Week 3: Slecht vs Incredible - SLECHT WINS

Saint · 01-29-2020, 11:35 PM

Week 3

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread. Records updated in rankings.

DUE MONDAY,

@Incredible @Slechtq

*The 1-2 league is one bar VS one bar.*

slecht · 01-30-2020, 12:54 AM

Howdy.

slecht · 02-01-2020, 02:45 AM

It's not a farm tragedy in South America, If u hear what the drama is about.
Fuck what ya herd, Incan trouble as soon as the llamas are out

Incredible · 02-03-2020, 03:14 PM

His fam got the presses workin - RIP above ur dome, he a hot head
Cuz the 9mili my cuddle buddy and it's real touchy, Finny suicide thread

Diablo · 02-03-2020, 03:20 PM

much preferred Inc’s wording here but the actual punch itself was lacking something that really attacked his opponent for me personally

Incan trouble I’m sure will have been done, even if I’m not familiar with it, so I guess I’ve a slight edge to slecht here in a close one

Dope girl · 02-04-2020, 12:06 AM

Both kill it I felt like incredible came out stronger compare to sletch
Vote Incredible

Sinacog · 02-04-2020, 07:59 AM

V/ Sletch

Flow · 02-04-2020, 09:51 AM

Lmao vote incredible. I debated a finny angle myself tbh. Anyways Inc gets my vote. Incan definitely been done and wasn't keen on the wording either. It wasn't a bad effort though so keep it up man but you got popped this week.

Vote inc

Plot · 02-04-2020, 10:45 AM

Vote-Slecht.
I think Slecht had some good tie-ins.
farm/SA herd/heard, also llamas are a cool word to gunplay.
Inc is getting better, wording is getting crisper,
Didnt like the cuddle-buddy, I wouldnt say that in battle bar.
But mostly I didnt like the rhyme, rhyming just last syllables is meh
Had an opportunity to make a 3 or so with suicide but didnt.
Actually on a second look..'he a hot head' thats lazy mate

Zuo · 02-04-2020, 01:29 PM

Slect I want to like your line but it only works one way because I’m not completely sure that incans ride llamas. Incredible this bar was pretty cool, I think, definitely enjoyed your wording and execution a lot more

Vote credible

Inno · 02-04-2020, 10:47 PM

Both stumbled tbh. Slect with llama reference I feel like you used that to tie in the gun theme but it doesn’t really tie in to anything else in your bar. Inc had a good bar too but I feel like he made the same mistake. I don’t see a strong enough tie to the finny thread, might just be going over my head.

Another close one but I think ama give it to slect on this one.

Pinot Grij · 02-04-2020, 11:51 PM

Both were over boiled. I go with Slechht

Saint · 02-05-2020, 01:41 AM

MORE VOTES @Destroyer @FGR @bleak @Blue Bayou @Obey @Kill Spree @Habitat @Sharp

Saint · 02-05-2020, 03:31 AM

Vote Slecht

Inc - I actually liked your concept more... the potential could have been good but the setup & word choice of cuddle buddies threw it off for me. Bar was written well otherwise.

Slecht - I think this needed a revision imo. I'm not familiar w/ Incas relationship to llamas....but ok. Had several ideas here which together made it better than they would singularly. U did enough here to win.

Saint · 02-05-2020, 03:31 AM

Slecht WINS

01-29-2020, 11:35 PM	#1
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,183 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535864	Week 3: Slecht vs Incredible - SLECHT WINS Week 3 You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread. Records updated in rankings. DUE MONDAY, @Incredible @Slechtq The 1-2 league is one bar VS one bar. Last edited by Saint; 02-05-2020 at 03:32 AM.

02-04-2020, 10:45 AM	#9
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	Vote-Slecht. I think Slecht had some good tie-ins. farm/SA herd/heard, also llamas are a cool word to gunplay. Inc is getting better, wording is getting crisper, Didnt like the cuddle-buddy, I wouldnt say that in battle bar. But mostly I didnt like the rhyme, rhyming just last syllables is meh Had an opportunity to make a 3 or so with suicide but didnt. Actually on a second look..'he a hot head' thats lazy mate Last edited by Plot; 02-04-2020 at 10:47 AM.

02-04-2020, 11:51 PM	#12
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195060	Both were over boiled. I go with Slechht __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

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01-30-2020, 12:54 AM	#2
slecht Twitter: @ricanjq Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 582 Battle Record: 4-12 Champed - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 2236280	Howdy.

02-01-2020, 02:45 AM	#3
slecht Twitter: @ricanjq Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 582 Battle Record: 4-12 Champed - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 2236280	It's not a farm tragedy in South America, If u hear what the drama is about. Fuck what ya herd, Incan trouble as soon as the llamas are out

02-03-2020, 03:14 PM	#4
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	His fam got the presses workin - RIP above ur dome, he a hot head Cuz the 9mili my cuddle buddy and it's real touchy, Finny suicide thread

02-03-2020, 03:20 PM	#5
Diablo Badgerdick Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Showdown City Posts: 2,604 Battle Record: 11-2 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 22685548	much preferred Inc’s wording here but the actual punch itself was lacking something that really attacked his opponent for me personally Incan trouble I’m sure will have been done, even if I’m not familiar with it, so I guess I’ve a slight edge to slecht here in a close one

02-04-2020, 12:06 AM	#6
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,705 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	Both kill it I felt like incredible came out stronger compare to sletch Vote Incredible

02-04-2020, 07:59 AM	#7
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,141 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	V/ Sletch

02-04-2020, 10:47 PM	#11
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Both stumbled tbh. Slect with llama reference I feel like you used that to tie in the gun theme but it doesn’t really tie in to anything else in your bar. Inc had a good bar too but I feel like he made the same mistake. I don’t see a strong enough tie to the finny thread, might just be going over my head. Another close one but I think ama give it to slect on this one.

02-05-2020, 01:41 AM	#13
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,183 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535864	MORE VOTES @Destroyer @FGR @bleak @Blue Bayou @Obey @Kill Spree @Habitat @Sharp

02-05-2020, 03:31 AM	#14
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,183 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535864	Vote Slecht Inc - I actually liked your concept more... the potential could have been good but the setup & word choice of cuddle buddies threw it off for me. Bar was written well otherwise. Slecht - I think this needed a revision imo. I'm not familiar w/ Incas relationship to llamas....but ok. Had several ideas here which together made it better than they would singularly. U did enough here to win.