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Old 07-26-2021, 11:39 PM   #3121
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Shortchanged too much to occupy space
Folks chose wall street with a coffee & cake
Praised the oddities & fakes, watching each take
Jotting each idea before the apologies came
"I don't want time behind bars" moderately tame...
Slang for days mocha, yadididamean lame?
Pocket these mate...keep em for emergency
And when it pops off, set them off quick....
When I turn and see you need help...
Shiiiiiit then the time I take will be an eternity
Beat who to the punch? That's absurd to me
Weaving these words together just occured to me
And when others say it flows perfectly.
I switch it up and smack they bitch up
Get down to the beat & snatch up this club
Go caveman whomp & swiggity swoop
Ya ideas wickity wickity wickity wack.
Word to the industry crew...
And your momma...
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Old 07-27-2021, 06:00 AM   #3122
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Five minutes left at work, hiding in the bathroom stall
Put me on a high pedestal and betcha that my ass gon fall
It’s not so tragic once you get used to the mediocre views
Demons so mighty you’ll wanna bring the Vatican n Pope with you
No money but I’m raw, who’s dope as this broke dude?
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the shit i go through? stains your carpet after i break into your apartment
looking for narcotics, trashing your house like law enforcement, it's court supported,
the judge is on board with it, the legal documents, the ones you ignored and wished
would disappear into a void, and this Child support and divorce, didn't exist?
Well, guess what? this is as real as it gets, blood, sweat, and tears spill from the pen,
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story line : I portray the role as God, who years later had found out that I had a father of whom I had not forgiven due to our past differences. In this story line, God (who is portrayed by myself) has a father of whom had lost his mind in the process of training in his sorcery, only to discover his most inner evil secrets and in his darkest moments, had created me prior to his disappearance.

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as I stare into the eyes of my father in heaven,
I question the many trials and tribulations I've liven//
we share words with one another but our conversation has driven,
to places only our hearts know for mistakes we've committed//
.. two prideful individuals, consumed by hatred and evil,
myself being the strongest.. to guide him on his grace to be peaceful//
we've foughten for eternities.. as I've slaughtered his very armies and people,
plus his regimes but hell if I knew we'd later talk and agree to,-
.. discuss our own differences, like what the scriptures is,
and how our past beefs with one another could later diminish us//
we later spoke about his father and they're fathers before us,
and how this thing we call evil could in fact destroy us//
and the sacrificing it took to get us where were at,
like when our forefathers chose death so that we'd follow religious facts//
.. as our conversation had grown, we spoke more about life,
despite the foul shit we had said and done to each other over night//
they're was I.. face to face with my father,
I couldn't bother to ask, knowing our past but still had considerably offered,-
my genuine respect and love, to later be restored as his son,
as the night had fallen, I noticed we had much ambition//
but first, with myself being the creator of all existence,
who also created the stars and solar system//
.. thus said, I was eased in his presence, believed to be destined,
to mend our past relationship, and was feeding him questions//
like.. "how holy was thou in the presence of evil?",
"did your spiritual journey to master the forces of darkness defeat you?"//
"were you deceived at any time on your quest for knowledge?",
"to later discover you were consumed by its impressive power?"//

(to be continued)
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Step on dreams like I step on flowers
Step so well they put a rep on ours
Put the flex on cowards, write text for hours
Line after line, paragraph, sentence towers!
Senseless motive behind a set of counters
Take these orders & restock the restroom towels...
Y'all are a set of vowels wasted on Wheel
You love banana clips, then taste my peel
99 of em get you wasted for reeeeaaalll
Boy I'm off my rocker sipping on that vodka
Whipping like pasta I'm shitting on imposters
'im 'er ol boy in the back could die for nada
Little cucaracha I move like I'm in the water
That mean the flow carry everything I droppa
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Old 08-06-2021, 10:47 AM   #3126
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I rock a new pair of socks on a weekday
While your mom & wife ask for a three-way
You all about the he say, she say...
Gossip column type read off a prepaid
Cellular, not a vaccine in sight for that 5G
Watch the metaphor & write just like me
Fuck what you hear alight b
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Old 08-06-2021, 12:42 PM   #3127
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i bite the neck of demons
im meaning the steam eats souls through you dreaming
in class out in the carpark
arched feet tip toe on arks of sharpie markers carved
i embark down hells path in a hand basket of harshness
casket empty, sun light morns the dew
your due through period hand print portraits
forshadowing corpses of course this fortress is outgrown through morgues shifts
a canvas of dirt and gravel, landslides a plenty
im denting your fender before you enter the cemetery pleasantly trendy
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wishing wells with rusty penny's
do you drink your whiskey proper?
tarnished patinas effect reflections of so many
maybe that's just some shitty copper
fear mantra the difference between a locust and a grasshopper
i wrote this knowing that you wouldn't notice
and the closest one gets to gnosis the closer the world test their focus
controllers tattooed your brain with set explosives
left in the desert with leper soldiers
corrosive skin from the suns exposures
get your corpse eaten by deceptive vultures

