle will affect ya like the Opiode Crisis -nah i dont like this Your a ball of Fright bitch those faggot traits seem to strike a few Afraid of Ghost, Right Verse? U only come from under ur bed when someone actually writes for you -nah this is weird Got some mixed screws in my head dont make me turn the crazy level up to 10 One punch have your Jaw Sailing across the floor youll never feel the same watching Love n Hiphop again -meh I have my suspicions u love men your the most feminant of human beings I think they know what u Want Ad so ur gonna leave sore without a Car,Boat or house from that magazine -could have done somethin with want ad, u kinda ruined the punch the way you wrote it Adverse You ain't hard you amateur, you're a wobbly battler... Funny he acted like the King of the Street... ......Then we ended up actually seeing a Boston massacre -this could have been much better. Also, not a good punch to start off with, seems more like a closer to me Love and hip hop do not conincide, end of discussion So Tahiry won't be around when this Joe B gets shot down in public -very bland. tahiry could have been a wordplay but u just went the lazy route Catch Boston while he's hobblin', put him in a headlock Throw em down, curbstomp em until I end up with Red Sox.. -nahbro I bet your arthiritis is kickin in, and the first stages of menopause I mean 35?!...And I thought 'senior member' was a bit too harsh.. -not diggin this and it doesn't rhyme And your game with the women? That shit is feeble right? Only girls I heard 'sippin joe' same ones who can't sleep at night -who says sippin for a sexual inuendo though? nobody Felt both battlers were weak here. I dunno if yall are new or just dropped lite but either way it's close. I've got to vote JB for better attempts. v/Joe Boston |
04-05-2016, 09:43 AM | #7 |
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Redsox, cup of Joe, and massacre Vs. Nothing I liked Vote adverse
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04-11-2016, 05:22 PM | #8 |
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04-11-2016, 07:43 PM | #9 |
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Be a man and protect your family this pussy runs to make an escape If His plan is to Trust The Shooter ill release faster than Royce Da 5'9s mixtape pretty good. i like the rhyme&decent wordplay Rock a cape plotting the hero but never at the destination where the fight is right hand giving your bones a breakthrough each knuckle will affect ya like the Opiode Crisis good punchline, the one i enjoyed most. & i thought the wordplay worked. Your a ball of Fright bitch those faggot traits seem to strike a few Afraid of Ghost, Right Verse? U only come from under ur bed when someone actually writes for you forced/weak setup and wasn't feeling the wordplay on the punch, unlike the previous Got some mixed screws in my head dont make me turn the crazy level up to 10 One punch have your Jaw Sailing across the floor youll never feel the same watching Love n Hiphop again I like the rhyme of it. 2nd time you talkd about punching him tho I have my suspicions u love men your the most feminant of human beings I think they know what u Want Ad so ur gonna leave sore without a Car,Boat or house from that magazine pretty corny but not bad Adverse: You ain't hard you amateur, you're a wobbly battler... Funny he acted like the King of the Street... ......Then we ended up actually seeing a Boston massacre i like the boston massacre concept on the punch; i.m.o. there are better ways to word the setup, i think these 3 lines could be smoother Love and hip hop do not conincide, end of discussion So Tahiry won't be around when this Joe B gets shot down in public Okay Catch Boston while he's hobblin', put him in a headlock Throw em down, curbstomp em until I end up with Red Sox.. def my favorite part of the verse; thought it worked. I bet your arthiritis is kickin in, and the first stages of menopause I mean 35?!...And I thought 'senior member' was a bit too harsh.. tbh this verse is probably far better with audio. tricky rhyme (i'm guessing you squeeze was-a-bit-too?) but even if it's rhymeable, I thought the content of this1 was corny&missed And your game with the women? That shit is feeble right? Only girls I heard 'sippin joe' same ones who can't sleep at night good rhyme but content didn't really hit hard i have to V/Joe Thought he had a few less misses Adverse I know is talented person, but perhaps needs to shake off the rust as far as battle arena Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 04-11-2016 at 07:45 PM. |
04-12-2016, 05:24 AM | #10 |
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ughh, this battle was really difficult to decide. both had some decent concepts but both came with poor delivery of said concepts.
for adverse it bothers me that some of his shit didnt even rhyme or would require some sort of heavy accent to make it work which would be fine if he was laying down vocals but obviously text is a different animal. Im just going to vote for Joe Boston on this one. His lines were stretched as fuck and he needs to work on taking a concept and simplifying it down to what it needs to be in order to diss the opponent correctly instead of trying to jam in too many words to get across the point. but adverse his rhymes were off and his punches just didnt hit very hard. v/ joe boston |
04-12-2016, 04:42 PM | #11 |
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boty, joe boston a hoe often, lol i will not be voting |
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