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Old 05-26-2020, 04:55 PM   #1
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30 & probs still a virgin too.. ur clout the worst, boss
This nerd’s lost. How u gon’ name urself Coop.. & not know the first thing bout a bird’s box
What a whiner! What can u offer except not writing properly... please
Obviously Coupon mags... since he cry bout how much guns are costing the league
U crying for attention. NC’s wanna see my hands hitting his mug
Next week we hope it’s more Tear Breakdowns... followed by slashed wrists in the tub
How long u been around & STILL bring Ancient concepts?! S’why ur the weakest
Keep tabling those Fragile Antiques... no wonder u wrong foot & it all falls to pieces
Ur trash so why u here?? Can’t be a hidden agenda, I’m sure this kid is nuts
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Poor thing...

Always running ya gums, but you fumbled ya guns in that weak assault
FUCK your lil drive to win, only noise you making's a screeching halt
Just another washed, faggoty white clown who gets sad when he writes down
You couldn't be in the 'Zone, on fire, if you lived in Minneapolis right NOW
Look how mad he gets, pipe down. <- I'm sure ya girl deals with that often
Ain't had good wood in so long, she startin to see the appeal of a coffin
Never broke her back. He snorting w/ laughter cuz he nose it's fact
His flow so wack, last time he had a LOTB, must've been coke vs crack
Battle's been done. I dumbed it down, don't pretend that you don't get me
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Your verse? Read every line? We'd rather kill you & be legally blind
He can't steal our breath away, so he'll just diluting the league of its time


At least you tried

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30 & probs still a virgin too.. ur clout the worst, boss
This nerd’s lost. How u gon’ name urself Coop.. & not know the first thing bout a bird’s box

U crying for attention. NC’s wanna see my hands hitting his mug
Next week we hope it’s more Tear Breakdowns... followed by slashed wrists in the tub

vs.

Look how mad he gets, pipe down. <- I'm sure ya girl deals with that often
Ain't had good wood in so long, she startin to see the appeal of a coffin
Never broke her back. He snorting w/ laughter cuz he nose it's fact
His flow so wack, last time he had a LOTB, must've been coke vs crack

v - Coop. In this battle, I had it pretty evenly. 2-2. I think Wand had the best bar with tier/tear breakdowns. Coke vs. crack bar got a chuckle out of me, and the coffin one was also very nice though. The bar Wand had about Coupon mags was almost quotable but needed better wording imo. Same with the "proof" bar from Coop. This was close, but on the strength of both bars, Coop won it for me, as that bird box line is long and filled with ridiculousness, so I almost didn't quote it. Wording on that could've given the edge
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30 & probs still a virgin too.. ur clout the worst, boss
This nerd’s lost. How u gon’ name urself Coop.. & not know the first thing bout a bird’s box
haha nice start
What a whiner! What can u offer except not writing properly... please
Obviously Coupon mags... since he cry bout how much guns are costing the league
decent wordplay but it doesn't fully make sense both ways
U crying for attention. NC’s wanna see my hands hitting his mug
Next week we hope it’s more Tear Breakdowns... followed by slashed wrists in the tub
nice, the wp isn't that orginal but nice flip on it. could've lost a few words I think
How long u been around & STILL bring Ancient concepts?! S’why ur the weakest
Keep tabling those Fragile Antiques... no wonder u wrong foot & it all falls to pieces
kinda basic unless im missing something
Ur trash so why u here?? Can’t be a hidden agenda, I’m sure this kid is nuts
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this was ok
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I’mma break glass & put 2 shards to the base of ur neck like a 70’s collar
decent but heard collars referred to as shards?


Always running ya gums, but you fumbled ya guns in that weak assault
FUCK your lil drive to win, only noise you making's a screeching halt
ok, could've thrown in like a break/brake wp to make more sense?
Just another washed, faggoty white clown who gets sad when he writes down
You couldn't be in the 'Zone, on fire, if you lived in Minneapolis right NOW
decent
Look how mad he gets, pipe down. <- I'm sure ya girl deals with that often
Ain't had good wood in so long, she startin to see the appeal of a coffin
pretty basic
Never broke her back. He snorting w/ laughter cuz he nose it's fact
His flow so wack, last time he had a LOTB, must've been coke vs crack
decent
Battle's been done. I dumbed it down, don't pretend that you don't get me
Show N Prove? All the 'proof' you got wouldn't get a 10 yr old girl tipsy
better
Your verse? Read every line? We'd rather kill you & be legally blind
He can't steal our breath away, so he'll just diluting the league of its time
this would've been great if the ending changed slightly 'diluting the talent pool' or something would've been better I think, the phrase you used doesn't really make sense?

