SOL SEMIFINALS : BodySnatcher vs Jabari Black JB WINS

bleak · 03-05-2019, 08:42 PM

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BodySnatcher · 03-05-2019, 10:38 PM

20?

Jabari Black · 03-05-2019, 11:04 PM

Yep

BodySnatcher · 03-09-2019, 11:54 PM

Coup de grace.

I left the gemstone just so I can wreck & then slay G’s,
So if J.B. Robinson...I’ll choke’em w/a ‘chain rope around his neck’ like the 80s
Or I could spring forward & attack from a flank stance,
All he’ll see are ‘arms swingin on both sides of his body’...Carlton Banks dance
U dream & desire of beating me...so nigga let’s do it,
But in the end, this ‘needle get ur lung punctured’...& I’m not draining chest fluid
I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful,
If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol
Ur bitch is hideous...so u’ll find her in a gutter place,
Cuz it felt right when I put the biscuit to her jellyrolls & shot everywhere butterface
He owes me cash but I can tell he’s a fag in a blouse,
& this ‘transaction’ will lead to ‘clips in his wig’ before he gets ‘drag out the house’
I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack,
So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback
I’ll merk his squad until the numbers on his staff light,
Cuz when I put his ‘team in the air’...I’m not holding up a jersey on Draft Night
I'll attack u on land, sea, or the sky. Idgaf if ur a star bro,
Cuz after I ‘remove u from the ship’...my goons will be shootin where ever ur cargo
If they gimme the drop. I’ma let this eagle talk now,
All he’ll see is a ‘chopper in the sky’...& I’m dumpin till bullets get 'Black Hawk Down'

I'm good if JB runs a little late was busy af myself.

Jabari Black · 03-10-2019, 12:00 AM

The Ruger near. All hollow tips when I shoot the led/
Hammer-n the point...you bout to get it through ya head/
U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/
I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/
I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/
Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year/
Wesson squeeze! If ya team get involved it’s getting messy, B/
After you catch the heat...it ‘Flash on ya squad’ like The Justice League/
The choppa burst. 30 in a half moon...the clip got a curve/
No glove? Fuck it - you’ll see a sock over the handle...do not disturb/
Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/
Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/
U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/
But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/
Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/
Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/
This clown dying. Its a hair trigger when the pound rising/
Then a lung shot! Shorten his breadth in the building...he downsizing/
A round flying. A piece raise em when the four is sprayin/
Or the heat wave...extend the desert like deforestation/

Barcotic · 03-10-2019, 03:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Body

I left the gemstone just so I can wreck & then slay G’s,
So if J.B. Robinson...I’ll choke’em w/a ‘chain rope around his neck’ like the 80s
nah, weak np
Or I could spring forward & attack from a flank stance,
All he’ll see are 'arms swingin on both sides of his body’...Carlton Banks dance
these arm bars are getting old & more of a stretch every time, like why are arms even swinging on both sides of his body? that shits not finna look like the carlton.. lol its a reach. the mcgregor walk wuda made more sense n im guessing its ben done before. gotta be slicker than that to make an arms concept work, IMO
U dream & desire of beating me...so nigga let’s do it,
But in the end, this ‘needle get ur lung punctured’...& I’m not draining chest fluid
good
I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful,
If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol
dope
Ur bitch is hideous...so u’ll find her in a gutter place,
Cuz it felt right when I put the biscuit to her jellyrolls & shot everywhere butterface
ok
He owes me cash but I can tell he’s a fag in a blouse,
& this ‘transaction’ will lead to ‘clips in his wig’ before he gets ‘drag out the house’
played wp & reaching w the tie-ins
I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack,
So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback
seen this before, seemingly from someone famous
I’ll merk his squad until the numbers on his staff light,
Cuz when I put his ‘team in the air’...I’m not holding up a jersey on Draft Night
no. filler
I'll attack u on land, sea, or the sky. Idgaf if ur a star bro,
Cuz after I ‘remove u from the ship’...my goons will be shootin where ever ur cargo
nah man
If they gimme the drop. I’ma let this eagle talk now,
All he’ll see is a ‘chopper in the sky’...& I’m dumpin till bullets get 'Black Hawk Down'
whack hawk down tbh

