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Old 01-14-2016, 09:56 PM   #1
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Winter Topical II: Round II


SUMMARY OF RULES:

Verses are due JAN. 19th
TUESDAY at 9 P.M. Pacific/West Coast or TUESDAY 11:59 PM Eastern / 6:00 AM WEDNESDAY JAN. 20th Central European/London
There are NO extensions.


Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Thursday at 4:00 p.m. Western / or Thursday 7:00 PM Eastern / 1:00 AM Friday Central European/London Failure to vote will result in NEGATIVE VOTES if you advance to the next round.

WHAT DOES THIS MEAN? You can technically start a match down three votes by failing to log a single vote the previous week.

so....

All competitors must vote on THREE battles

Read the full rules here!

Topic: The Quick And The Dead
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Dead Man Failed to Log a single vote

He will begin this match up down three unless Pie chooses to waive the rule? Mention me here if so please

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Rules are rules. Sorry, but I'll take that 3 vote lead.
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Silent Night

I'm kept as a slave, unkept and depraved; nests of insects in my braids.
Undressed and displayed for molesters to crave until I'm sexually raped.
One special occasion's refreshed in my brain with gifts: pearl necklaces sprayed
and presents engraved from my chest to my face for my eleventh birthday!
Slow steps to my grave, depressed and ashamed as my breasts come to shape.
Hiding my figure so I won't get picked first when we're beckoned to play.
Incredulous ways; put on a leash, hooked to a tree, hosed wet as we lay.
Pets to be raised for debts to be paid, where all your pleasure's our pain.

Esther's my name, there's seven girls spade, I'm the youngest they've groomed.
Deadened, decayed from stressing my brain, seeing them punished by crews.
I'm next on the plate for the rest of the day, eyes closed, humming soft tunes.
Forgetting the pain and getting us paid, which simply comes in our food.
Pushed to the limit, I look for the finish in meals to be served.
The highlight's on good days; eating in the house, but feeling awkward.
Janene, Anne and I are planning to strike with precision tonight.
Our kinship feels right since we're the top three expensive in price.
I stick butter knives inside the region within the middle of thighs.
From the kitchen supply after a diversion of Anne twitching her eyes
with fits and switching backside, giving them quite the performance.
Took one for the team as they pried her wide, forcing deep inside of her fortress.
Right when they finished applying their friendships, we get tied to the fences
onside of the trenches. This heightened our senses like divine intervention.
Timing is pivotal, knives are dispensed with a thrust in silence with grimace.
Slicing these tense grips with lightening quickness, now we have five to ten minutes.
Before Ivan, the menace checks outside for his bitches, finding we're missing in action.
Then sends his henchmen to find us, whip us and probably kill while attacking.
This is what happened to girls of the past and since I'll be viewed as a leader,
I'll be used as a feature of torture in showing their cruelest demeanor.

There's seven of us, I turn around to quickly add up the heads.
Claire, Ellen, Anne, Janene and myself: we're missing Kathy and Meg.
There's splatters of red on the trees, down the path I see legs.
As I'm rushing to duck, there's more puddles of blood in the grass to the left.
I see shadows, before I can speak, arrows are riddled through Claire.
She lifts in the air as the black points stick out in tips through her hair.
I whistle,
"I'm here!"
Sprint like a deer, drawing attention to stare.
Janene sees one that's passing, leans in for stabbing down his knee to the calf limb.
Intensity, fear as Anne kills him, I hear the knife enter his ear. Double teaming reaction: repeatedly jabbing while he bleeds til he passes.
Our eyes meet with the last man, my feet races at him, clutching the silverware tightly
like they're needed attachments for defeating assassins with silent kills through the night's breeze.
As we begin to fight, he quickly gets me directly in my eyes.
No sense of sight, but still I send the knife into his inner thigh.
Then I cry loudly and footsteps are rushing, hoping they end his life.
I feel the body stiffen on top of me dripping, he wasn't too quick to die.
They get this guy off me and we go to the city, knowing we're pretty
plus Anne's over 18 and can get paid for showing her titties.
I know that it's grisly, but I'm nobody's ditsy, chauvinists kitty.
No longer the pet, I'm stronger than that and this is doe that comes quickly.

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Pie wins. Sorry about the no show man. Two in a row sucks I know.
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