03-03-2014, 03:41 AM | #1 |
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Week 2: Vulgar (1-0) vs. H4ZE (1-0) \\ Vulgar wins via no-show
Season 3 The Basics | Read the full rules here. Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS. Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent. Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread. Topic "To live outside the law, you must be honest." — Bob Dylan Good luck, @Vulgar and @H4ZE.
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03-03-2014, 10:50 AM | #2 |
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03-03-2014, 11:48 AM | #3 |
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03-06-2014, 05:31 PM | #4 |
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Yo, I might not be able to get my verse in. I've been busy with school and life. I'll try though.
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03-06-2014, 05:45 PM | #5 |
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It's due Friday, if that helps.
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03-07-2014, 07:36 PM | #6 |
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3,000 B.C.
There were clusters of restless peasants in the fields... Right around the time when the world saw the invention of the wheel Aristocratic snakes roamed the Indus River Valley with intent that was concealed - a lesson they'd reveal... Misconduct had an electric effect on the populace... they had the temperament of eels The Damara, or feudal landlords, ordered a town gathering Families who refused to attend were herded together with bronze javelins At this time, conditions were beyond hazardous - There wasn't a glimmer of couth left, down to the miserable roots An Indus riddled with brutes - predicaments proved religion was moot when ancient tribes went tit for tat over civil disputes... Artisans weren't amused; carpenters & shepherds embraced their nervous kin The property taxes they might soon face bordered on murderous Documents were passed around by the hundreds, irresoluteness would tease them Sign OUR land over to these demons? If not, executed for treason... Kings and emperors were booted as weaklings "The fine print" was the new royal lineage. A poisonous, crimson strain of hibiscus began to bloom in the region Corruption was no foreign tongue; they weren't new to the teachings All naysayers ended up as destitute sinews on the beaches So many parasites flocked, their collective destructiveness might've formed typhus Erosion of rights burnt through the city like a fire through old Cyprus "Take what Damaras say with a large grain of salt," warned the elders... it's too bad they couldn't afford spices. [roughly translated due to poor condition of historical tablet] "By the decree of Jyahangira the Pratihara... It'll take forty parables, NOT forty thieves like Ali Baba Gandharavas and Hosa Rajanaka have a message for the serfs Khana Ebhrahima respects & honors your testament to serve We've determined your elemental worth, by the king's borders" (The document was full of obscure references meant to snip corners seize borderlands, bleed pauper's hands, claim acres of rich orchards) Damara enforcers read the last statement, being the orators Confident with their job security since the statuses of their lords would soar "Signed, [the following names] اپ کی زمین ہے اور اسی میں ہماری بھلائی ہے. اس پر دستخط کرنے سے ایک اہستہ رفتار ہے. Yorlandizouhahs, Sine-Italwhay, Atya Li-Shure" It was a subliminal message, as was discovered by a resident calligraphist... Angered, the villagers rendered these wicked men deader than Australopithecus... "Get the gist? Let me explain... Yorlandizouhahs, Sine-Italwhay, Atya Li-Shure TRANSLATED: "Your land is ours. Sign it over at your leisure." Consequently, enforcers' blood drenched the earth of the dry province The Samaras, blind to any common decency, immune to all laws & high doctrines had something to look forward to - as pitchforks were lodged into their eye sockets Last edited by Vulgar; 03-07-2014 at 07:42 PM. |
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