2 gd punches
1 jab
7 misses

vs

Jabari
The Ruger near. All hollow tips when I shoot the led/
Hammer-n the point...you bout to get it through ya head/
played idea, seen done better
U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/
I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/
personal pts but this was soft. weak concept
I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/
Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year/
dope
Wesson squeeze! If ya team get involved it’s getting messy, B/
After you catch the heat...it ‘Flash on ya squad’ like The Justice League/
reach
The choppa burst. 30 in a half moon...the clip got a curve/
No glove? Fuck it - you’ll see a sock over the handle...do not disturb/
ok
Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/
Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/
ok
U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/
But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/
fire
Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/
Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/
ehhh, ok i guess. barely
This clown dying. Its a hair trigger when the pound rising/
Then a lung shot! Shorten his breadth in the building...he downsizing/
nahh
A round flying. A piece raise em when the four is sprayin/
Or the heat wave...extend the desert like deforestation/
dope

3 gd punches
3 jabs
4 misses

decent battle, clear winner
v/jabari black

i would outgunbar either of u tho. fwm

Blas · 03-10-2019, 04:22 AM

I left the gemstone just so I can wreck & then slay G’s,
So if J.B. Robinson...I’ll choke’em w/a ‘chain rope around his neck’ like the 80s
ok concept/nameplay, weak connection punchwise tho imo
Or I could spring forward & attack from a flank stance,
All he’ll see are ‘arms swingin on both sides of his body’...Carlton Banks dance
very vague & random but ok
U dream & desire of beating me...so nigga let’s do it,
But in the end, this ‘needle get ur lung punctured’...& I’m not draining chest fluid
ok
I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful,
If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol
dopeeeee
Ur bitch is hideous...so u’ll find her in a gutter place,
Cuz it felt right when I put the biscuit to her jellyrolls & shot everywhere butterface
erm.. didn't enjoy
He owes me cash but I can tell he’s a fag in a blouse,
& this ‘transaction’ will lead to ‘clips in his wig’ before he gets ‘drag out the house’
super stretched/choppy wording but i will accept the concept
I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack,
So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback
simple but cool
I’ll merk his squad until the numbers on his staff light,
Cuz when I put his ‘team in the air’...I’m not holding up a jersey on Draft Night
aight
I'll attack u on land, sea, or the sky. Idgaf if ur a star bro,
Cuz after I ‘remove u from the ship’...my goons will be shootin where ever ur cargo
the concept is absurd but ok wp
If they gimme the drop. I’ma let this eagle talk now,
All he’ll see is a ‘chopper in the sky’...& I’m dumpin till bullets get 'Black Hawk Down'
lolz

..

The Ruger near. All hollow tips when I shoot the led/
Hammer-n the point...you bout to get it through ya head/
with better wording i'd say dope, but it's cool
U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/
I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/
lolz i like it
I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/
Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year/
cool
Wesson squeeze! If ya team get involved it’s getting messy, B/
After you catch the heat...it ‘Flash on ya squad’ like The Justice League/
meh saying ur gonna flash on his squad doesn't seem gr8 to me lol
The choppa burst. 30 in a half moon...the clip got a curve/
No glove? Fuck it - you’ll see a sock over the handle...do not disturb/
the punch is near non existent but the concept is enjoyable
Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/
Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/
ok
U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/
But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/
LOTB fucking fireeeeeee goddamn, sick punch/concept & wording
Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/
Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/
heh ok
This clown dying. Its a hair trigger when the pound rising/
Then a lung shot! Shorten his breadth in the building...he downsizing/
did not enjoy
A round flying. A piece raise em when the four is sprayin/
Or the heat wave...extend the desert like deforestation/
alright

..

Overall this was an enjoyable read. I feel like body came with a few too many generic/meh concepts though to take this one. Black had a very consistent verse & a few bangers, that try to argue with these mods line was absolute piff, prob top 5 bars I've read while on here. Good battle but JB took it imo, pz.

V/ JB

Shia Labruh · 03-10-2019, 02:37 PM

Or I could spring forward & attack from a flank stance,
All he’ll see are ‘arms swingin on both sides of his body’...Carlton Banks dance
I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack,
So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback
I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful,
If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol

I went back to quote crosswalk. It was a dope concept, I did feel u can set up the punch better. Imo. @Barcotic I believe he meant his arm. The visual was a tad choppy, but he got it across well enough imo.

