01-15-2021, 10:42 AM | #1 |
NJ Devil
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Doc Savage vs Des - OPEN FOR VOTES
Tonight 10
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01-15-2021, 05:19 PM | #2 |
Scream
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Fuck u
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01-15-2021, 10:43 PM | #3 |
Bags will be avenged
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my bars are insane. only heat comes from this brain
if anyone ever says ur shit was fire it’s only becuz inf lame all of us want u to retire again. no one wants to know that ur writin the potential for violence in all 50 state capitals aint about joe fucking biden ur girl sucked me til i cried. bro she had me broken and sobbin ur only potential for touching head is when she makes the sign of the cross over ur coffin i’m a demon in flesh offering up sacraments to kings of the deep if ur prayers take on a dark theme it’s “please let that black guy stop mean mugging me” got a bag full of knives and saws. when des exits, ur dead fool the way i leave doc tore it gets assumed the killer must have went to med school Last edited by Destroyer; 01-16-2021 at 12:06 AM. |
01-16-2021, 02:18 AM | #4 |
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miscarriages are tough. i feel for the mourning of the wife
i'd go thru development hell too.. if I wrote the story of your life genes on course for steady hairloss - no doubt it's hurtful try Holding Pattern w/ bosley only got u going around in circles working dead end phone sales at 45? maybe finish school it's ironic, cuz 'Des Certification' would help ya land something livable your wife & I had a late xmas, called me at a safer spot said: after I warm up w/a Toy Drive over & put in it, thats a donation box I got snipers on your head & heart, don't try to guess the hit my guys pull heat to vital spots like hypothermias setting in Last edited by Fathom; 01-16-2021 at 04:58 AM. |
01-16-2021, 07:50 AM | #5 |
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Inf lame only works one way but it’s new to me and ok
Don’t see the diss in Biden bar? Touching head ok Don’t like dark theme Doctorate is nice your best bar here by far Development hell ok Bosley I get the correlation of words but don’t get the punch tbh Desertification cool Donation box I’m not sure Closer is heat Des I thought you came off rushed here and only had one real standout in the closer. INF had two and lotb in his closer which was enough to take it Vote - doc
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01-16-2021, 04:05 PM | #6 |
Spoiled brat
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Maybe I’m retarded but it was tough to understand INFs bars. That’s my bad I guess dude but o tried really hard. I did like your closer though.
Des didn’t have much going on here. Inflame was a no for me as was Biden and the rest was maybe okay? I’m not really sure I just know that I think I understand what was going on. I’m gonna vote Des here based on me understanding his a little more. |
01-17-2021, 01:23 AM | #7 |
low tide in serotonin bay
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Des I didn’t like a whole lot I’m just going to be honest, you’re a way better writer than your effort here whether you were just tired of competing or literally keystyled it but it felt really phoned in only bar I really liked was closer
Inf’s bars have a tendency of being over my head but I caught on to quite a bit here honestly the only thing I didn’t feel was bosley. Had to google desertification but it was a cool reference. Developmental hell, donation box, and closer was all cool Giving this to papa doc V/Doc |
01-17-2021, 06:22 PM | #8 |
He / Him / His
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This won’t be helpful but I got des here. I think both had their misses but thought des was slightly more consistent.
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