ELITE 8: DMS vs DynamiCz DY WINS

[bleak]

Rules

Due Dates:
Verses are due FRIDAY August 3rd! and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
Minimum of 8, maximum of 20
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Edit Rules:
1st Person can edit until his opponent drops
2nd Person can edit until the first vote is posted

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE

@DMS @DynamiCz

[DMS]

12-16
Cereal don’t vote pls,

[DynamiCz]

12 ready when you are holmes

[DMS]

Might need ext.

[DynamiCz]

Bet that

[DMS]

Ext.

[DynamiCz]

Son idk if you showing or not, but imma send my shit to @bleak just incase right now

[bleak]

Confirmed @DMS

[For Battling]

Below -b

[DMS]

Can we go 8? @DynamiCz sorry I got 8 if that’s fine

[DMS]

Gun so big, I got a cannon at my shoulder like Michael Vick, bullets knock him back farther than a Josh Allen throw
My ruling on this field is always upheld surprised you took some timeout, do not challenge, bro.
I’ll be showing him the stick whiles he’s in bed, don’t try n hide brother, just like with Dy’s mother I’m close
Maybe just cock the bat, since I’m a fly swatted, if Dy wanna go, this bugs insides might color my cloths
I won’t rest the gat until his body’s 6 feet in land and nothing on his Stone slab is written.
At a party, it’s like high school student who hate Chemistry lab, ain’t no body glad when ‘mics in.
All my guns accord, I’m wired to kill, if you don’t think I’ll brawl all out yet
I’ll be putting metal in you n never get a charge, that’s what we call a broken wall outlet.

[bleak]

DynamiCz:

Change ya tone..or have the led mark you a X-that's a chromosome
Headshot..When this instrument in my hand create a concussion..it aint a idiophone
Imma get you gone...the trey five on each side of his cheek...Home Alone
Gun literally big as human! The 38..keep eyes on this 19 year old like a chaperone
3-0? Today the surge die! U'll be shock...they thinking the lost why
Laser beam...it's cause i sat a lite through his chest like The Cable Guy
I grab the knife, catch ya pops drinking his beers...make him beg for life
Then i snatch ya moms up! She'll be missing out a Full House-Danny Tanners Wife
Circle back, if the witness told...im talking mid convo right before he fold
Flash from the cam..then clips catch him confessing at the table--First48 Episode
I got you nervous...black mask with the machete! At ya door on some purge shit
The machine dispose all..when I hang off the truck dumping like a sanitation service

[Twodrop]

Gun so big, I got a cannon at my shoulder like Michael Vick, bullets knock him back farther than a Josh Allen throw
My ruling on this field is always upheld surprised you took some timeout, do not challenge, bro.
I see what u did, the punch didn't hit hard enuf. Miss for me
I’ll be showing him the stick whiles he’s in bed, don’t try n hide brother, just like with Dy’s mother I’m close
Maybe just cock the bat, since I’m a fly swatted, if Dy wanna go, this bugs insides might color my cloths
lots going on here fam, not following
I won’t rest the gat until his body’s 6 feet in land and nothing on his Stone slab is written.
At a party, it’s like high school student who hate Chemistry lab, ain’t no body glad when ‘mics in.
lol...Appreciate the attempt, but na...
All my guns accord, I’m wired to kill, if you don’t think I’ll brawl all out yet
I’ll be putting metal in you n never get a charge, that’s what we call a broken wall outlet
Concept a bit played, ur execution was cool tho, this was coo

Change ya tone..or have the led mark you a X-that's a chromosome
Headshot..When this instrument in my hand create a concussion..it aint a idiophone
hmm, not feeling this one
Imma get you gone...the trey five on each side of his cheek...Home Alone
Gun literally big as human! The 38..keep eyes on this 19 year old like a chaperone
lol fks w/ it
3-0? Today the surge die! U'll be shock...they thinking the lost why
Laser beam...it's cause i sat a lite through his chest like The Cable Guy
wp kind of a stretch, concept was coo, wording made it a tad awkward for me...Still ok
I grab the knife, catch ya pops drinking his beers...make him beg for life
Then i snatch ya moms up! She'll be missing out a Full House-Danny Tanners Wife
light
Circle back, if the witness told...im talking mid convo right before he fold
Flash from the cam..then clips catch him confessing at the table--First48 Episode
thought execution was lacking a bit here, was coo, thought it could've been a haymaker
I got you nervous...black mask with the machete! At ya door on some purge shit
The machine dispose all..when I hang off the truck dumping like a sanitation service
fire

DMS was obviously rushed and it showed. I get this won't get many votes because it's 8 vs 12 lines... but fuck it. DynamiCz had some standouts for sure, he did enough for the W here. Hyped to see him in the final four.

v/ Dy

[bleak]

It was like 3am, I didn't notice you went 8. He sent me 12, so technically he posted first and u have to match @DMS if he wants to edit down that's on him but there's a vote in already. Better than a Dq I guess? We can still feed ur bars this way.