Vs
U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/
I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/
I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/
Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year
Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/
Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/
U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/
But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/
Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/
Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/

Jb had a much more enjoyable verse. He can keep you very engage wit his style. Bs, plays it safe. Wording was decent throughout but that can come across a bit boring imo.
Vote- jb

Sharp · 03-10-2019, 07:53 PM

I left the gemstone just so I can wreck & then slay G’s,
So if J.B. Robinson...I’ll choke’em w/a ‘chain rope around his neck’ like the 80s
U dream & desire of beating me...so nigga let’s do it,
But in the end, this ‘needle get ur lung punctured’...& I’m not draining chest fluid
I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful,
If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol
He owes me cash but I can tell he’s a fag in a blouse,
& this ‘transaction’ will lead to ‘clips in his wig’ before he gets ‘drag out the house’
I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack,
So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback
If they gimme the drop. I’ma let this eagle talk now,
All he’ll see is a ‘chopper in the sky’...& I’m dumpin till bullets get 'Black Hawk Down'

The Ruger near. All hollow tips when I shoot the led/
Hammer-n the point...you bout to get it through ya head/
U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/
I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/
I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/
Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year/
Wesson squeeze! If ya team get involved it’s getting messy, B/
After you catch the heat...it ‘Flash on ya squad’ like The Justice League/
The choppa burst. 30 in a half moon...the clip got a curve/
No glove? Fuck it - you’ll see a sock over the handle...do not disturb/
Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/
Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/
U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/
But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/
Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/
Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/

This was dope. I got Jabari with the hardest hits being the two personals. Dope stuff guys

V/Jabari Black

Zaddy · 03-10-2019, 09:23 PM

I left the gemstone just so I can wreck & then slay G’s,
So if J.B. Robinson...I’ll choke’em w/a ‘chain rope around his neck’ like the 80s
mmm I think this was a bit of a stretch, decent at best
Or I could spring forward & attack from a flank stance,
All he’ll see are ‘arms swingin on both sides of his body’...Carlton Banks dance
fire
U dream & desire of beating me...so nigga let’s do it,
But in the end, this ‘needle get ur lung punctured’...& I’m not draining chest fluid
ok here
I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful,
If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol
this shit was dope
Ur bitch is hideous...so u’ll find her in a gutter place,
Cuz it felt right when I put the biscuit to her jellyrolls & shot everywhere butterface
nah this was a miss for me
He owes me cash but I can tell he’s a fag in a blouse,
& this ‘transaction’ will lead to ‘clips in his wig’ before he gets ‘drag out the house’
decent
I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack,
So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback
this was nice
I’ll merk his squad until the numbers on his staff light,
Cuz when I put his ‘team in the air’...I’m not holding up a jersey on Draft Night
alright I liked this
I'll attack u on land, sea, or the sky. Idgaf if ur a star bro,
Cuz after I ‘remove u from the ship’...my goons will be shootin where ever ur cargo
nah
If they gimme the drop. I’ma let this eagle talk now,
All he’ll see is a ‘chopper in the sky’...& I’m dumpin till bullets get 'Black Hawk Down'
nah not feelin it

3 nice
2 ok
2 Decent
3 misses

Vs

The Ruger near. All hollow tips when I shoot the led/
Hammer-n the point...you bout to get it through ya head/
mmm not feelin
U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/
I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/
lmao you not gonna let me live this one down huh. This was fire tho
I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/
Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year/
alright
Wesson squeeze! If ya team get involved it’s getting messy, B/
After you catch the heat...it ‘Flash on ya squad’ like The Justice League/
pretty cool here
The choppa burst. 30 in a half moon...the clip got a curve/
No glove? Fuck it - you’ll see a sock over the handle...do not disturb/
decent
Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/
Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/
ok
U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/
But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/
alright pretty cool
Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/
Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/
ok
This clown dying. Its a hair trigger when the pound rising/
Then a lung shot! Shorten his breadth in the building...he downsizing/
i liked the concept but didn’t like how this was done as a whole, a miss for me
A round flying. A piece raise em when the four is sprayin/
Or the heat wave...extend the desert like deforestation/
and I sit here thinking to myself “how could something so short and sweet be so dope?” This was fire

4 nice
3 ok
1 Decent
2 misses

This was certainly a dope one fellas, both had a solid verse and showed out this week. Very close when I break it down, body i can always dig it when someone experiments with different styles of wording or execution etc, good stuff. Jabari you did your thing here too, that closer really got me sitting on the toilet saying damn. Good job to both and I have it A LOT closer than what the other votes been saying. Also I hope neither of you actually take barcotics vote & feedback seriously. He’s a fuckin loser lol. Good battle.

