WK 8: Lenox 3-2 vs. Barcotic 2-1 - Barcotic WINS!!

[Incredible]

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due FRIDAY JUNE 29th! and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Edit Rules:

• 1st Person can edit until his opponent drops
• 2nd Person can edit until the first vote is posted

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE

@Lenox @Barcotic

[Lenox]

Fucking faggot @Incredible

[Lenox]

Also change my record to 3-5

[Barcotic]

yo

[Lenox]

8 lol

[Barcotic]

*16




there's more
i dont reply

iunno what u seek, punk. but pleeease trust, its not me
in fact my first response will be the ambulance that cleans up ur body
iont wanna chat w/ a knob + the crap u would drop is brutal
u think im nice with the Penne?
unfortunately i just wanna slap u across the noodle
im NOT playing. who's the twat aiding wiggers?
u obviously got ghost writers.. and resemble one so stop saying nigger
bringin thugs to ur base, only to find a sudden escape route
spend a Dana White guy's mindstate n u'll see why ur company hates u
everything about u is horrible. ur a deplorable, fake brat
when the laser touches ya cheek itll be removing more than ur face tat
ima murk ock. he may curse, claw n fight
but talent? bad optometrists; Lenses among the worst on the Sight
u'll never get ahead depending on rent perks from mommy
next time u drop out of a school, make sure its head first on concrete
ima tell u ONE time. u a dumb, slimey twerp poser
so gtfoh & dont come Backhoe 'fore u get crushed by my work loader

gl

[For Battling]

Originally Posted by Lenox

Shut up faggot

Lmao

I’ll edit this with feel


This is some 8th amendment type shit tho. Cruel & unusual punishment.

[Jabari Black]

iunno what u seek, punk. but pleeease trust, its not me
in fact my first response will be the ambulance that cleans up ur body

(Lmaooo this was dope with the pics. This would have just been pretty good without the pics but with them this is pretty harsh)

iont wanna chat w/ a knob + the crap u would drop is brutal
u think im nice with the Penne?
unfortunately i just wanna slap u across the noodle

(Okay. Most noodle flips gonna feel a bit played unless the punch is crazy. I like the personal though - tying back to the pics)

im NOT playing. who's the twat aiding wiggers?
u obviously got ghost writers.. and resemble one so stop saying nigger

(Barc channeling his inner Cereal - I see you bro. Lol for real this is okay. The personal angle was cool but the ghost writer/bring white flip was pretty basic. Okay overall)

bringin thugs to ur base, only to find a sudden escape route
spend a Dana White guy's mindstate n u'll see why ur company hates u

(This was good. The Day inna/Dana flips is a bit of a reach but I understood it immediately so that get a pass. The ‘you’ll see why ur company hates u’ part is pretty slick though. Pretty good overall.

everything about u is horrible. ur a deplorable, fake brat
when the laser touches ya cheek itll be removing more than ur face tat

(I like this. Punch is simple but it’s effective. Has a personal touch as well)

ima murk ock. he may curse, claw n fight
but talent? bad optometrists; Lenses among the worst on the Sight

(Someone - I think bongo bear - had a lenses/lens is flip last week. Other than that, this woulda been fine)

u'll never get ahead depending on rent perks from mommy
next time u drop out of a school, make sure its head first on concrete

(Once again, the punch ain’t crazy but I like the personal angles)

ima tell u ONE time. u a dumb, slimey twerp poser
so gtfoh & dont come Backhoe 'fore u get crushed by my work load

(What the yee haw hell is this? Lol jk I had no idea what a backhoe is but the wp checks out. ‘Crushed by my work load’ is just a weird phrase/diss. I see how it ties in to the wp, but the second meaning isn’t really there. Decent)


Lmaooo bruh this verse was flames. I thought the verse as a whole was greater than the sum of its parts. The individual bars were dope but when you read the whole verse straight through it feels really brutal/harsh. It looks even worse that Lenox quit because of it.

Barc really been doing his thing. Every verse has been fire with his only loss being in a dope battle with orc. Keep the up bro.