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Old 08-07-2021, 08:18 PM   #3129
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quick keystyle.. I'm a lil tipsy.. lol


who the greatest of all time? no one other than cor,
you don't want it, lets war.. shells turn your stomach to an utterlis storm//
leave you bloody and soar, ya blood pours to a grudulent form,
stuck in the dirt with shell casings like the ones by the shore//
.. I'm iller than most, get pealed with the toast..
and fire shots to your throat like tequila with coke//
.. einstein with the flow, verbal mathematics..
I learnt to blast ratchets at dudes for cash fastest//
Ill leave your hat backwards and shoot like past magic//
who wanna battle?.. no one exact, for facts,.. im braggin',
I'll leave that ass smashed in, and bent like craftmatics//
I react savage and crack your damn cabbage,
attack quick, and slash you open in half fragments//
.. cor the sickest, snatch your soul out of your body,
and may God be my witness, I'll turn your ass to a homi..
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quick keystyle..


here's to all to pray on my downfall, imagine that,
the main reason I clown y'all, and that's a fact//
dare to walk in my shoes, admire my work,
I'd lied if I said it hurt when you portrayed me at first//
you a stan.. a phony, a fake, a never was,
a broke nigga.. who cant seem to get his cheddah up//
but better luck, with whatever you got planned,
if not, damn.. I'd be no better than you,
.. and how could that be true?// (.. never)
when the better man was always me, no lie..
since kids, you all would envy me.. I'm so fly//
always the best dressed, hair pressed, down to my bare chest//
and of course.. the best at sexing the chicks//
.. a ladies man, affectionate, .. known for wrecking shit,
known to twist caps for my respect and fetishists//
known to kick back, script raps in penmanship,
and flip tracks like disc racks stall when the record skips//
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quick keystyle..

cor the sickest emcee, sicker than anyone you know,
when I flow, the entire globe haults to a cold//
lyrically vicious.. verbal linguistics stretch beyond standard dictionary editions,
literally wicked, my tongue carries demonic rhythms from ancient spirits//
I'm too brilliant.. a rare intelligence not known to civilization,
so smart, whenever I think, I intercede with NASA space stations//
from radio broadcasted signals, to high pitched volumes of casted detections,
my energy intercepts all color definition in seconds//
I'm alien like.. like the silver surfer on his board, seeking for life,
discovering different forms of microorganisms and light//
looking to destroy and deploy creatures who fight,
off my spaceship.. to conquer creation, like a thief in the night//
my battle brackets, involve extraterrestrials and beings alike,
from demons to sight, and all monstrosities to unite//
I'm a lyrical beast, my thoughts implicate visions I write,
from prophecies, inscribed in theologies dated to Christ//
the greatest on mic.. my name ring bells across the galaxy,
and gives testimony of those who've loss that battled me//
.. who can war with me? I react on impulse and strategy,
known to kick raps, twist caps, and kill all your casualties//
leave you in awe, when actually, I record and rap to beats,
my vocal chords contract every force of gravity//
from the universe, to earth's core and every source of tragedy,
my tongue possesses the strength to crush your entire anatomy//
to behold catastrophes, which unfold drastically,
my lyrical alone bestows it's own throne of majesty//
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quick keystyle.. diff style.. juss having fun.. lol :)