[Jabari Black]

Gun so big, I got a cannon at my shoulder like Michael Vick, bullets knock him back farther than a Josh Allen throw
My ruling on this field is always upheld surprised you took some timeout, do not challenge, bro.

(This lines to long. The scheme wasn’t bad but it had too much going on. Plus it’s easy to do that kinda word association when your bars are so long. Miss but not by much)

I’ll be showing him the stick whiles he’s in bed, don’t try n hide brother, just like with Dy’s mother I’m close
Maybe just cock the bat, since I’m a fly swatted, if Dy wanna go, this bugs insides might color my cloths

(You channeled your inner 2trip in this one lol. I google bars I don’t get but I don’t even know what I would google lol. This was all over the place)

I won’t rest the gat until his body’s 6 feet in land and nothing on his Stone slab is written.
At a party, it’s like high school student who hate Chemistry lab, ain’t no body glad when ‘mics in.

(I like this. The wp was cool. Your wording held this back but you’ll improve that if you keep battling)

All my guns accord, I’m wired to kill, if you don’t think I’ll brawl all out yet
I’ll be putting metal in you n never get a charge, that’s what we call a broken wall outlet.

(GOOOO! Lol my nigga this is nasty. Accord wp and wired tie in were dope. The punch itself was dope. Good work)



Change ya tone..or have the led mark you a X-that's a chromosome
Headshot..When this instrument in my hand create a concussion..it aint a idiophone

(Team google is outchea. So a concussion idiophone is aparently an instrument but I have no idea what kind. The punch checks out but this reference is obscure. Punch in the setup was pretty good though. Overall this landed - but not by much)

Imma get you gone...the trey five on each side of his cheek...Home Alone
Gun literally big as human! The 38..keep eyes on this 19 year old like a chaperone

(Nice! The punch in the setup was pretty dope. I’m feeling the actual punch as well)

3-0? Today the surge die! U'll be shock...they thinking the lost why
Laser beam...it's cause i sat a lite through his chest like The Cable Guy

(This is a jab. The wp was good imo but ive heard satellite flips before.)

I grab the knife, catch ya pops drinking his beers...make him beg for life
Then i snatch ya moms up! She'll be missing out a Full House-Danny Tanners Wife

(Lol idk if everyone likes it but I like the “catch a nigga doing something stupid” type punches. It’s adds a bit of variety since your styles almost all gun bars. The punch here was pretty nice)

Circle back, if the witness told...im talking mid convo right before he fold
Flash from the cam..then clips catch him confessing at the table--First48 Episode

(Hmm this was between okay and pretty good)

I got you nervous...black mask with the machete! At ya door on some purge shit
The machine dispose all..when I hang off the truck dumping like a sanitation service

(Fire. Woulda been LOTB if DMS ain’t pull that crazy line outta nowhere)



Bruh DMS - you’re almost there my nigga. I honestly enjoy reading your verses cus I know you’re gonna have some slick punches and wp. And that closer was fire imo. You just gotta adapt your style for text battling.

Unfortunately, Dynamicz just has better execution than you at this stage of your text career. I also think you got outpunched - that nigga wasn’t really missing this battle...plus you had 4 fewer lines lol.

Dynamicz good consistent verse man. I think you took this one comfortably.

Mvgt Dynamicz

[bleak]

FB's vote:

Gun so big, I got a cannon at my shoulder like Michael Vick, bullets knock him back farther than a Josh Allen throw
My ruling on this field is always upheld surprised you took some timeout, do not challenge, bro.
nah wasn’t feelin this man
I’ll be showing him the stick whiles he’s in bed, don’t try n hide brother, just like with Dy’s mother I’m close
Maybe just cock the bat, since I’m a fly swatted, if Dy wanna go, this bugs insides might color my cloths
what? Lmao wayyyy too much happening here. You need to work on simplifying your lines bro
I won’t rest the gat until his body’s 6 feet in land and nothing on his Stone slab is written.
At a party, it’s like high school student who hate Chemistry lab, ain’t no body glad when ‘mics in.
lol decent
All my guns accord, I’m wired to kill, if you don’t think I’ll brawl all out yet
I’ll be putting metal in you n never get a charge, that’s what we call a broken wall outlet.
this was dope af


Vs


Change ya tone..or have the led mark you a X-that's a chromosome
Headshot..When this instrument in my hand create a concussion..it aint a idiophone
alright cool
Imma get you gone...the trey five on each side of his cheek...Home Alone
Gun literally big as human! The 38..keep eyes on this 19 year old like a chaperone
damn the chaperone/38 concept and scheme had mad potential but wasn’t really feelin how you did it here. Decent for me
3-0? Today the surge die! U'll be shock...they thinking the lost why
Laser beam...it's cause i sat a lite through his chest like The Cable Guy
alright
I grab the knife, catch ya pops drinking his beers...make him beg for life
Then i snatch ya moms up! She'll be missing out a Full House-Danny Tanners Wife
Alright here
Circle back, if the witness told...im talking mid convo right before he fold
Flash from the cam..then clips catch him confessing at the table--First48 Episode
nice!
I got you nervous...black mask with the machete! At ya door on some purge shit
The machine dispose all..when I hang off the truck dumping like a sanitation service
pretty cool


DynamiCz caught a body here frfr. DMS had LOTB for me with his closer, that shit was nice. But DynamiCz came extremely consistent here and had no clear misses. Props to both for showing but I gotta give it to DynamiCz.