[Blue Bayou]

Pretty dope throughout... didnt looove the laser face tat bar ... lenses i did last week and backhoe has been done b4 .. that said the flips were cool enough, everything else was fire and above avg

Nice drop

[Barcotic]

Originally Posted by Jabari Black

iunno what u seek, punk. but pleeease trust, its not me
in fact my first response will be the ambulance that cleans up ur body

(Lmaooo this was dope with the pics. This would have just been pretty good without the pics but with them this is pretty harsh)

iont wanna chat w/ a knob + the crap u would drop is brutal
u think im nice with the Penne?
unfortunately i just wanna slap u across the noodle

(Okay. Most noodle flips gonna feel a bit played unless the punch is crazy. I like the personal though - tying back to the pics)

im NOT playing. who's the twat aiding wiggers?
u obviously got ghost writers.. and resemble one so stop saying nigger

(Barc channeling his inner Cereal - I see you bro. Lol for real this is okay. The personal angle was cool but the ghost writer/bring white flip was pretty basic. Okay overall)

bringin thugs to ur base, only to find a sudden escape route
spend a Dana White guy's mindstate n u'll see why ur company hates u

(This was good. The Day inna/Dana flips is a bit of a reach but I understood it immediately so that get a pass. The ‘you’ll see why ur company hates u’ part is pretty slick though. Pretty good overall.

everything about u is horrible. ur a deplorable, fake brat
when the laser touches ya cheek itll be removing more than ur face tat

(I like this. Punch is simple but it’s effective. Has a personal touch as well)

ima murk ock. he may curse, claw n fight
but talent? bad optometrists; Lenses among the worst on the Sight

(Someone - I think bongo bear - had a lenses/lens is flip last week. Other than that, this woulda been fine)

u'll never get ahead depending on rent perks from mommy
next time u drop out of a school, make sure its head first on concrete

(Once again, the punch ain’t crazy but I like the personal angles)

ima tell u ONE time. u a dumb, slimey twerp poser
so gtfoh & dont come Backhoe 'fore u get crushed by my work load

(What the yee haw hell is this? Lol jk I had no idea what a backhoe is but the wp checks out. ‘Crushed by my work load’ is just a weird phrase/diss. I see how it ties in to the wp, but the second meaning isn’t really there. Decent)


Lmaooo bruh this verse was flames. I thought the verse as a whole was greater than the sum of its parts. The individual bars were dope but when you read the whole verse straight through it feels really brutal/harsh. It looks even worse that Lenox quit because of it.

Barc really been doing his thing. Every verse has been fire with his only loss being in a dope battle with orc. Keep the up bro.

*loader
which is another name for a backhoe
thanks for the feedback guys, voting soon

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

iunno what u seek, punk. but pleeease trust, its not me
in fact my first response will be the ambulance that cleans up ur body
clever concept, awkward wording
iont wanna chat w/ a knob + the crap u would drop is brutal
u think im nice with the Penne?
unfortunately i just wanna slap u across the noodle
I hate 3-liners, this didn't change my opinion
im NOT playing. who's the twat aiding wiggers?
u obviously got ghost writers.. and resemble one so stop saying nigger
Decent
bringin thugs to ur base, only to find a sudden escape route
spend a Dana White guy's mindstate n u'll see why ur company hates u
Clean & concise
everything about u is horrible. ur a deplorable, fake brat
when the laser touches ya cheek itll be removing more than ur face tat
Nice
ima murk ock. he may curse, claw n fight
but talent? bad optometrists; Lenses among the worst on the Sight
had potential, but site/sight ruined it
u'll never get ahead depending on rent perks from mommy
next time u drop out of a school, make sure its head first on concrete
Simple, yet harsh
ima tell u ONE time. u a dumb, slimey twerp poser
so gtfoh & dont come Backhoe 'fore u get crushed by my work loader
Ok closer

Nothing crazy, but he bitched out anyway..smh.

[Cereal]

bad optometrists; Lenses

was badass..
nice show up..
keep it up..