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Old 02-26-2014, 02:19 PM   #1
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Old 02-26-2014, 03:14 PM   #4
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This bitch can get dick from me hard! I laugh at ur drop got no time for funny bars
You'll get it too miss! its like Im workin for "Blomus" the way I leave Honey jarred!
Jabs abuse this narc, the flames I spit will be quick to defuse your spark
Only time "Que" got everlasting lines is rides at an amusement park
She'll get rocked...Thud! Dick spilling her guts like a squashed bug!
Your drops suck! Doing laundry aint the only time I notice a 'Queen' washed up...
Must be misplacing your chips never gamble send shots straight from the hip
She nauseas from the bars I'm throwing up! I guess you can say ILL making her sick!
I'ma pop this nerd! Clearly she flop wit verbs Queen'll get dropped wit words!
Cementing a decent rank? Valentine Reservations the only time "Honeys Spot's Reserved"

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Bar 1: Blomus is a company who jars honey
Bar 2: lines at amusement parks are called Ques
Bar 3: "Queen" makes appliances here in the USA
Bar 4: self xplain
Bar 5: self xplain


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you are a shitty emcee,
So why ya spit so many rhymes like you can attack them?
Hush pissing you off, because ya lyrics suck
see me yelling on the street yelling " Oh shit! Duck!"
because I come like a lighting bolt, a ten what shot
while ya laughing because your sister licking your twat
you don't even wanna battle me because you'll get toast
Everyone on here knows you just a nice ghost
Can't mess with me I splatter ya face,
you shouldn't be here, ya in the wrong place.


I tried......

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Old 03-01-2014, 10:58 AM   #6
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This bitch can get dick from me hard! I laugh at ur drop got no time for funny bars
You'll get it too miss! its like Im workin for "Blomus" the way I leave Honey jarred!

Basic name flip, ok - Try and think outside the box.

Jabs abuse this narc, the flames I spit will be quick to defuse your spark
Only time "Que" got everlasting lines is rides at an amusement park

Same as above.

She'll get rocked...Thud! Dick spilling her guts like a squashed bug!
Your drops suck! Doing laundry aint the only time I notice a 'Queen' washed up...

- Washed up concepts are pretty used and abused/played. Considering it's an attempt at a name flip, I'll give you credit.

Must be misplacing your chips never gamble send shots straight from the hip
She nauseas from the bars I'm throwing up! I guess you can say ILL making her sick!

Could have expanded on this so it didn't seem so cliche.

I'ma pop this nerd! Clearly she flop wit verbs Queen'll get dropped wit words!
Cementing a decent rank? Valentine Reservations the only time "Honeys Spot's Reserved"

Nah, no real punch here. Came off statement'ish.

vs

I tried......

Lol... JK but, I got Flo taking this pretty easily, TBH. Cool attempt @ Queen, but work on concepts and delivering them.

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this was horrible, but flo got it
stop explaining bars
queen, come on. you been on here for years
step ur game up
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Opener wasn't strong enough to kick this off tough. It looked stretched, and the Blomus connection seemed pointless, considering to say your opponent was 'jarred', isn't really too damaging. I really liked the next bar. It was worded well and executed nicely. Next bar was ok. Internals were decent, and the nameplay was alright. Wasn't keen on the next bar. Unless your name is ILL, then it doesn't work. Closer was ok. Wasn't really a tough hit but then again, it wasn't horrible.

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Opener was terrible. Didn't rhyme, and the back-rhyme threw off the flow massively. Next bar was even worse. Fuck the fact you misspelled 'watt', it's the fact you compared yourself to 10 watts. Dull as fuck and not bright in the slightest. Says it all.
And shot & twat isn't even a near rhyme. I don't care if you speak Ewok or some off the chart Amazon dialect... it didn't rhyme one iota. Not good.
Toast, ghost, face, place??? You might aswell of told him he looks like a rat in a hat and you're a cat with a bat about to slap him and laugh. Terrible closer. You should be ashamed of yourself. Remove your fingers so you can't subject us to this torture again. Do it now!!

Extremely one sided.
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