cor rarely underestimated.. straight flavor to your taste-buds,
honey syllable milk like-words to enstate-tongues//
dare to test my spirit?.. peaches and plums seep through my lungs,
feeding the scum of this earth when I speak over drums//
forever fruitful.. you numb-skulls get crushed quick,
over scriptures and dutches,-.. corleones'-illustrious//
I could never brake.. the name corleone springs greatness,
creating disciples of all nations, who preach-hatred//
sickest to script flows, and rip those who oppose my addict-role,
cor lift chrome, rip bones and ravage your-clique-whole//
I spit cold.. freeze the entire universe when I spew a verse,
a student first.. but the exact reason of why your computer-works//
I'll leave stupid jerks to ruin worse.. chewed to a stew, brewed to slurp..
a ruthless-merc, trained to abuse nerds over foolish-words//
put you in a hearse.. bury you right where you stand,
and watch the blood spill from your corpse right from my hands//
.. who nicer than cor? I write to exam,
and test your rhyming ability on mic if I can//
whether we battle it out.. on a website or on cam,
or on a flight, in the midst of turbulence till' we land..
I'll win every battle,.. that's right, I'm the man,
tear your career to shambles to prove your precisely a sham//
.. corleone, the wise poet,.. eyes open,
divine focus, travel through time to define motion//
.. I write poems to enlighten the broken,
giving sight to the hopeless and blind through rhymes' spoken//
prophesize your demise without checkin' ya palms.. subject to wars,
cause cors' ahead of his time like terrot-cards//
.. evacuate facilities, in my synapses of realty,
a war veteran.. trapped in his own mind of tranquility//
.. shoot you if your near to me, off general principality,
the fact that you even exist to me'll get you killed instantly//
.. who real?, that isn't me.. ?? cause not one of you, literally,
could skillfully fuck with me on any level, lyrically..
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quick keystyle..

cor never fraudulent, known for his accomplishments,
dedicated to teaching the unwise what knowledge is//
I'll bombard your raps, and tarnish your whole metropolis,
then redeem my victory in apocalypse after necropolis//
the schemers are watching us, constantly leaving us occupant,
to breeze by us, mocking us, leaving us prominent//
supreme doctrines, from the oddest to what's perceived to be prodestant,
where it seems toxic and polished by archaeologist//
I'm from a deep ocean of thoughts, somewhere between your conciousness,
where scholars and both theologist, rise against the communist//
where theives dwell, I think swell, yet never blinded by prophetis,
a pink hell with pink cells, where I'm constantly playing psychologist//
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white supremacy, white lies don't harm anything, don't be alarmed, the body bags are
just a contingency plan in case everything goes wrong and we have to cut our loses and
put all of you in coffins, that's why foreign military forces are training with your sons
and daughters, because they don't think they'll obey them if they 'gave the order', so
they'll be replaced with foreigners, people you never met that consider you a threat and
harbor a deep hatred for ya, but what's more important is the fate of those that got
vaccinated, and the next day had arm soreness, it's not too late , there's still time to
pick the morgue you want your corpses' in, spreading fear, despair, and hopelessness

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The turmoil and regrets time present set on my reflection of a path the I have neglected now the moment is effected my heart and soul cries in agony my perspective no comforting path I lie in path of a past time I wish I could hold you one last time
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I who lack strength on a another level
see the devil hear heckles of a million echos
mind petals designed bezel'd with the 9 pretzel
disguised in sly riddle flood the earth sky wont settle
love dies if the vibes brittle judgmental
the gods are resentful as i present truth
break the spine with the gunpowder line kibble
feed em nothing but raw repeat nothing you saw
the rhythm got em running there jaw
bury em deep under the floor for many weep
knowing there destiny peaked and whats left is nothing at all

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^^ dope.. applauds all who participated in this thread.. I read some great verses from you all.. but Ima have to claim the title in this thread as the OM champ.. lol im the dopest MC on the board.. point, blank, period.. 100 !!
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bitch? never that.. I'll split your head open in broad day, while the president carries his speech on national television and thats a fact kiddo. The only bitch here is you my man. You need a reality check.. 100 !!
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