07-30-2014, 07:47 AM | #1 |
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ribbit vs. Adverse [Adverse WINS]
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07-30-2014, 08:00 AM | #2 |
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07-30-2014, 08:42 AM | #3 |
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07-31-2014, 12:33 AM | #4 |
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Remember the story of the Garden of Eden you heard as a kid? Wait…
It took one to make Eve, so it’s easy to see that Rib is BITCH MADE Your career is coming to an end, take this verse as an epilogue Especially when I go 9th grade biology on him and dissect this frog Fuck this kid, you’re just a puppet, Ribbit I’d probably fuck his bitch and he’d just sit there like “that’s none of my business” I stay hittin’ her, I’m honestly almost sick of drillin’ that ho And honestly Rib just wantin’ his baby back like a Chilli’s special.. You ain’t no Deputy, dawg, you’re an over glorified ho With a career that won’t last any longer than that show You’re not dope at all fam, you’ll never be fly, dude… If someone ever tells me “Rib’s crack” I’ll probably laugh until mine do Vote links: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=77345 http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=85311 Last edited by Adverse; 07-31-2014 at 12:57 AM. |
07-31-2014, 07:33 AM | #5 |
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U whack mate got no game to spit them bars
he was nn his way to winning until his car didnt start ur flow gets picked apart its easy cuz u lack a firm foundation and this aint the apprentice but ya rap career about to find its termimation fuck it kid u weak and i wont need much to win and u the type to exaggerate except u forgot to rub it in ribbit the type to keep ya guessing and fight u with weapons put a stop to u so ur shitty rhymes dont spread like the ebola infection u lost it kid u already made to many attempts and dont say i was vividlyvague or that cat will bury u next u aint a threat ad needs to forget this humiliation he thot we gave him a clue didnt know he was asking for a detailed classificatiom
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07-31-2014, 09:43 AM | #6 |
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Re: battle?
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=373681&posted=1
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=373685#post373685
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08-01-2014, 11:58 PM | #8 |
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Pretty decent battle.
Rib came better than I've seen him do n ad was worst than I've seen from him which made it pretty even. Unfortunately for rib, ad had the lotb with his closer. V adverse |
08-02-2014, 05:52 PM | #9 |
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Remember the story of the Garden of Eden you heard as a kid? Wait… It took one to make Eve, so it’s easy to see that Rib is BITCH MADE [nice nameplay on the punch. great opener - 8/10] Your career is coming to an end, take this verse as an epilogue Especially when I go 9th grade biology on him and dissect this frog [meh. not terrible but not super great either - 6/10] Fuck this kid, you’re just a puppet, Ribbit I’d probably fuck his bitch and he’d just sit there like “that’s none of my business” [hahaha funny stuff. pretty creative too. kermit the snitch - 8/10] I stay hittin’ her, I’m honestly almost sick of drillin’ that ho And honestly Rib just wantin’ his baby back like a Chilli’s special.. [nice wordplay - 8/10] You ain’t no Deputy, dawg, you’re an over glorified ho With a career that won’t last any longer than that show [meh. kinda lazy. you can obviously do better - 6/10] You’re not dope at all fam, you’ll never be fly, dude… If someone ever tells me “Rib’s crack” I’ll probably laugh until mine do [lol kinda light but its kool. the kermit line wouldve been a better closer tho imo - 7/10] TOTAL - 43/50 RIBBIT U whack mate got no game to spit them bars he was nn his way to winning until his car didnt start [there is no personal or wordplay. very weak opener - 3/10] ur flow gets picked apart its easy cuz u lack a firm foundation and this aint the apprentice but ya rap career about to find its termimation [this is a little bit better. i think a "youre fired" reference might have worked a little better - 5/10] fuck it kid u weak and i wont need much to win and u the type to exaggerate except u forgot to rub it in [see my expo for bar 1 - 3/10] ribbit the type to keep ya guessing and fight u with weapons put a stop to u so ur shitty rhymes dont spread like the ebola infection [meh. not awful but pretty close - 4/10] u lost it kid u already made to many attempts and dont say i was vividlyvague or that cat will bury u next [i think this maybe an obscure reference to someone named vividly vague that i am not aware of?? i'll give you a high score anyway cause im a nice person like that - 5/10] u aint a threat ad needs to forget this humiliation he thot we gave him a clue didnt know he was asking for a detailed classificatiom [BARS!!!! kidding that was terrible - 3/10] TOTAL - 23/50 Vote - ADVERSE |
08-04-2014, 08:31 PM | #10 |
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this was an ok battle. i think adverse was pretty consistent with punches
the None of my business line was crazy. the frog angle was slick, had a couple that didnt hit. biology was ehh...but overall adverse was consistent. ribbit, i felt like your lines werent witty at all, they just had a nice flow. the ebola infection line for example. smh, no real creativity there at all. your verse flowed well but just didnt match well with adverses consistent punches. good battle vote: adverse
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Adverse wins via KO
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