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07-23-2020, 10:28 PM | #1 |
ZAAAAM
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IM RETIRING FROM TEXT BATTLING & WILL BE SWITCHING OVER TO THE TOPICAL REALM
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07-23-2020, 10:36 PM | #2 |
low tide in serotonin bay
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Welcome to the wonderful world of manpoems
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07-23-2020, 10:48 PM | #3 |
HE / HIM / FRAC
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plz be real plz be real
you know you need more than 3 'stick' wordplays and a 'nina' line for a topical right? |
07-23-2020, 11:14 PM | #5 |
HE / HIM / FRAC
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make us proud
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07-23-2020, 11:59 PM | #6 | |
Sell Her
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start with 6 lines work with syllables of three/five and two for all of them as the beat and then pick your story and write within the spaces by making the rhymes the connection to the stories progression
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07-24-2020, 12:14 AM | #7 |
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Cool when can I mercilessly clown you it's been a while.
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07-24-2020, 12:30 AM | #8 |
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I'm retirin' from dog cock & goin' back to pussies...just to let you know.
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07-24-2020, 12:42 PM | #10 |
DMS—Diddled My Stick
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This made my fucking ass cheeks give out from laughter
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07-24-2020, 01:13 PM | #11 |
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Then your growing up to be a faggot
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07-24-2020, 06:24 PM | #13 |
K I N G
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07-24-2020, 07:05 PM | #14 |
Lime Life
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This comment was hurtful, but I am sure you only meant it to demean Zelph which is always a worthy pursuit.
Some really great stuff can be found in these 'topical' (whatever the fuck that means) verses, there are a lot of pretty talented writers. Unfortunately we mainly get the fucking idiots these days, but if you dig deep, there's some shit there. In conclusion, I agree, Zelph is a faggot.
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07-24-2020, 11:26 PM | #15 |
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I still fuck with your Rich Gannon bar. Sidearm.
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