Wanderer I think had better ideas and the better highlights so I think he edges it, just. Close battle though good from both

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Old 05-31-2020, 08:02 PM   #8
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30 & probs still a virgin too.. ur clout the worst, boss
This nerd’s lost. How u gon’ name urself Coop.. & not know the first thing bout a bird’s box

kinda funny, solid opener

What a whiner! What can u offer except not writing properly... please
Obviously Coupon mags... since he cry bout how much guns are costing the league

Nah, I like the idea but this didn't fully make sense to say that he's "on mags"

U crying for attention. NC’s wanna see my hands hitting his mug
Next week we hope it’s more Tear Breakdowns... followed by slashed wrists in the tub

I think this mightve landed a littleee harder if you wrote this out as "Tier". Overall a solid bar, though I've seen tier/tear and breakdown/breakdown concepts done before (just not together). I like the wording. I definitely feel like you've gotten more aggressive with it. Solid bar

How long u been around & STILL bring Ancient concepts?! S’why ur the weakest
Keep tabling those Fragile Antiques... no wonder u wrong foot & it all falls to pieces

Eh nah not feeling this one

Ur trash so why u here?? Can’t be a hidden agenda, I’m sure this kid is nuts
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this is cool

Style ain’t been hot in ANY decade or era so u can bet he’s a gonna
I’mma break glass & put 2 shards to the base of ur neck like a 70’s collar

Not exactly sure what kind of fashion style you're referencing, but its pretty self explanatory and the ideas cool.


Always running ya gums, but you fumbled ya guns in that weak assault
FUCK your lil drive to win, only noise you making's a screeching halt

cool opener

Just another washed, faggoty white clown who gets sad when he writes down
You couldn't be in the 'Zone, on fire, if you lived in Minneapolis right NOW

wouldve hit a little harder if this wasnt shortened to zone but ok current event bar

Look how mad he gets, pipe down. <- I'm sure ya girl deals with that often
Ain't had good wood in so long, she startin to see the appeal of a coffin

i like this idea, maybe the set-up couldve been a little better tied into the idea of his girl wanting to kill herself but the rest is cool

Never broke her back. He snorting w/ laughter cuz he nose it's fact
His flow so wack, last time he had a LOTB, must've been coke vs crack

lol not the most original bar but the angle on it's kinda fresh and it's funny

Battle's been done. I dumbed it down, don't pretend that you don't get me
Show N Prove? All the 'proof' you got wouldn't get a 10 yr old girl tipsy

nah not feeling this, could've been executed better

Your verse? Read every line? We'd rather kill you & be legally blind
He can't steal our breath away, so he'll just diluting the league of its time

grammatically this doesnt make sense on both interpretations, and I did do a diluting wp in the past vs. seth so it weakens the hit for me. meh closer



highlights:
birds box, glint in ur eye vs. coffin, screetching halt

this was a close battle in my eyes, I had to reread a couple times to really determine a winner. I felt like the biggest miss in this battle was wand's antique bar, I just wasn't feeling it. Everything else from both coop and wand was at least decent, I think you both did a good job of being consistent overall, but someone has to win and someone has to lose

v/ coop

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Coop won.

Much more natural verse. Wanderer had some cool concepts (bird’s box, etc), but a lot of it felt kinda forced... and the lines were too long. Coop’s wasn’t mind blowing, but it was direct and smooth. A much more enjoyable read. He wins. Cheers.
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Bird box
Wrist in tub
Spill ya guts
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Zone in fire
Proof

V/ wand... I thought he won this..his bars seemed to pack a little more sting..and he had one more quotable..close match but I think he just pulled it off
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30 & probs still a virgin too.. ur clout the worst, boss
This nerd’s lost. How u gon’ name urself Coop.. & not know the first thing bout a bird’s box
..::I like this
What a whiner! What can u offer except not writing properly... please
Obviously Coupon mags... since he cry bout how much guns are costing the league
...wow that’s fire . Color me impressed
U crying for attention. NC’s wanna see my hands hitting his mug
Next week we hope it’s more Tear Breakdowns... followed by slashed wrists in the tub
...great wording but the line wasn’t really memorable
How long u been around & STILL bring Ancient concepts?! S’why ur the weakest
Keep tabling those Fragile Antiques... no wonder u wrong foot & it all falls to pieces
.::..this was an ambitious line . A lot of moving peices . I love multi layered lines and double concepts . This didn’t work but good try
Ur trash so why u here?? Can’t be a hidden agenda, I’m sure this kid is nuts
if there’s EVER a glint in ur eye... it’s just reflecting off the blade before I spill ya guts
....this is really really good . I don’t give props easily but this is a good verse
Style ain’t been hot in ANY decade or era so u can bet he’s a gonna
I’mma break glass & put 2 shards to the base of ur neck like a 70’s collar
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Poor thing...

