SO WHO IN THE TOP 30 TOPICAL HEADS HERE HAVE I A LOSS TO THAT HASNT BEEN AVENGED YET? - Page 3

King Soul · 07-24-2015, 03:09 PM

No. Lol. Just trying to get a battle outta you man.

dead man · 07-24-2015, 03:38 PM

What's up Jon?

King Soul · 07-24-2015, 04:10 PM

What's up, Zombie?

PancakeBrah · 07-24-2015, 05:43 PM

We've never battled, that I recall.

Not that I'm good for showing up or writing nowadays. Sad emoji.

Ghost1 · 07-24-2015, 07:02 PM

Dan

I think I drunk dialed ur pm box

Why don't u wanna chill w me no more?

I got a new sales job. I'm Finna have way too much money an there will be really good threads due to this. Come home dancake!!!

Vulgar · 07-24-2015, 07:20 PM

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Originally Posted by Bags

Dan

I think I drunk dialed ur pm box

Why don't u wanna chill w me no more?

I got a new sales job. I'm Finna have way too much money an there will be really good threads due to this. Come home dancake!!!

Good job on acquiring your new position. I'm sure the moolah will come rolling in, as will the lols. Good day sir.

Vulgar · 07-24-2015, 07:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Dancake

We've never battled, that I recall.

Not that I'm good for showing up or writing nowadays. Sad emoji.

Sup factott?

why u been duckin the poem league?

Ghost1 · 07-24-2015, 07:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Vulgar

Good job on acquiring your new position. I'm sure the moolah will come rolling in, as will the lols. Good day sir.

It's all coming together my G. thank u for ur kind words.

Soulstice · 07-24-2015, 07:24 PM

We never battled Lars.

PancakeBrah · 07-24-2015, 07:26 PM

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Originally Posted by Vulgar

Sup factott?

why u been duckin the poem league?

I wouldn't know the first thing about writing a poem. I don't get it. Is it a text verse w/o rhyming? u w0t?

roses are red
go fuck yourself vulgar

there's my poem.

Witty · 07-24-2015, 07:32 PM

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Originally Posted by King Soul

What's up, Zombie?

It isn't zombie, it's black.

Ghost1 · 07-24-2015, 07:34 PM

Ay dagel fuck u. Piece of shit. Cry fucked ur girl on ur back while u complimented his stroke an then u ate veggie pizzas alone drinking water Makin a youtube vid about rb crews.

U will be the LAST fagkt from rb to make the transfer here. AND EVEN THEN U WILL BE MET WITH RESISTANCE. FUCKING COWARD DORK LONELY FAGOT DIRTBAG LOSER WEORDO

PancakeBrah · 07-24-2015, 07:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bags

Dan

I think I drunk dialed ur pm box

Why don't u wanna chill w me no more?

I got a new sales job. I'm Finna have way too much money an there will be really good threads due to this. Come home dancake!!!

I'm going to wallow in self pity and get drunk by myself tonight.

I can't relate to rich people like you and Knuck anymore.

Witty · 07-24-2015, 07:52 PM

@Dancake it's ok I'm still poor :D

PancakeBrah · 07-24-2015, 07:53 PM

I apologize for no showing, Witty. I'll carry that weight until the day I die.

Ghost1 · 07-24-2015, 08:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dancake

I'm going to wallow in self pity and get drunk by myself tonight.

I can't relate to rich people like you and Knuck anymore.

Dan I'm still poor tho!

For now!

I applied for ur mortgage analyst job with local credit union recently an was denied. U are the real fancy pants.

