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Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,716
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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i have so much to say, and nothings suffice
the honest truth is, i just want to cry enough violence of my energy marks being assaulted my silence comes from expecting nothing less than the obvious misunderstanding. awkwardness. overall shyness. i acquiesce solely out of exhaustion. closed captions underneath both of our eyelids touch my cheek with your hands as i squeeze them as tight as me clinching onto my blade, cause’ paranoia has taught me to fight slightly understand the plight of women walking at night i want to enjoy the things that so many like tired of looking into your eyes without me inside of you i drift off into codependency, where i’m rarely absolved connected. i disassociate and stare off into space finding it odd – an atheist when i’m alone in the dark interrogations with god. asking them who sent you my disposition to avoid pain has rendered me recluse my character arc is a biblical miscue noah memory thoughts. flooded with pairs of ‘i love you’ & ‘miss yous’ we’re barely a speck. a floating rock in oblivion we’re literally looking for something on the cusp of existence most of what my therapist says, i think is a trick when i’m writing in my journal i can feel you touching my wrist i don’t know if i’m supposed to be thinking like this my first poem titled: my last healthy relationship doesn’t exist
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06-19-2021, 08:11 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: portal 7 to the 9th exponent
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Really good. The therapist trick line made me smile and feel defensive simultaneously. Also the bit of human nature you exposed in the codependency was stellar
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This is good. I really liked the “codependency” and character arc parts. Loved the “noah memory thoughts” section, thought you included that in a clever way. The ending wasn’t too abstract and brought your train of thoughts to a decent end.
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07-25-2021, 10:46 PM
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Join Date: May 2019
Posts: 530
Battle Record: 7-5
Champed - Guerrilla Writing League
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08-24-2021, 02:36 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Philly Cat.
Posts: 12,325
Battle Record: 10-15
Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x)
Champed - Netcees Writers League
- Write Week I
- Write Week 8
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Loved this..
i drift off into codependency, where i’m rarely absolved connected. i disassociate and stare off into space
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09-08-2021, 05:57 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 13,052
Battle Record: 2-5
Champed - AOWL Season 2
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Best thing on page one. If I was young & cared I would give good feed.
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11-08-2021, 02:45 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 6,473
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Ur hella good
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11-13-2021, 11:19 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,507
Battle Record: 1-1
Rep Power: 51788019 |
What blade you got?
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,716
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
Rep Power: 8599678 |
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03-19-2023, 05:51 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,962
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Lol...If the site's truly being semi-roasted....gotta UP THIS realll quick
OH YESAH THIS CLASSSSIC, Of course BB would layyy it on thiiiick yeah. he lay it on thick lol. |
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04-21-2023, 05:20 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2015
Posts: 430
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05-06-2023, 06:32 AM
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Banned
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,962
Battle Record: 6 - 14
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oh yeah UP for Aero's last site diss practice laughter
lol chokes on a fucking chicken wing of Ghosts dick.,..jk he just likez the pic. chokes on Ghosts Pysch Major i meant, while I failed out of Top School before the Psych minor haha. NEXT thx i'll vote short lol |
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