Always running ya gums, but you fumbled ya guns in that weak assault
FUCK your lil drive to win, only noise you making's a screeching halt
....good flip on a very tired. Get it TIRED. Yes corny
Just another washed, faggoty white clown who gets sad when he writes down
You couldn't be in the 'Zone, on fire, if you lived in Minneapolis right NOW
.... that was tight
Look how mad he gets, pipe down. <- I'm sure ya girl deals with that often
Ain't had good wood in so long, she startin to see the appeal of a coffin
.... this is cool
Never broke her back. He snorting w/ laughter cuz he nose it's fact
His flow so wack, last time he had a LOTB, must've been coke vs crack
...: lmao !!! Omg tjay was fire lotb right here . This is ether lol
Battle's been done. I dumbed it down, don't pretend that you don't get me
Show N Prove? All the 'proof' you got wouldn't get a 10 yr old girl tipsy
.... eh I get it but it’s a weak link from concept to punch to diss here . Kinda a reach
Your verse? Read every line? We'd rather kill you & be legally blind
He can't steal our breath away, so he'll just diluting the league of its time
....nope


At least you tried



Coop had the best line by far and I usually vote for lotb


BUT wand had too many dope lines


He out punched coop here


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Best battle I read since I been back


Props to both




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if I had to vote i'd go for Coop tho.. appeal of coffin is LOTB
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Coop had the coffin line that was funny. The rest was either old or missed. Zone line was okay. Wanderer has the bird box line and coupon line. Glint in your eye is okay too but very straightforward/obvious. Wanderer missed less. Steal our breath away was a bad miss. Vote Wanderer.
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30 & probs still a virgin too.. ur clout the worst, boss
This nerd’s lost. How u gon’ name urself Coop.. & not know the first thing bout a bird’s box
I like it. Flows nice and the punch gets the job done.
What a whiner! What can u offer except not writing properly... please
Obviously Coupon mags... since he cry bout how much guns are costing the league
solid. Well put together
U crying for attention. NC’s wanna see my hands hitting his mug
Next week we hope it’s more Tear Breakdowns... followed by slashed wrists in the tub
tier/tear is an okay flip, personal angle makes this good
How long u been around & STILL bring Ancient concepts?! S’why ur the weakest
Keep tabling those Fragile Antiques... no wonder u wrong foot & it all falls to pieces
execution is kinda lacking, not really feeling this one
Ur trash so why u here?? Can’t be a hidden agenda, I’m sure this kid is nuts
if there’s EVER a glint in ur eye... it’s just reflecting off the blade before I spill ya guts
nice idea, but nothing crazy
Style ain’t been hot in ANY decade or era so u can bet he’s a gonna
I’mma break glass & put 2 shards to the base of ur neck like a 70’s collar
funny, but kind of fantastical tbh

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Poor thing...

Always running ya gums, but you fumbled ya guns in that weak assault
FUCK your lil drive to win, only noise you making's a screeching halt
alright
Just another washed, faggoty white clown who gets sad when he writes down
You couldn't be in the 'Zone, on fire, if you lived in Minneapolis right NOW
cool idea.
Look how mad he gets, pipe down. <- I'm sure ya girl deals with that often
Ain't had good wood in so long, she startin to see the appeal of a coffin
I've seen a lot of wood flips, but this does enough to hit imo
Never broke her back. He snorting w/ laughter cuz he nose it's fact
His flow so wack, last time he had a LOTB, must've been coke vs crack
okay
Battle's been done. I dumbed it down, don't pretend that you don't get me
Show N Prove? All the 'proof' you got wouldn't get a 10 yr old girl tipsy
okay, but light
Your verse? Read every line? We'd rather kill you & be legally blind
He can't steal our breath away, so he'll just diluting the league of its time
my problem with this bar is that it doesn't work one way, and the other way isn't something anyone says... Looting us of our time?


At least you tried
Close, but I have Wanderer with better misses.

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