Vote Jabari Black

Blue Bayou · 03-12-2019, 05:42 PM

I left the gemstone just so I can wreck & then slay G’s,
So if J.B. Robinson...I’ll choke’em w/a ‘chain rope around his neck’ like the 80s
pretty cool JB np, havent seen before.. dig
Or I could spring forward & attack from a flank stance,
All he’ll see are ‘arms swingin on both sides of his body’...Carlton Banks dance
okay so this is cool, but at this point its the exact same as the other 3 dance move lines that have been done just like this... the dance move / arms wavin bars are officially done to me
U dream & desire of beating me...so nigga let’s do it,
But in the end, this ‘needle get ur lung punctured’...& I’m not draining chest fluid
pretty cool, setup was good and helped the punch land.. cool idea
I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful,
If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol
nice, cool concept
Ur bitch is hideous...so u’ll find her in a gutter place,
Cuz it felt right when I put the biscuit to her jellyrolls & shot everywhere butterface
hmm, tie ins cool but just not a fan overall of the punch
He owes me cash but I can tell he’s a fag in a blouse,
& this ‘transaction’ will lead to ‘clips in his wig’ before he gets ‘drag out the house’
cool liked the transaction tie in...this was nice
I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack,
So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback
nah this is played.. ive seen "Bullets" specifically done and it's just like 'heat on his chest like iami' punches to me which were done hard in their day
I’ll merk his squad until the numbers on his staff light,
Cuz when I put his ‘team in the air’...I’m not holding up a jersey on Draft Night
nice flip, this was cool
I'll attack u on land, sea, or the sky. Idgaf if ur a star bro,
Cuz after I ‘remove u from the ship’...my goons will be shootin where ever ur cargo
lol pretty cool, i dig
If they gimme the drop. I’ma let this eagle talk now,
All he’ll see is a ‘chopper in the sky’...& I’m dumpin till bullets get 'Black Hawk Down'
ehh, okay np

Vs

The Ruger near. All hollow tips when I shoot the led/
Hammer-n the point...you bout to get it through ya head/
ehh, seen similar 'through ur head - idea' bars... nah
U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/
I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/
olid, good personal hit
I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/
Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year/
nice, creative fresh concept
Wesson squeeze! If ya team get involved it’s getting messy, B/
After you catch the heat...it ‘Flash on ya squad’ like The Justice League/
nah, seen Flash/comic bunches a bunch and this wasnt flipped enough to be a hit for me
The choppa burst. 30 in a half moon...the clip got a curve/
No glove? Fuck it - you’ll see a sock over the handle...do not disturb/
cool meta, its more of a S&F line to me tho then a direct gun punch
Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/
Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/
[b]cool meta, this was nice like punch/b]
U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/
But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/
did Body bitch all season about shit? i dont remember that... like the concept but i dunno if the personal really applies, this wouldve been dope against zelph
Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/
Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/
cool, dig
This clown dying. Its a hair trigger when the pound rising/
Then a lung shot! Shorten his breadth in the building...he downsizing/
hmmmm, okay
A round flying. A piece raise em when the four is sprayin/
Or the heat wave...extend the desert like deforestation/
ehh, interesting idea.. doesnt really work tho.. cutting down trees doesnt create a desert lol... theyve done mad deofrestation in Alberta for example for the oil industry... but its not a "desert" now just cuz the trees are gone

Overall this was a fun read and good matchup between two pretty similar styles... tough to call, i had JB taking this going in but upon reading twice i've gpt Body edging this out... just a bit more enjoyable on the highs as both had pretty similar miss & okay bars... props to both

