Semi Finals: Unfukwitable vs Remy LeBeau {Unfukwitable wins}

[Victor.]

@Unfukwitable @Remy LeBeau

[Unfukwitable]

Originally Posted by Useless

I don't really like the fight nights.
10 mins ain't enuff time to write shit.
Its basically a prewrite contest to see who has the most bars saved in their notepad
with a personal or NP flip thrown in.

No need for WD40, all these Guns is new, they'll leave his guts removed;
the Heckler & Koch'll prove his theory true; cos I got FN rounds saved up just for you!
Squad said chill, But there's a lesson he'll learn after eagles burn,
I'm so hell bent on "bustin U-we" all bout to get tickets for Illegal turns!.
I'll punch his face off & my fist will leave his lip full of bruises;
til I'm to embarrassed to post in Amen's Car thread, cos what I'm whippin is Useless.
This Bastard's got a job drawin faces for Cops, how's this RAT a rapper?;
He's more like an SNL recruit, But those Sketches are no laughin matter.
U lack substance, It's no respect for'a 06 texthead that's not close to a vet;
..&U decided to give Neighbor tips bout Online pharmacies, U're not even Dope on the Net!
Why're we even speaking, lets get to the heaters barkin;
Witness'll turn left cheeks, when Machines is talkin w/ Useless body like Stephen Hawking!.
I beat Nik, Bags, Sn00p If that was u, U'd compete & flop;
U ain't even have the upper hand w/ Doh!, U'd only clean sweep a Pizza Shop.
Ur concepts lack cleverness, it's a bunch of weak scripts in ur pad;
Ironic: last round U took Witty out, with a verse that was a spitting image of that.

[Useless]

Aka noquear (yea, seriously)

Wowzerz@ that shit, its a laughing shame.
When u marry a man the vow'll be wrong.. like the 'a' in ur faggit name.
There's nothing I hate more n a fake cop snitch.
Fuck with my Cane n I'm killing 'Able in a way that would make god flinch.
Fists hit his eye like a tomahawk missile n blow up the place.
Now he's got apache has to wear to cover up the fuckn hole in his face.
U need to keep the real world n txt separate, ppl might've started noticing...
Cause ripping bags off reminded everyone of ur work life sacking groceries.
Lol @ muff's 10 min key beat this wack geek.
When I call u a fat black pussy, scuz u got bodied by one in the (LLL)eague last week.
U been on a tear lately, so I took a look at ur past beatings...
I'm not saying u cheating...
but if it weren't for Victor crews.. you'd be getting over looked more'n the giants last season.
Ur shits played n weak, Imma kill/slay this geek.
I'd put em in a body bag, but bags bodied em last week n took the thrill away from me.
Ur too soft dog, I feel like I'm attacking a snow man.
read my verses...
..u Palin comparison.. n we hate fuk so much nc joined Bristol's abstinence program.

[Hush]

OPEN FOR VOTES.

[Bloodshed]

This was pretty decent...

Unfuk: Heckler & Koch was pretty decent. I felt u-E was forced wordplay even tho it had a dope setup, still a miss. Whippin is useless kind of had weak execution. SNL was dope. Dope on the net was kind of weak. Didn't get it... Stephen Hawking gun line I wasn't feeling. Pizza shop was decent. Is witty someone on here? I didn't get it.. It was a dope setup tho.

Vs

Useless: a/faggot name was LOTB... Killing able was cool.. Apache was nice.. Nice execution. Bags is clearly a member? If so this was good, bodied in league last week I didn't get. Victor Crews was dope. Giants are fucking wack tho, lol. Thrill away from me was okay.. Bristols program was a miss.

Vote: Un had some pretty nice concepts here and there... But I felt Useless basically out punched him almost every line.. Giving this to Useless.

