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Old 06-18-2018, 10:38 AM   #1
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Old 06-18-2018, 03:06 PM   #2
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Old 06-18-2018, 09:31 PM   #3
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8 lines

Rising from 0-3? Ain’t no way this fool come up battlin’
This ‘wacko’ likes bein’ beaten by men, this ‘2’ll’ bust nuts after this.
I’ll spill his insides on the walls, call him a paint can.
His punches Apollo 11. all these internet cats agree it ain’t land.
This boy couldn’t get a W trynna play words with friends.
His performances are like vines, they sway curve ‘n’ bend.
So bow your head low, like receiving some graces.
He got murked by ‘bare’ hands, and they didn’t leave any traces.
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Old 06-21-2018, 05:17 PM   #6
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Fuck man i dont really give a fuck that verse right there was whack as fuck......
Your raps be like a traffic jam way none a ya lines ever seem to budge
I aint never heard a you before and aint care if i did this correct
This wasnt even fun and i aint care i lost every battle in this league cause like ny football you nothing to fret
Whatever man yeah that was stretched but ya lines are so far fetched you aint never going get it
You such a faggot i aint have to stick you to know ya trash so whack you couldnt even hit bricks
Just understand right this battle aint important to trip and you aint make much a difference to me
Whatever so what i lost to three faggots on a faggot league in the ba and you aint never even posted on netcees......


Whatever fuck this league......
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Old 06-23-2018, 01:02 AM   #7
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dms - best line in the last ten minutes that just became my fav..
play words with friends.
lmao
the rest was pretty gay but it had some potential..

2:
to budge - nice
so far fetched - nice internal
impressed enjoyed the read..

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DMS got this w/ his opener....I can see him and his kik crew all being nice in the weeks coming up.

Setup/punch 2trip... come tf on...

Good shit, props to both for showing. Good luck going forward

v/ DMS

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Old 06-23-2018, 06:30 PM   #10
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8 lines

Rising from 0-3? Ain’t no way this fool come up battlin’
This ‘wacko’ likes bein’ beaten by men, this ‘2’ll’ bust nuts after this.

Cool.

I’ll spill his insides on the walls, call him a paint can.
His punches Apollo 11. all these internet cats agree it ain’t land.

Better.

This boy couldn’t get a W trynna play words with friends.
His performances are like vines, they sway curve ‘n’ bend.

Started out good, lost a little momentum for me in the end.

So bow your head low, like receiving some graces.
He got murked by ‘bare’ hands, and they didn’t leave any traces.

Wording is off, I do like the concept though
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Fuck man i dont really give a fuck that verse right there was whack as fuck......
Your raps be like a traffic jam way none a ya lines ever seem to budge
I aint never heard a you before and aint care if i did this correct
This wasnt even fun and i aint care i lost every battle in this league cause like ny football you nothing to fret
Whatever man yeah that was stretched but ya lines are so far fetched you aint never going get it
You such a faggot i aint have to stick you to know ya trash so whack you couldnt even hit bricks
Just understand right this battle aint important to trip and you aint make much a difference to me
Whatever so what i lost to three faggots on a faggot league in the ba and you aint never even posted on netcees......


Whatever fuck this league......

I can pretty much sum that up right here.
You need to improve, people aren't telling you this because of some bias.
Your lacking a lot of things that is needed for a battle in this verse. Complaining for half of your verse doesn't rub off very well.

Both need a lot of improvement. In the end DMS demonstrated he is both able and willing to do that.

v/DMS
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Old 06-24-2018, 01:06 PM   #11
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I'm not breaking this down. Both verses werent good. Soon as i read Wacko in DMS's verse i knew it was going top be a bust a nut bar. Tripple had nothing tbh. DMS tried to attack with personals just weak attempts. Both need to freshen up and get more clever.

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