Vote - Body

Kill Spree · 03-12-2019, 06:36 PM

I left the gemstone just so I can wreck & then slay G’s,
So if J.B. Robinson...I’ll choke’em w/a ‘chain rope around his neck’ like the 80s
Nice
Or I could spring forward & attack from a flank stance,
All he’ll see are ‘arms swingin on both sides of his body’...Carlton Banks dance
This is cool.. not harsh though..
U dream & desire of beating me...so nigga let’s do it,
But in the end, this ‘needle get ur lung punctured’...& I’m not draining chest fluid
cool, simple but some contact
I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful,
If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol
nice
Ur bitch is hideous...so u’ll find her in a gutter place,
Cuz it felt right when I put the biscuit to her jellyrolls & shot everywhere butterface
this is cool
He owes me cash but I can tell he’s a fag in a blouse,
& this ‘transaction’ will lead to ‘clips in his wig’ before he gets ‘drag out the house’
dope
I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack,
So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback
not feelin this
I’ll merk his squad until the numbers on his staff light,
Cuz when I put his ‘team in the air’...I’m not holding up a jersey on Draft Night
thought this was dope
I'll attack u on land, sea, or the sky. Idgaf if ur a star bro,
Cuz after I ‘remove u from the ship’...my goons will be shootin where ever ur cargo
I fuck wit this
If they gimme the drop. I’ma let this eagle talk now,
All he’ll see is a ‘chopper in the sky’...& I’m dumpin till bullets get 'Black Hawk Down'
felt this could have been worded harsher... light at best

Vs

The Ruger near. All hollow tips when I shoot the led/
Hammer-n the point...you bout to get it through ya head/
wasnt feelin this
U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/
I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/
ok
I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/
Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year/
lol this was slick
Wesson squeeze! If ya team get involved it’s getting messy, B/
After you catch the heat...it ‘Flash on ya squad’ like The Justice League/
wasnt feeling this... to me it didnt rhyme either.
The choppa burst. 30 in a half moon...the clip got a curve/
No glove? Fuck it - you’ll see a sock over the handle...do not disturb/
lmao... i fuck with this
Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/
Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/
this was aight could have been harsher
U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/
But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/
dope
Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/
Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/
this is cool...
This clown dying. Its a hair trigger when the pound rising/
Then a lung shot! Shorten his breadth in the building...he downsizing/
I fuck with this
A round flying. A piece raise em when the four is sprayin/
Or the heat wave...extend the desert like deforestation/
[b]nah

Overall close battle... Havent read much from body seemed to be doing more gun bars like JB.. tbh felt some of both could have been harsher both had misses but i got Body here by a quote. mad close[b]

03-09-2019, 11:54 PM	#4
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840895	Coup de grace. I left the gemstone just so I can wreck & then slay G’s, So if J.B. Robinson...I’ll choke’em w/a ‘chain rope around his neck’ like the 80s Or I could spring forward & attack from a flank stance, All he’ll see are ‘arms swingin on both sides of his body’...Carlton Banks dance U dream & desire of beating me...so nigga let’s do it, But in the end, this ‘needle get ur lung punctured’...& I’m not draining chest fluid I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful, If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol Ur bitch is hideous...so u’ll find her in a gutter place, Cuz it felt right when I put the biscuit to her jellyrolls & shot everywhere butterface He owes me cash but I can tell he’s a fag in a blouse, & this ‘transaction’ will lead to ‘clips in his wig’ before he gets ‘drag out the house’ I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack, So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback I’ll merk his squad until the numbers on his staff light, Cuz when I put his ‘team in the air’...I’m not holding up a jersey on Draft Night I'll attack u on land, sea, or the sky. Idgaf if ur a star bro, Cuz after I ‘remove u from the ship’...my goons will be shootin where ever ur cargo If they gimme the drop. I’ma let this eagle talk now, All he’ll see is a ‘chopper in the sky’...& I’m dumpin till bullets get 'Black Hawk Down' I'm good if JB runs a little late was busy af myself. Last edited by BodySnatcher; 03-10-2019 at 12:00 AM.

03-10-2019, 12:00 AM	#5
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	The Ruger near. All hollow tips when I shoot the led/ Hammer-n the point...you bout to get it through ya head/ U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/ I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/ I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/ Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year/ Wesson squeeze! If ya team get involved it’s getting messy, B/ After you catch the heat...it ‘Flash on ya squad’ like The Justice League/ The choppa burst. 30 in a half moon...the clip got a curve/ No glove? Fuck it - you’ll see a sock over the handle...do not disturb/ Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/ Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/ U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/ But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/ Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/ Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/ This clown dying. Its a hair trigger when the pound rising/ Then a lung shot! Shorten his breadth in the building...he downsizing/ A round flying. A piece raise em when the four is sprayin/ Or the heat wave...extend the desert like deforestation/ Last edited by Jabari Black; 03-10-2019 at 12:07 AM.

