i made a song

WRATH · 08-07-2018, 02:34 PM

tell me if it's trash

https://soundcloud.com/7sinatra/black-benz-new-x8

For Battling · 08-07-2018, 02:38 PM

With a voice box?

Amen · 08-07-2018, 02:39 PM

Not sure if my desktop is lagging but the quality is weird?

I'll have to listen when I get home, bro. I heard like vocals in the background with your weird flow then the instrumental interruption and shit cutting in and out?

Inno · 08-07-2018, 02:42 PM

This shit trash b

WRATH · 08-07-2018, 02:43 PM

Fade in and random noises till verse starts around 1:00

For Battling · 08-07-2018, 02:52 PM

Sht sound like bumblebee from transformers using s bunch of different radio station voices trying to fuse sentences together

Destroyer · 08-07-2018, 02:54 PM

Lmao
Fuck zelph, but yeah, basically

Finnydot · 08-07-2018, 02:57 PM

Yo this shit straight garbage lol

WRATH · 08-07-2018, 03:03 PM

So what you think throw it away or what. I might be biased to the improvements that's why I ask. A lot of cutting and probably too many voice alterations went into this. Its listenable to me.

Destroyer · 08-07-2018, 03:04 PM

If you’re making music to only be “listenable to you” then props
You’re on the right track

WRATH · 08-07-2018, 03:06 PM

I mean is it unlistenable or is it too far trash to be considered listenable. Does genre make it trash or is it all around trash.

~RustyGunZ~ · 08-07-2018, 03:10 PM

What genre do you consider this?

WRATH · 08-07-2018, 03:19 PM

The beat is vaporwave so vaporwave with rap over it I guess

~RustyGunZ~ · 08-07-2018, 03:21 PM

Why would you want to do that?

You know people don’t actually like that shit they just need a group to cling onto for a sense of community right?

You don’t actually enjoy listening to music that would be similar to this do you?

WRATH · 08-07-2018, 03:27 PM

I mean I like vaporwave. I had never heard it until soundcloud would play it after i was listening to my own songs. It's like chopped and screwed 90s r&b/jazz its alright

~RustyGunZ~ · 08-07-2018, 03:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WRATH

I mean I like vaporwave. I had never heard it until soundcloud would play it after i was listening to my own songs. It's like chopped and screwed 90s r&b/jazz its alright

What music do you listen to the most? What are you passionate about?

Hush · 08-07-2018, 03:31 PM

Rapping wasn’t bad

Neither was lyrics

WRATH · 08-07-2018, 03:37 PM

I know there's some rough cuts but the levels are almost evened out for it being put together like Frankenstein. I need to listen to it in the car to know how I really feel about it but I dont hate it which is good news to me

Hush · 08-07-2018, 03:41 PM

I heard it in the car

Horrible mix

But u had a cool flow at times

Finnydot · 08-07-2018, 03:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WRATH

I know there's some rough cuts but the levels are almost evened out for it being put together like Frankenstein. I need to listen to it in the car to know how I really feel about it but I dont hate it which is good news to me

I respect it if you're not just saying that. If you truly want to make music for you then that's not a bad thing. The problem is that it's shit music. The beat was awful and you took over a minute to start rapping. 4 bar intro man, that's all you need.

People say I'm garbage tho, so don't take this personally. I just don't like this at all.

08-07-2018, 02:34 PM	#1
WRATH Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 910 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 7502711	i made a song tell me if it's trash https://soundcloud.com/7sinatra/black-benz-new-x8

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Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	Rapping wasn’t bad Neither was lyrics __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

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Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	I heard it in the car Horrible mix But u had a cool flow at times __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

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08-07-2018, 02:38 PM	#2
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	With a voice box?

08-07-2018, 02:39 PM	#3
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,470 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	Not sure if my desktop is lagging but the quality is weird? I'll have to listen when I get home, bro. I heard like vocals in the background with your weird flow then the instrumental interruption and shit cutting in and out?

08-07-2018, 02:42 PM	#4
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	This shit trash b

08-07-2018, 02:43 PM	#5
WRATH Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 910 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 7502711	Fade in and random noises till verse starts around 1:00

08-07-2018, 02:52 PM	#6
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Sht sound like bumblebee from transformers using s bunch of different radio station voices trying to fuse sentences together

08-07-2018, 02:57 PM	#8
Finnydot Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 2,052 Champed - Beat Battle I Rep Power: 10457438	Yo this shit straight garbage lol

08-07-2018, 03:03 PM	#9
WRATH Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 910 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 7502711	So what you think throw it away or what. I might be biased to the improvements that's why I ask. A lot of cutting and probably too many voice alterations went into this. Its listenable to me.

08-07-2018, 03:06 PM	#11
WRATH Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 910 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 7502711	I mean is it unlistenable or is it too far trash to be considered listenable. Does genre make it trash or is it all around trash.

08-07-2018, 03:10 PM	#12
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,852 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899402	What genre do you consider this?

08-07-2018, 03:19 PM	#13
WRATH Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 910 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 7502711	The beat is vaporwave so vaporwave with rap over it I guess

08-07-2018, 03:21 PM	#14
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,852 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899402	Why would you want to do that? You know people don’t actually like that shit they just need a group to cling onto for a sense of community right? You don’t actually enjoy listening to music that would be similar to this do you?

08-07-2018, 03:27 PM	#15
WRATH Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 910 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 7502711	I mean I like vaporwave. I had never heard it until soundcloud would play it after i was listening to my own songs. It's like chopped and screwed 90s r&b/jazz its alright

08-07-2018, 03:37 PM	#18
WRATH Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 910 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 7502711	I know there's some rough cuts but the levels are almost evened out for it being put together like Frankenstein. I need to listen to it in the car to know how I really feel about it but I dont hate it which is good news to me