08-21-2018, 05:21 AM | #1 |
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LIGHTNING ROUND: DynamiCz (3-5) vs. Twodrop (5-4) - DYNAMICZ WINS
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08-21-2018, 11:48 AM | #2 |
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When I pull up even ya dawgs dead. Lay u all out & take the solo route Russian ya crib like a payed assassin. More head shots than a John Wick photo shoot Last edited by Twodrop; 08-21-2018 at 11:50 AM. |
08-21-2018, 02:56 PM | #3 |
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I'm kidnapping..Tie him up, long machete what I'm then grabbing
Hand slashing! When I make two face it, u'll see it wasn't a backstabbing
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08-21-2018, 03:05 PM | #4 |
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Cool battle here two idk something doesn't sit right with the bar to me...maybe I'm breaking it down too much, I mean first you shot him and his dawgs, then killed him again in his home with I can only assume his family. Just seems like you had 2, second lines couldn't figure out set ups for them so you just put them together. Still was pretty cool but Dyn was also graphic with it, painted a picture along with overall decent concept so my vote goes to him.
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08-21-2018, 07:17 PM | #5 |
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Two Drop ... I've seen a million russian wp's, the john wick flip was coolish, but the photo shoot tie in made it seem basic imo.. dece attempt but I've seen u drop better
Dyna ... thought this was a pretty cool nameplay, like the way you worded it and the backstabbing/ two face play was creative I've got Dyna here.. props to both
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08-21-2018, 07:27 PM | #6 |
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Got dyn here with a better bar
John wick was too simple |
08-21-2018, 09:22 PM | #7 |
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drop had a cool bar but dynam had a creative one that I dug a lot. good shit to both
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08-21-2018, 09:58 PM | #8 |
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both decent, two’s concept was cool but i wasn’t feeling the Russian wordplay
Dynamicz had a cool concept as well, a bit fresher than two’s and I think it landed harder v/Dynamicz |
08-21-2018, 09:58 PM | #9 |
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7-0 DynamiCz
Needs more votes. @Ryno @Witty @Flow @John Dillinger @Knucklehead @Blue Bayou @Jabari Black @BodySnatcher Last edited by For Battling; 08-21-2018 at 11:24 PM. |
08-21-2018, 10:03 PM | #10 |
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i've got dynamic with a decent flip on a dated concept. twos execution was kinda of light imo
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08-21-2018, 10:08 PM | #11 |
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Two the concept was good imo. Bar had a lot of potential. I’ve seen Russian wp a lot but I still thought it tied into the bar well. I thought you fumbled it on the punch though. Both the John wick and photo shoot aspect felt a bit basic. Also you didn’t do enough to tie both in. Though the punch was okay though.
Dy I think you had a really creative punch. Two face/backstabbing was very clever. Pretty good wording for the most part although it wasn’t perfect. The two face doesn’t work cleanly for both meanings but it will work. Also I think you could have worded it better that ‘it ain’t backstabbing’ and prob could have incorporated it into the line better since it’s a blade/stabbing line. Overall good punch though Mvgt Dynamicz |
08-21-2018, 11:03 PM | #12 |
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not bad Two, Imo the Russain tie-in was coo but Dy just came with a fresher concept and executed a bit better.
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08-21-2018, 11:24 PM | #13 |
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DynamiCz Wins 7-0
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