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Unfukwitable

No need for WD40, all these Guns is new, they'll leave his guts removed;
the Heckler & Koch'll prove his theory true; cos I got FN rounds saved up just for you!
this is ok. lil simple
Squad said chill, But there's a lesson he'll learn after eagles burn,
I'm so hell bent on "bustin U-we" all bout to get tickets for Illegal turns!.
this is close to being nice but the wording was a slight force
I'll punch his face off & my fist will leave his lip full of bruises;
til I'm to embarrassed to post in Amen's Car thread, cos what I'm whippin is Useless.
slight off on the wording setting up the punch. nice concept.
This Bastard's got a job drawin faces for Cops, how's this RAT a rapper?;
He's more like an SNL recruit, But those Sketches are no laughin matter.
nice concept didn't like your delivery
U lack substance, It's no respect for'a 06 texthead that's not close to a vet;
..&U decided to give Neighbor tips bout Online pharmacies, U're not even Dope on the Net!
ok.
Why're we even speaking, lets get to the heaters barkin;
Witness'll turn left cheeks, when Machines is talkin w/ Useless body like Stephen Hawking!.
nice
I beat Nik, Bags, Sn00p If that was u, U'd compete & flop;
U ain't even have the upper hand w/ Doh!, U'd only clean sweep a Pizza Shop.
ok
Ur concepts lack cleverness, it's a bunch of weak scripts in ur pad;
Ironic: last round U took Witty out, with a verse that was a spitting image of that.
ok

Originally Posted by Useless

Aka noquear (yea, seriously)

Wowzerz@ that shit, its a laughing shame.
When u marry a man the vow'll be wrong.. like the 'a' in ur faggit name.
nah
There's nothing I hate more n a fake cop snitch.
Fuck with my Cane n I'm killing 'Able in a way that would make god flinch.
decent concept didnt think the flip was great tho
Fists hit his eye like a tomahawk missile n blow up the place.
Now he's got apache has to wear to cover up the fuckn hole in his face.
liked this
U need to keep the real world n txt separate, ppl might've started noticing...
Cause ripping bags off reminded everyone of ur work life sacking groceries.
ok
Lol @ muff's 10 min key beat this wack geek.
When I call u a fat black pussy, scuz u got bodied by one in the (LLL)eague last week.
ok
U been on a tear lately, so I took a look at ur past beatings...
I'm not saying u cheating...
but if it weren't for Victor crews.. you'd be getting over looked more'n the giants last season.
nice concept. decent wording
Ur shits played n weak, Imma kill/slay this geek.
I'd put em in a body bag, but bags bodied em last week n took the thrill away from me.
nah not really
Ur too soft dog, I feel like I'm attacking a snow man.
read my verses...
..u Palin comparison.. n we hate fuk so much nc joined Bristol's abstinence program.
this is alright

This is kinda like a concepts versus wording thing to me. Unfuk had some creative shit, but I cringed reading some of these. A lot of potential haymakers with wording that was broken to me. Remy's verse was generally a bit lighter in the punch department, but most of it was worded fairly smoothly. I have Unfuk with Stephen Hawking, but I liked Apache and Victor Crews from Remy. Looking at misses, Unfuk definitely had fewer and a lot his bars were near quotable. I could see an argument either way but I feel like I'm leaning towards Unfuk for the consistency. I just really wish you spent a little more time on the wording.

Vote Unfukwitable

[Mr. J]

Squad said chill, But there's a lesson he'll learn after eagles burn,
I'm so hell bent on "bustin U-we" all bout to get tickets for Illegal turns!.
I'll punch his face off & my fist will leave his lip full of bruises;
til I'm to embarrassed to post in Amen's Car thread, cos what I'm whippin is Useless.

Why're we even speaking, lets get to the heaters barkin;
Witness'll turn left cheeks, when Machines is talkin w/ Useless body like Stephen Hawking!.
I beat Nik, Bags, Sn00p If that was u, U'd compete & flop;
U ain't even have the upper hand w/ Doh!, U'd only clean sweep a Pizza Shop.
^^^^
Un went iiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnn I thought this was a dope verse altogether
but these were the stand out bars for me, and I really enjoyed those punches
the set ups were pretty nice and it was just punch after punch which was great
it really felt like a full battle verse ready to demolish your oppenent at a moments notice
dope shit for real

Fists hit his eye like a tomahawk missile n blow up the place.
Now he's got apache has to wear to cover up the fuckn hole in his face.
U need to keep the real world n txt separate, ppl might've started noticing...
Cause ripping bags off reminded everyone of ur work life sacking groceries.

