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04-07-2014, 01:41 AM
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Paragraphs aka really bad longbar
make it stop please
I thought text was beyond multi syllable filler banter rhyming and died with the shitty longbar sites that is all. Last edited by Paradigm; 04-07-2014 at 01:43 AM. |
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04-07-2014, 02:58 AM
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Who cares how a verse is structured? It's the words that matter.
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04-07-2014, 03:03 AM
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Its a trend Bwhaha started
Now everyones doing it Word I dont really like it to be honest its kinda off putting but if you're dope theres an exception |
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04-07-2014, 03:16 AM
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Hate it, always have and always will...only a few can pull it off successfully and even then it's still a chore to read.
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04-07-2014, 03:35 AM
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04-07-2014, 06:31 AM
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its very rare that any text verse posted ISN'T a chore to read
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04-07-2014, 06:33 AM
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Hmm gotta disagree uh-oh, depends who you readin' bro.
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04-07-2014, 09:40 AM
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Split>Para
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04-07-2014, 12:20 PM
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Ppl complain about the dumbest shit lol
It's just a different way of formatting a piece, if formatted normally the lines would not necessarily be long. Paragraphs and longbar are two different things.
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04-07-2014, 12:24 PM
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Lol think how fucking retarded this nigga would sound in a rl cypher. Like uhhh, that was paragraph dude your wack..
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04-07-2014, 12:48 PM
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Yeah. The way people look at this shit is mind numbingly ignorant. It's more a difference in writing process than reading. It reads the same way no matter how it's formatted. Anyone who doesn't see that needs to understand how programmed their way of looking at things is. There is no spoon, man.
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04-07-2014, 01:27 PM
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Some ppl can do it dope tho.
SOME ppl. |
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04-07-2014, 01:32 PM
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04-07-2014, 01:41 PM
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04-07-2014, 01:50 PM
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The problem with "long-bar" battling is that it often comes with really, really shitty wordplay and an attempt to squeeze said wordplay into every single phrase. Those verses are not bad because of their formatting but because of their clutter and lack of impact.
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04-07-2014, 03:27 PM
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funny thing about whats going on in here is that text was more a live than ever when shitty multies and paragraph styles were abundant. now they have dissapeared... so have loyal texters. anyone ever thought about it from that angle?
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04-07-2014, 03:54 PM
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04-07-2014, 03:56 PM
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- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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also, Ive written in stanzas many times. Infact I probably do it more often. Also, theres writers who post 4 sentences a stanza, center aligned that dont go attacked lol. But I can see why something different can be seen as impractical.
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04-07-2014, 03:58 PM
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Comparing styles of text for relevance <-> determining how much hand contact is too homo at the circlejerk
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