A Tale Of Searing Solitude

Soule · 10-22-2023, 05:47 PM

Some repetitive wording holds this back a bit but I been on this Asian kick lately and this has sensei vibes so I fuck with that. Conceptually, this was really well thought out and paced. If anything you could've even made it longer but it works either way. Not a topical but a solid short story. I'd love to see more of this, just try to avoid using the same words too much (with the exception of the rat because that's the center idea of the plot).

10-22-2023, 05:47 PM	#1
Soule Save The Sea Join Date: Aug 2021 Location: Oregon Posts: 553 Rep Power: 3013536	Some repetitive wording holds this back a bit but I been on this Asian kick lately and this has sensei vibes so I fuck with that. Conceptually, this was really well thought out and paced. If anything you could've even made it longer but it works either way. Not a topical but a solid short story. I'd love to see more of this, just try to avoid using the same words too much (with the exception of the rat because that's the center idea of the plot). __________________