03-12-2019, 05:42 PM	#11
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,091 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502332	I left the gemstone just so I can wreck & then slay G’s, So if J.B. Robinson...I’ll choke’em w/a ‘chain rope around his neck’ like the 80s pretty cool JB np, havent seen before.. dig Or I could spring forward & attack from a flank stance, All he’ll see are ‘arms swingin on both sides of his body’...Carlton Banks dance okay so this is cool, but at this point its the exact same as the other 3 dance move lines that have been done just like this... the dance move / arms wavin bars are officially done to me U dream & desire of beating me...so nigga let’s do it, But in the end, this ‘needle get ur lung punctured’...& I’m not draining chest fluid pretty cool, setup was good and helped the punch land.. cool idea I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful, If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol nice, cool concept Ur bitch is hideous...so u’ll find her in a gutter place, Cuz it felt right when I put the biscuit to her jellyrolls & shot everywhere butterface hmm, tie ins cool but just not a fan overall of the punch He owes me cash but I can tell he’s a fag in a blouse, & this ‘transaction’ will lead to ‘clips in his wig’ before he gets ‘drag out the house’ cool liked the transaction tie in...this was nice I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack, So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback nah this is played.. ive seen "Bullets" specifically done and it's just like 'heat on his chest like iami' punches to me which were done hard in their day I’ll merk his squad until the numbers on his staff light, Cuz when I put his ‘team in the air’...I’m not holding up a jersey on Draft Night nice flip, this was cool I'll attack u on land, sea, or the sky. Idgaf if ur a star bro, Cuz after I ‘remove u from the ship’...my goons will be shootin where ever ur cargo lol pretty cool, i dig If they gimme the drop. I’ma let this eagle talk now, All he’ll see is a ‘chopper in the sky’...& I’m dumpin till bullets get 'Black Hawk Down' ehh, okay np Vs The Ruger near. All hollow tips when I shoot the led/ Hammer-n the point...you bout to get it through ya head/ ehh, seen similar 'through ur head - idea' bars... nah U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/ I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/ olid, good personal hit I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/ Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year/ nice, creative fresh concept Wesson squeeze! If ya team get involved it’s getting messy, B/ After you catch the heat...it ‘Flash on ya squad’ like The Justice League/ nah, seen Flash/comic bunches a bunch and this wasnt flipped enough to be a hit for me The choppa burst. 30 in a half moon...the clip got a curve/ No glove? Fuck it - you’ll see a sock over the handle...do not disturb/ cool meta, its more of a S&F line to me tho then a direct gun punch Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/ Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/ [b]cool meta, this was nice like punch/b] U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/ But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/ did Body bitch all season about shit? i dont remember that... like the concept but i dunno if the personal really applies, this wouldve been dope against zelph Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/ Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/ cool, dig This clown dying. Its a hair trigger when the pound rising/ Then a lung shot! Shorten his breadth in the building...he downsizing/ hmmmm, okay A round flying. A piece raise em when the four is sprayin/ Or the heat wave...extend the desert like deforestation/ ehh, interesting idea.. doesnt really work tho.. cutting down trees doesnt create a desert lol... theyve done mad deofrestation in Alberta for example for the oil industry... but its not a "desert" now just cuz the trees are gone Overall this was a fun read and good matchup between two pretty similar styles... tough to call, i had JB taking this going in but upon reading twice i've gpt Body edging this out... just a bit more enjoyable on the highs as both had pretty similar miss & okay bars... props to both Vote - Body __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip

03-05-2019, 10:38 PM	#2
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840895	20?

03-05-2019, 11:04 PM	#3
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	Yep

03-10-2019, 02:37 PM	#8
Shia Labruh Unchained Slinger Join Date: Jan 2019 Posts: 31 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 280171	Or I could spring forward & attack from a flank stance, All he’ll see are ‘arms swingin on both sides of his body’...Carlton Banks dance I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack, So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful, If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol I went back to quote crosswalk. It was a dope concept, I did feel u can set up the punch better. Imo. @Barcotic I believe he meant his arm. The visual was a tad choppy, but he got it across well enough imo. Vs U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/ I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/ I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/ Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/ Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/ U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/ But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/ Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/ Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/ Jb had a much more enjoyable verse. He can keep you very engage wit his style. Bs, plays it safe. Wording was decent throughout but that can come across a bit boring imo. Vote- jb