U been on a tear lately, so I took a look at ur past beatings...
I'm not saying u cheating...
but if it weren't for Victor crews.. you'd be getting over looked more'n the giants last season.
Ur shits played n weak, Imma kill/slay this geek.
I'd put em in a body bag, but bags bodied em last week n took the thrill away from me.
^^^^^^^^
I felt like these were your strongest points and made the verse worthwhile
I thought that little switch up at the end felt kind of weird but it was still smooth
you made it work into the scheme that you were using and you still got your punches in
some of them I couldn't relate to but I can feel the sting there...pretty cool
more personal without the use of wordplay & slick metaphors..
good job...


v/Unfuk...he had the stronger all around verse...
Useless had a nice verse but was overpowered by Unfuk's barrage of punches
if Useless had the drive & motivation to do the same it would have been a great battle
but one overpowered the other and it shows..nice battle fella's

[Hush]

Fists hit his eye like a tomahawk missile n blow up the place.
Now he's got apache has to wear to cover up the fuckn hole in his face.
U been on a tear lately, so I took a look at ur past beatings...
I'm not saying u cheating...
but if it weren't for Victor crews.. you'd be getting over looked more'n the giants last season.


didnt really feel Useless angles, his wording was as slick as ever. but the concepts were bland and he didnt do anything new or overly creative with them. all the bags references weighed the verse down to me and didnt land imho.


vs



I'll punch his face off & my fist will leave his lip full of bruises;
til I'm to embarrassed to post in Amen's Car thread, cos what I'm whippin is Useless.
This Bastard's got a job drawin faces for Cops, how's this RAT a rapper?;
He's more like an SNL recruit, But those Sketches are no laughin matter.
Why're we even speaking, lets get to the heaters barkin;
Witness'll turn left cheeks, when Machines is talkin w/ Useless body like Stephen Hawking!.




Unfuk got this by a quote in my opinion, and the punches he landed landed harder cuz they was more creative.


v/Fukwit

[Junto]

No need for WD40, all these Guns is new, they'll leave his guts removed;
the Heckler & Koch'll prove his theory true; cos I got FN rounds saved up just for you!
fire... real smooth wording & tied in perfect wit the quote
I'll punch his face off & my fist will leave his lip full of bruises;
til I'm to embarrassed to post in Amen's Car thread, cos what I'm whippin is Useless.
haha solid
This Bastard's got a job drawin faces for Cops, how's this RAT a rapper?;
He's more like an SNL recruit, But those Sketches are no laughin matter.
I like the sketches concept but not the execution... didn't hit that hard
Why're we even speaking, lets get to the heaters barkin;
Witness'll turn left cheeks, when Machines is talkin w/ Useless body like Stephen Hawking!.
damn this is dope

vs.

Wowzerz@ that shit, its a laughing shame.
When u marry a man the vow'll be wrong.. like the 'a' in ur faggit name.
haha I like this... the wording was unorthodox but made me laugh
Fists hit his eye like a tomahawk missile n blow up the place.
Now he's got apache has to wear to cover up the fuckn hole in his face.
nice
U been on a tear lately, so I took a look at ur past beatings...
I'm not saying u cheating...
but if it weren't for Victor crews.. you'd be getting over looked more'n the giants last season.
had this idea for Cred & shelfed it, so that took away a little for me... not bad tho
Ur too soft dog, I feel like I'm attacking a snow man.
read my verses...
..u Palin comparison.. n we hate fuk so much nc joined Bristol's abstinence program.
good concept but the wording threw it off some

Solid battle... seen both come more consistent in the past, but still some hard bars
FN rounds & Stephen Hawking were heat from Unfuk. Amen car thread was good too.
vow'll be wrong / a in your faggit name was hilarious to me the way Useless did it
Apache was tough. A cpl others that hit too but some that didn't work at all to be honest...
The bags lines just didn't have much to them... too simple / played concepts
& that Muff line was reaaal lazy. Muff beat him ...... so he's a fat black pussy?
To be fair Unfuk also had a couple whiffs to me like dope on the net & take Witty out
But overall his angles were a little more creative...
And as far as the standout lines I chose, I thought Un edged it there too

V/ Unfukwitable