Incredible vs Sn00p - SN00P WINS

[Sharp]

The Summer Classic



Due: Thursday, 7/8 @ 11:59 PST
24hr ext available but must be requested before verse is due
Line Limit: 10-16 lines
*can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
May God have mercy on your souls
@Incredible @Sn00p

[Sn00p]

sup. 10?

[Incredible]

10s good

[Sn00p]

10 sent.

[Sharp]

Can confirm I have sn00p's 10 @Incredible

[Sn00p]

take the ext if u need it


if some are saying what i've done's amazing, that's an understatement
inc can win? shit. i'm a combination of smallpox & Pizarro w/ his gunners blazin'
& even if i WERE lazy, ain't gotta work crazy to merk babies
thugs run up in ur home & u get shot with mo' ease like the Haitian first lady
a last minute key from the wackest nerd? ...like that'd work
but even if u had Tencent early, u'd also need Microsoft & Apple to match my worth
u work construction & the mag said u been tryna improve for straight years
lmao. so u lay foundations all day just to come home & struggle to do the same here?
& u KNOW the reason ur ex has the kids & u keep getting fired & flunked
but 'come to grips w/ ur alcoholism' does NOT mean 'act like ouch drunk dialing kung'

[Incredible]

U seen incredibles 1-2?? Shits are top notch, fact!
I slide while ur girl at work, thats a box office smash
Never gets pussy visits for an ego stroke, he's hated in real life
NC; "always a cool dude, u doin alright?" While the girls be like... ...
Fuck ur past homie, u going on?...naw, back to ur writing corner
Long barrels on the eagle got u hypnotized, ur bouta be fighting a coma
3 mil germans gone from the world wars, a disastrous welt
Loaded w/ 10 rifles and m40s, bring you closer to what ur ancestors felt
Predictions all off, Idk how y'all didn't see the video dude
This white boy ain't top 5 or even 10....AND that's according to you!

[Cereal]

vote = inc

both had some good plays, but i think the gun line from inc is what made my decision for me dude drop was fire.. all in all though some fairly decent lines and both structures were tight.. thanks

[bleak]

snoop's first 3 were all solid, the personal angles were cool too but fell flatter than the rest. mo ease is a really dope current event play, maybe more could have been done w the setup but the punch was lotb.

Inc i like the creativity but i think they fall flat for different reasons. the ancestor shit could have been worded more aggressively, make it an attack as opposed to a statement. the coma shit just didnt connect seamlessly. maybe imagine you're rapping it out loud more, it just doesnt feel aggressive enough for my taste. i like the direction you have taken tho

sn00p

[Mac]

if some are saying what i've done's amazing, that's an understatement
inc can win? shit. i'm a combination of smallpox & Pizarro w/ his gunners blazin'
I'm missing something? self-hype doesn't hit for me

& even if i WERE lazy, ain't gotta work crazy to merk babies
thugs run up in ur home & u get shot with mo' ease like the Haitian first lady
cool I like this

a last minute key from the wackest nerd? ...like that'd work
but even if u had Tencent early, u'd also need Microsoft & Apple to match my worth
decent

u work construction & the mag said u been tryna improve for straight years
lmao. so u lay foundations all day just to come home & struggle to do the same here?
laying foundations is played but ok

& u KNOW the reason ur ex has the kids & u keep getting fired & flunked
but 'come to grips w/ ur alcoholism' does NOT mean 'act like ouch drunk dialing kung'
loll

vs.

U seen incredibles 1-2?? Shits are top notch, fact!
I slide while ur girl at work, thats a box office smash
cool

Never gets pussy visits for an ego stroke, he's hated in real life
NC; "always a cool dude, u doin alright?" While the girls be like... ...
ehh give or take

Fuck ur past homie, u going on?...naw, back to ur writing corner
Long barrels on the eagle got u hypnotized, ur bouta be fighting a coma
not digging this

3 mil germans gone from the world wars, a disastrous welt
Loaded w/ 10 rifles and m40s, bring you closer to what ur ancestors felt
mild

Predictions all off, Idk how y'all didn't see the video dude
This white boy ain't top 5 or even 10....AND that's according to you!
true .. but also light

I got sn00p here.. more consistent and put together punches. Inc brought some decent concepts but they felt very mild.. lacked some sting there.. v /sn0p

[Loot]

@Mac Incan as in the native americans.

[Loot]

vote snoop. Incan line was cool. Tencent, Ouch lines cool. Foundation line decent personal.

Inc the lines all had potential to me, but just need a bit of work on execution.

[Swerve]

Inkan was okay, foundation was ok, kung was good

vs.

ancestors was okay

V/ Snoop

[Sharp]

@Wanderer @Bomb Bard @Blue Bayou vote maybe plz?

[Wanderer]

Snoop had:

Mo’ ease
Tencent
Foundations

These were all good

Inc

Opener was ok
Ancestors had potential

I dunno snoop takes this fairly comfortably for me

V/ Sn00p

[Fathom]

Snoop overall more polished.
Opener was clever not hard but aight
Tencent cool, foundations wording helped

Ancestors, seemed rushed inc, some areas needed work here

V - sn00p

[Bomb Bard]

& even if i WERE lazy, ain't gotta work crazy to merk babies
thugs run up in ur home & u get shot with mo' ease like the Haitian first lady
a last minute key from the wackest nerd? ...like that'd work
but even if u had Tencent early, u'd also need Microsoft & Apple to match my worth
u work construction & the mag said u been tryna improve for straight years
lmao. so u lay foundations all day just to come home & struggle to do the same here?

Vs


Box office smash and fighting a coma could have been so much better but everything was light


V/sn00p

[Universe]

sn00p:

Digging with wordplay attempts, man. Although some felt a tiny bit off to me. Incan is cool but to me it didn't really work both ways, in terms of a double entendre, which is what I look for.

had Tencent was one I had to read twice, very cool.

Lay foundations was a dope personal as well.

First time I've seen a sn00p verse - overall, I thought this was pretty entertaining. Well done.

Incredible:

I think the verse is solid technically, but much like myself, too braggadocious and "statementish" to really land. I think your flow was really good... World wars line was heavy too - but nothing else really connected for me in a meaningful way.

I would like to see you drop some Open Mic's and maybe even join a topical league though.

Vote - sn00p