03-10-2019, 07:53 PM	#9
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	I left the gemstone just so I can wreck & then slay G’s, So if J.B. Robinson...I’ll choke’em w/a ‘chain rope around his neck’ like the 80s U dream & desire of beating me...so nigga let’s do it, But in the end, this ‘needle get ur lung punctured’...& I’m not draining chest fluid I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful, If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol He owes me cash but I can tell he’s a fag in a blouse, & this ‘transaction’ will lead to ‘clips in his wig’ before he gets ‘drag out the house’ I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack, So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback If they gimme the drop. I’ma let this eagle talk now, All he’ll see is a ‘chopper in the sky’...& I’m dumpin till bullets get 'Black Hawk Down' The Ruger near. All hollow tips when I shoot the led/ Hammer-n the point...you bout to get it through ya head/ U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/ I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/ I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/ Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year/ Wesson squeeze! If ya team get involved it’s getting messy, B/ After you catch the heat...it ‘Flash on ya squad’ like The Justice League/ The choppa burst. 30 in a half moon...the clip got a curve/ No glove? Fuck it - you’ll see a sock over the handle...do not disturb/ Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/ Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/ U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/ But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/ Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/ Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/ This was dope. I got Jabari with the hardest hits being the two personals. Dope stuff guys V/Jabari Black

03-12-2019, 06:36 PM	#12
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,439 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	I left the gemstone just so I can wreck & then slay G’s, So if J.B. Robinson...I’ll choke’em w/a ‘chain rope around his neck’ like the 80s Nice Or I could spring forward & attack from a flank stance, All he’ll see are ‘arms swingin on both sides of his body’...Carlton Banks dance This is cool.. not harsh though.. U dream & desire of beating me...so nigga let’s do it, But in the end, this ‘needle get ur lung punctured’...& I’m not draining chest fluid cool, simple but some contact I’m the best stupid...nigga u know this boss talk sinful, If u run the streets...I’ll ‘light ur body up from head to toe’ like a crosswalk symbol nice Ur bitch is hideous...so u’ll find her in a gutter place, Cuz it felt right when I put the biscuit to her jellyrolls & shot everywhere butterface this is cool He owes me cash but I can tell he’s a fag in a blouse, & this ‘transaction’ will lead to ‘clips in his wig’ before he gets ‘drag out the house’ dope I’m an OG. I keep an old burner plus this flow crack, So there’s no surprise when I leave ‘Bullets across his chest’ like a Wizards throwback not feelin this I’ll merk his squad until the numbers on his staff light, Cuz when I put his ‘team in the air’...I’m not holding up a jersey on Draft Night thought this was dope I'll attack u on land, sea, or the sky. Idgaf if ur a star bro, Cuz after I ‘remove u from the ship’...my goons will be shootin where ever ur cargo I fuck wit this If they gimme the drop. I’ma let this eagle talk now, All he’ll see is a ‘chopper in the sky’...& I’m dumpin till bullets get 'Black Hawk Down' felt this could have been worded harsher... light at best Vs The Ruger near. All hollow tips when I shoot the led/ Hammer-n the point...you bout to get it through ya head/ wasnt feelin this U let Zelph say that racist shit. You shoulda knocked his fucking head off/ I know you a gunbar rapper...but that’s the wrong way to let the 12 talk/ ok I spin the block! Chop out the window...I’m clappin the K, queer/ Drive by in a old ford! ‘One eighty-seven outta ‘88’...I’m havin a great year/ lol this was slick Wesson squeeze! If ya team get involved it’s getting messy, B/ After you catch the heat...it ‘Flash on ya squad’ like The Justice League/ wasnt feeling this... to me it didnt rhyme either. The choppa burst. 30 in a half moon...the clip got a curve/ No glove? Fuck it - you’ll see a sock over the handle...do not disturb/ lmao... i fuck with this Get disfigured! Extended mag - the clip bigger/ Headshot! Soon as I draw...the 5 linin’ a dome like a stick figure/ this was aight could have been harsher U spent the whole season bitching bout bleaks job. The whole beef was weak, slob/ But this AR got a pistol grip n a bump stock...try to argue with these mods/ dope Keep one drawn and one tucked...let one of these tools leave you crippled/ Cus to me it’s a chess game...cus if one piece missin I’ll start using the nickel/ this is cool... This clown dying. Its a hair trigger when the pound rising/ Then a lung shot! Shorten his breadth in the building...he downsizing/ I fuck with this A round flying. A piece raise em when the four is sprayin/ Or the heat wave...extend the desert like deforestation/ [b]nah Overall close battle... Havent read much from body seemed to be doing more gun bars like JB.. tbh felt some of both could have been harsher both had misses but i got Body here by a quote. mad close[b]