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Old 01-05-2016, 03:12 PM   #1
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Old 01-06-2016, 01:44 AM   #2
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Old 01-07-2016, 04:51 PM   #3
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Old 01-08-2016, 11:11 PM   #5
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blah

foh

clown tryna square up but the lime's not by his side
that's enough to silent murda, that's a mime homicide
I line-up with A4's to prove that the torture is real.
U'd think I'm in the Audi Production Line as soon as ya see the four rings on his grill.
find murda in the creek. I do this for the heck of it n thrills.
It'll be a movie-like Homi when sho's in the stream, I'd call it ...netflix & kill
no more escaping my bullet. Things are about to get rowdy, fucker.
1 cap, sure will end it all ..they'd mistake me as El Chapo's Bounty Hunter
Keep your closest buddies hostage than beat em down.
than with the blade, give em the kanye cut ...till your real friends leaking out.
Ur a runner-up at best. Literally, no-ones idol.
reminds me of foreign tv series, u'd only see sho with sub titles
u launching nothing but shit... to see what sticks but no one sees that.
connect n this fruit in a box like I downloaded that new 'peach' app
quick with the comebacks that will destroy ya with dominance
these essays have a quicker response to sho, than Dora the explorer's audience.

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Old 01-09-2016, 02:12 AM   #6
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Just got in the crib yo... I could drop tomorrow or you could take the win it's up to you I'm tired as fuck
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I battle u? Is this a joke? Where's the camera film he must be bluffin
Cause his bars get the same reaction he got from Jilti in Discussion
You're an insect, but fuck it its war then, buck at his mug till he confulse on the floor then
Reload and keep shootin at bugs like Elmer Fudd in the forest!
So u champed a punch league, should I start a slow clap or laugh fool
Arby's talent is watered down over here you're just fast food
I got goons that would bomb the nation so you should just talk softer
This'll be a domination that could bring back Farooq or The Godfather
See what the mag said? Im killing it this week...
You'd have a better chance winning the Lotto than be predicted winning against me
Im bout to send a couple rounds at this guy till that bitch smokes
And heel get lifted off the ground like he trying to tip toe
Im top 10 you couldn't spar on the par with me jerk
Only time you'll make a top is on an R.I.P shirt
I'll make u a legend in dead night when I release my piece
The last thing you'll see is the red light now you B.I.G


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Old 01-10-2016, 10:05 AM   #8
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V-MS. I thought Slecht had a lot of eh concepts this time around, for ex, his opener. Murda sho had simpler shit but the wording made it good
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Audi rings, subtitles, el chapo
Wording hurt your execution, for the most part. While other concepts were just weird.

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Opener, fast food, tip toe, rip shirt
Seen waaay better, really lazy verse from u, tbh.

Overall Sho won, just because of cleaner, SIMPLER, yet more polished punches. A lot of Slecht's stuff felt forced & reads awkward.
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Old 01-10-2016, 02:37 PM   #10
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I liked the Audi rings line from slecht tbh. but some of ya shit was wtf to me, mime homicide lol nooo

sho came alright...nothing really blew me away concept wise, but no bad flips, which is where slecht trailed off. arbys was aiightt, heel was simple but clean.

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Im bout to send a couple rounds at this guy till that bitch smokes
And heel get lifted off the ground like he trying to tip toe
Im top 10 you couldn't spar on the par with me jerk
Only time you'll make a top is on an R.I.P shirt

was raw and the main stad out in this battle, slecht had some odd wording at times i struggled to get into the verse, murda was just more fluid and and some decent hits throughout, - vote mrda
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Old 01-10-2016, 06:56 PM   #12
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I line-up with A4's to prove that the torture is real.
U'd think I'm in the Audi Production Line as soon as ya see the four rings on his grill.

Keep your closest buddies hostage than beat em down.
than with the blade, give em the kanye cut ...till your real friends leaking out.

Ur a runner-up at best. Literally, no-ones idol.
reminds me of foreign tv series, u'd only see sho with sub titles

netflix line was a cool concept that fell short.. a few lines felt like that - a word missing here or there that undermined the punchline.

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So u champed a punch league, should I start a slow clap or laugh fool
Arby's talent is watered down over here you're just fast food

I felt that Sho's concepts were a little simplistic, tbh. There were executed a little better - but nothing blew me away. Slecht takes it for me with a couple harder hitting lines.
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Old 01-11-2016, 12:54 PM   #13
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I got sho with a better read just more polished all around
not the best verse I've seen from him but
Slech did better than I expected him to do having never read anything from him
bottom line, ok verse, way too many plays on sho

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Elmer fudd, arbys, tip toe

Alright, cool battle here. Slecht had 2 ok lines at best. Murda brang enough to seal the deal here, arbys and tip toe were nice

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I guess sho takes it

Audi line I liked, hated the name plays

Sho was ok he jabbed himself to a win

Elmer line was nice
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