Knucklehead vs Sharp[OPEN [KNUCK WINS]

Inno · 10-01-2018, 08:39 PM

NWL:Season I: Week III

Verses ares due: FRIDAY at 11:59 PM EST

Voting ends: SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST

Line Limit: Minimum:10 lines, Max: 30

Voting on 2 battles is required.

TOPIC:

THIS WEEK IS HAIKU GUNBAR WEEK PRETTY SELF EXPLANATORY. FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO DONT KNOW WHAT A HAIKU IS. ITS A JAPANESE FORM OF POETRY CONSISTING OF 17 TOTAL SYLLABLES.FIRST LINE IS 5, SECOND LINE IS 7 AND LAST LINE IS 5. SINCE ITS ONLY 3 LINES, THIS WEEK YOU HAVE WRITE 3 SEPARATE GUNBAR HAIKUS, SO A TOTAL OF 9 LINES. PRETTY EASY. VOTING WILL BE EXPLAINED IN THE MAG.

GOODLUCK.

@knuclehead @Sharp

Sharp · 10-01-2018, 09:22 PM

here we go

Sharp · 10-03-2018, 09:20 PM

Killer. Unfeeling,
cold as ice. Ironic, the
heater fires often.

Aiming at your squad.
Rounds, like repressed memories,
embedded in minds.

Chrome remove any
trace of your existence. That's
Incognito mode.

~RustyGunZ~ · 10-07-2018, 07:16 PM

Bullets dance about
Spin midair, Ballerinas
Those heatseeking rounds

Best armor up kid
And you betta check ya brakes
Metal on metal

Headshot with the snub
Put noodles outside mugs
And this ain’t craft day

Adonis · 10-08-2018, 01:57 AM

Sharp: First haiku ends in 6 syl. to me.

just cause you put a coma, in the
middle of a sentence don't make
it haiku. What's unfeeling?

Knock: First 'ku is the best of this battle.

Craft day was a shitty rhyme other than a few nice cuplets.

Honestly....I had hoped you guys strung the 3 haiku's into 6 bars or so and punch with some swag and flow type shit....aint that why you signed in here? With that said, Knuck had the better 3

v/Khead

Inno · 10-08-2018, 08:02 PM

Thought knucks first ku was his best one. Thought sharps second ku was his best. Out of the 2 I got Knuck edging it out with a bit more smoothness. Feel like knucks was more comfortable with the topic and it kind of showed. Thanks for showing up fellas

Knuck wins

10-01-2018, 08:39 PM	#1
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Knucklehead vs Sharp[OPEN [KNUCK WINS] NWL:Season I: Week III Verses ares due: FRIDAY at 11:59 PM EST Voting ends: SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST Line Limit: Minimum:10 lines, Max: 30 Voting on 2 battles is required. TOPIC: THIS WEEK IS HAIKU GUNBAR WEEK PRETTY SELF EXPLANATORY. FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO DONT KNOW WHAT A HAIKU IS. ITS A JAPANESE FORM OF POETRY CONSISTING OF 17 TOTAL SYLLABLES.FIRST LINE IS 5, SECOND LINE IS 7 AND LAST LINE IS 5. SINCE ITS ONLY 3 LINES, THIS WEEK YOU HAVE WRITE 3 SEPARATE GUNBAR HAIKUS, SO A TOTAL OF 9 LINES. PRETTY EASY. VOTING WILL BE EXPLAINED IN THE MAG. GOODLUCK. @knuclehead @Sharp Last edited by Inno; 10-08-2018 at 08:03 PM.

10-08-2018, 01:57 AM	#5
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	Sharp: First haiku ends in 6 syl. to me. just cause you put a coma, in the middle of a sentence don't make it haiku. What's unfeeling? Knock: First 'ku is the best of this battle. Craft day was a shitty rhyme other than a few nice cuplets. Honestly....I had hoped you guys strung the 3 haiku's into 6 bars or so and punch with some swag and flow type shit....aint that why you signed in here? With that said, Knuck had the better 3 v/Khead __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

10-01-2018, 09:22 PM	#2
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	here we go

10-03-2018, 09:20 PM	#3
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	Killer. Unfeeling, cold as ice. Ironic, the heater fires often. Aiming at your squad. Rounds, like repressed memories, embedded in minds. Chrome remove any trace of your existence. That's Incognito mode.

10-08-2018, 08:02 PM	#6
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Thought knucks first ku was his best one. Thought sharps second ku was his best. Out of the 2 I got Knuck edging it out with a bit more smoothness. Feel like knucks was more comfortable with the topic and it kind of showed. Thanks for showing up fellas Knuck wins