07-01-2019, 02:03 PM | #1 |
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Wanderer vs Zuo - ZELPH WINS
BA Summer League Due Thursday, July 4th Minimum - 6 lines Max - 10 lines Line limit can increase if both agree 24hr ext to be granted by opponent NO biting NO swaying NO feeding Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit or match the first to drop @Zuo @Wanderer |
07-01-2019, 02:12 PM | #2 |
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Sup. Let’s just match but try not to go 10
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07-01-2019, 02:26 PM | #3 |
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I’ll drop soon
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07-02-2019, 03:56 PM | #4 |
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Fuck ur girl at gunpoint cos these cannons ain’t harmless
Twins pressed right against her shirt like she went braless Boy u need religion. Each hand got a gat in em Arm raised to ur head for one finger motion to wet u up, no baptism Petty crime ain’t my shit. Ride around aligning the clip When I spark from the dash then drive away it ain’t cos I’m hot wiring ur whip |
07-02-2019, 05:02 PM | #5 |
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Ur entire teams fulla wack guys, im aimin’ cannons at ur squad for a flat price
BLAST PIPES. Bullets tear thru ur vessels.. whole crews gettin wrecked by the capsize Full clip for this queer fuck. Shells’ll hit u & whoever ur near bruh STOMACH SHOT! It’ll leave ur belly leakin’ out ya shirt like a beer gut Think I’m scared of this bitch? For thinkin’ u’ll win ur gettin aired n then split we ain’t bout to see a dead guy run the show.. this ain’t Tales from the Crypt Last edited by Zuo; 07-03-2019 at 03:46 PM. |
07-03-2019, 03:50 PM | #6 |
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Wanderer
-Twins pressed against your shirt was pretty cool.. enjoyable meta & the setup was good -Baptism pretty fire 'arm raised' concept and gun bar.. well developed and the short and sweet setup I dig.. nice meta -spark from the dash and drive away / drive-by concept is niceee.. dig it, don't recall seeing it unless it's been in a live battle Ive missed Nice short verse with cool metas Vs Zelph -Capsize is ehhhh I just feel like it's already been done a ton of ways, and better tbh... Age old vessel blood & boat reference and tie in takes away from the bar more then helps it imo cuz it's so old -hmmm, beer belly's don't really leak out of shirts, they'd flop more than anything.. ehh, it's a decent concept at best that's a stretch to work... Not really feeling -run the show conceptually wasn't really tied in well here and seems out of nowhere.. but the meta is fresh and pretty cool Overall yeah Wanderer got this... All 3 of his concepts were pretty solid and his concepts were more creative and fresher on the whole... Cool read Vote - Wanderer
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07-07-2019, 12:21 PM | #7 |
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Hard to choose. Bar for bar it’s...
Beer belly vs the hot wire bar imo I’m taking Wanderer. Thought his bar was put together better. Like the concept a tad bit more too V/ Wanderer |
07-07-2019, 10:21 PM | #8 |
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Fuck ur girl at gunpoint cos these cannons ain’t harmless
Twins pressed right against her shirt like she went braless cool, haven't seen this angle before Boy u need religion. Each hand got a gat in em Arm raised to ur head for one finger motion to wet u up, no baptism same as above Petty crime ain’t my shit. Ride around aligning the clip When I spark from the dash then drive away it ain’t cos I’m hot wiring ur whip cool, haven't seen this angle before and had a nice live style sting Ur entire teams fulla wack guys, im aimin’ cannons at ur squad for a flat price BLAST PIPES. Bullets tear thru ur vessels.. whole crews gettin wrecked by the capsize cool take on capsize, but I've seen a lot of capsize bars. Def one of thr better ones I've seen, but it's not hitting too hard for that reason Full clip for this queer fuck. Shells’ll hit u & whoever ur near bruh STOMACH SHOT! It’ll leave ur belly leakin’ out ya shirt like a beer gut I fuck with this one Think I’m scared of this bitch? For thinkin’ u’ll win ur gettin aired n then split we ain’t bout to see a dead guy run the show.. this ain’t Tales from the Crypt I really like this one. Not a ton of sting but a good idea Close, but I found Wanderer's verse more consistent. Dope stuff guys V/wanderer |
07-08-2019, 10:34 AM | #9 |
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Brless was cool could have done more with it.. baptism was dope and hot wiring ur whip was aight wasn’t a big fan. Maybe a different angle it could have been dope
Capsize I’ve seen a million ways. I fuck with the beer gut that was nice. Tales from the crypt was cool felt it could have had more sting... This is close tbh I hated zelph a capsize play... but felt his other two bars were a hair better Could go either way but v/zelph Last edited by Kill Spree; 07-08-2019 at 11:27 AM. |
07-08-2019, 10:50 AM | #10 |
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Gun bars...ugggh...Not my cup of tea. Wanderer was descent.his closer line, "When I spark from the dash then drive away it ain’t cos I’m hot wiring ur whip" was the most creative. Zuo on the other hand plenty of creative juices flowing throughout. I'm not a huge fan of these type of battles but metaphors, visuals, rhymesheme, and vocab where all present in Zuo''s verse.
Overall they both did well and I had to figure out which verse would do for me. Therefore I'm going with Zuo for the win.
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07-08-2019, 11:15 AM | #11 |
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Fuck ur girl at gunpoint cos these cannons ain’t harmless Twins pressed right against her shirt like she went braless Cool Boy u need religion. Each hand got a gat in em Arm raised to ur head for one finger motion to wet u up, no baptism Concept was cool but delivery could've been better Look at the gat size, boy you'll need religion, I chastise Arm raised to your head the finger to wet you up, you're getting baptized Petty crime ain’t my shit. Ride around aligning the clip When I spark from the dash then drive away it ain’t cos I’m hot wiring ur whip concept cool needed tighter wording Zuo: Ur entire teams fulla wack guys, im aimin’ cannons at ur squad for a flat price BLAST PIPES. Bullets tear thru ur vessels.. whole crews gettin wrecked by the capsize liked the multis, played concept Full clip for this queer fuck. Shells’ll hit u & whoever ur near bruh STOMACH SHOT! It’ll leave ur belly leakin’ out ya shirt like a beer gut cool Think I’m scared of this bitch? For thinkin’ u’ll win ur gettin aired n then split we ain’t bout to see a dead guy run the show.. this ain’t Tales from the Crypt lol cool Wanted to vote TIE at first but if I'm being real I liked Zuo's verse better but Wanderer had the better attempts. MVGT Zuo
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07-08-2019, 09:53 PM | #12 |
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This was a dope battle actually pretty even from both but I think I got zelph edging this out.
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07-08-2019, 11:45 PM | #13 |
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This could go either way imo, similar approach
Lets see.. Braless vs Beer Gut was even Hot wire, Tales from Crypt, Capsize, Baptism that order.. hmm vote - ZUO for executing a lil better to my liking close tho |
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