PancakeBrah · 07-24-2015, 08:10 PM

I think the Indian kid who rides his Razor around my apartment complex is putting nails and other objects into my tires. Two months ago it was an alan wrench that only cost $30 to fix. Today was a nail in the sidewall which lead to me buying two new tires. I still suspect he broke into my car the first week I moved here. Or it could be the punk ass 19-21 year old who moved in. He plays rap music in his rice box piece of shit car too loud. He was hanging out around it with his mom and girlfriend one day. I got out of my car. He said 'Yeah' pretty loud. Probably wasn't directed at me. I thought it was. I stopped and yelled 'Yeah!', staring at them. Then walked away yelling 'yeah!' a couple more times. Losing my mind. That combined with the deaf lady's dog next door, I don't know. Cake about to catch a body soon.

Ghost1 · 07-24-2015, 08:16 PM

Lol man .... did u ever learn those wolf whistles I told u about?

That plan should be getting ready to pay off.

Vulgar · 07-24-2015, 11:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dancake

I wouldn't know the first thing about writing a poem. I don't get it. Is it a text verse w/o rhyming? u w0t?

roses are red
go fuck yourself vulgar

there's my poem.

Okay...

Take your best bar you've ever written in an open mic. (One bar, just one).
Maximize and lengthen that bar by a few "stanzas" while going into more depth or by executing different things with language that you didn't otherwise.

This is poetry. It doesn't have to rhyme to "activate" something in the reader, which is what it intends to do. It's like fancier fortune cookie strips, only it's really not fancy at all. Some writers are blunt with it, others are extravagant. Pick your approach.

Good luck, bro.

PancakeBrah · 07-24-2015, 11:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vulgar

Okay...

Take your best bar you've ever written in an open mic. (One bar, just one).
Maximize and lengthen that bar by a few "stanzas" while going into more depth or by executing different things with language that you didn't otherwise.

This is poetry. It doesn't have to rhyme to "activate" something in the reader, which is what it intends to do. It's like fancier fortune cookie strips, only it's really not fancy at all. Some writers are blunt with it, others are extravagant. Pick your approach.

Good luck, bro.

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07-24-2015, 03:38 PM	#42
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,467 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	What's up Jon? __________________ Zack Wicks for president

07-24-2015, 05:43 PM	#44
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	We've never battled, that I recall. Not that I'm good for showing up or writing nowadays. Sad emoji. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

07-24-2015, 07:52 PM	#54
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,794 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	@Dancake it's ok I'm still poor :D __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

07-24-2015, 07:53 PM	#55
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	I apologize for no showing, Witty. I'll carry that weight until the day I die. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

07-24-2015, 08:10 PM	#57
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	I think the Indian kid who rides his Razor around my apartment complex is putting nails and other objects into my tires. Two months ago it was an alan wrench that only cost $30 to fix. Today was a nail in the sidewall which lead to me buying two new tires. I still suspect he broke into my car the first week I moved here. Or it could be the punk ass 19-21 year old who moved in. He plays rap music in his rice box piece of shit car too loud. He was hanging out around it with his mom and girlfriend one day. I got out of my car. He said 'Yeah' pretty loud. Probably wasn't directed at me. I thought it was. I stopped and yelled 'Yeah!', staring at them. Then walked away yelling 'yeah!' a couple more times. Losing my mind. That combined with the deaf lady's dog next door, I don't know. Cake about to catch a body soon. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me? Last edited by PancakeBrah; 07-24-2015 at 08:13 PM.

07-24-2015, 03:09 PM	#41
King Soul Returning to the Throne Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 24 Rep Power: 0	No. Lol. Just trying to get a battle outta you man.

07-24-2015, 04:10 PM	#43
King Soul Returning to the Throne Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 24 Rep Power: 0	What's up, Zombie?

07-24-2015, 07:34 PM	#52
Ghost1 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 26,349 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 84181442	Ay dagel fuck u. Piece of shit. Cry fucked ur girl on ur back while u complimented his stroke an then u ate veggie pizzas alone drinking water Makin a youtube vid about rb crews. U will be the LAST fagkt from rb to make the transfer here. AND EVEN THEN U WILL BE MET WITH RESISTANCE. FUCKING COWARD DORK LONELY FAGOT DIRTBAG LOSER WEORDO