Vote DynamiCz

[bleak]

Originally Posted by DMS

Gun so big, I got a cannon at my shoulder like Michael Vick, bullets knock him back farther than a Josh Allen throw
My ruling on this field is always upheld surprised you took some timeout, do not challenge, bro.
-punctuation plz first of all lol. You maybe should have kept the setup general, so im not expecting a flip on those specific players. I get where it was going but no

I’ll be showing him the stick whiles he’s in bed, don’t try n hide brother, just like with Dy’s mother I’m close
Maybe just cock the bat, since I’m a fly swatted, if Dy wanna go, this bugs insides might color my cloths
-Since I'm a fly swatted? Did u mean swatter? Need to proofread just like KS. Besides that, too much.

I won’t rest the gat until his body’s 6 feet in land and nothing on his Stone slab is written.
At a party, it’s like high school student who hate Chemistry lab, ain’t no body glad when ‘mics in.
-mix wp's don't really work with Dy, it just isn't enough to justify a partial nameplay. Respect the setup too could have tied in some more. Expand ur concepts.

All my guns accord, I’m wired to kill, if you don’t think I’ll brawl all out yet
I’ll be putting metal in you n never get a charge, that’s what we call a broken wall outlet.
-i like this one, the wired to kill was a cool way to tie in, this is what u need to stick to.

Originally Posted by bleak

DynamiCz:

Change ya tone..or have the led mark you a X-that's a chromosome
Headshot..When this instrument in my hand create a concussion..it aint a idiophone
-instrument concussion is pretty played
Imma get you gone...the trey five on each side of his cheek...Home Alone
Gun literally big as human! The 38..keep eyes on this 19 year old like a chaperone
-gun literally big as human fucking slated me lmao. This shit is simple effective
3-0? Today the surge die! U'll be shock...they thinking the lost why
Laser beam...it's cause i sat a lite through his chest like The Cable Guy
-maybe sat a lite on his chest but not through, damn. Also the wording. Like was the cable guy carrying a satellite? Why is it through his chest? Maybe I'm overthinking.
I grab the knife, catch ya pops drinking his beers...make him beg for life
Then i snatch ya moms up! She'll be missing out a Full House-Danny Tanners Wife
-Mrs. Turner was never missing, she died. Right? Or idk its cool tho it works
Circle back, if the witness told...im talking mid convo right before he fold
Flash from the cam..then clips catch him confessing at the table--First48 Episode
-i like this
I got you nervous...black mask with the machete! At ya door on some purge shit
The machine dispose all..when I hang off the truck dumping like a sanitation service
-yes

DMS getting better for sure. Dy had enough here I think but next week you need more like those last 2. Not like the gunbar aspect just the wording was better. I over read ur verse I think it's late lol u got it tho

Dy

[BodySnatcher]

Gun so big, I got a cannon at my shoulder like Michael Vick, bullets knock him back farther than a Josh Allen throw
My ruling on this field is always upheld surprised you took some timeout, do not challenge, bro.
good concept, finisher was lackliuster tho
I’ll be showing him the stick whiles he’s in bed, don’t try n hide brother, just like with Dy’s mother I’m close
Maybe just cock the bat, since I’m a fly swatted, if Dy wanna go, this bugs insides might color my cloths
shorten the bars or make them flow/rhyme more
I won’t rest the gat until his body’s 6 feet in land and nothing on his Stone slab is written.
At a party, it’s like high school student who hate Chemistry lab, ain’t no body glad when ‘mics in.
decent
All my guns accord, I’m wired to kill, if you don’t think I’ll brawl all out yet
I’ll be putting metal in you n never get a charge, that’s what we call a broken wall outlet.
you are getting there homie




Change ya tone..or have the led mark you a X-that's a chromosome
Headshot..When this instrument in my hand create a concussion..it aint a idiophone
ok ok
Imma get you gone...the trey five on each side of his cheek...Home Alone
Gun literally big as human! The 38..keep eyes on this 19 year old like a chaperone
this cool here
3-0? Today the surge die! U'll be shock...they thinking the lost why
Laser beam...it's cause i sat a lite through his chest like The Cable Guy
didnt get this one homie
I grab the knife, catch ya pops drinking his beers...make him beg for life
Then i snatch ya moms up! She'll be missing out a Full House-Danny Tanners Wife
lol word
Circle back, if the witness told...im talking mid convo right before he fold
Flash from the cam..then clips catch him confessing at the table--First48 Episode
dope
I got you nervous...black mask with the machete! At ya door on some purge shit
The machine dispose all..when I hang off the truck dumping like a sanitation service
dope again

Damn that soft ass tagger was right, v/Dyn

[bleak]

DynamiCz WINS 5-0