Fo' Sho'

[theMuzzl3]

When the world gave a fuck, you were born.

I'm in this, on my own; this time.

Why do I care about netcees, if I'm gonna write?

Its all solemn and grim, down that road.

All the trama… all the drama… all the threats.

Fear of the unknown has gotten the best of me…
but I write, as a mirror of you; and don't we all?

Questioning authority is good, but be careful about it.
Its not like we're all in the same boat; or are we?

Favoring particular writers only gets you so far.
Your best bet in this game is to say 'fuck all the other writers',
and slay your own game, not naming names.

Some write, and write, and write.
Others listen.
Whilst the writers keep blabbering on about whatever they choose.

You snooze, you loose… so let them keep blabbering on.
Fictitious characters become real life spitters of hate, greed, love, or envy.

Based on half of a forum's history, some should begin to question authority.
More along the lines of what votes go for who and why.
Was there political discussion?
Is this America's hip hop album of text?

Don't get ahead of yourself.
First off, hide yourself.
Then, try to talk and say some shit as your imaginary self.
Then, try to claim its real;
really real -- so real that the really real people would care and really read it and accept it as really real.

Next, ask yourself: what can I do to attack another person and make it entertaining.
Thats not what I would do, personally… but I guess its a big thing with big people who have big egos.
Personally, I'd ask myself: what can I do for someone?
And, maybe I could do it or maybe not.

And, a lot of people I have encountered on net sees are generally positive and helpful up until you battle them.
Maybe thats why they lose to the villains.
Maybe not, though…
It goes back to the question of what are our politicians doing that is generally helpful and not some-what corrupt?
Same goes to question all of the votes that go for battles on this forum.
I could have ten names and you would not know it -- nor would the site owner or administrators.

The fact is that I do.
I have ten names here.
All of the 9 fake ones are totally cool & accepted.
I talk shit on some, and stay partially real on others.
You'd never know… the net is a fucked up place, and hackers have their place inside of it.
Not that I'd claim to be a hacker… I'm not.
But multiple IP's and fake names I can definitely do!
And I have.

So, what I'd like you to think about is this:
If you could write some shit as yourself and be yourself….
would you want to?

I mean… I see all these big names on here, and mostly every single one of them:
is hidden by a personification.
They speak as themselves, but within a code.
And, how can that be real?

I'm sure there are big names who represent themselves and are big writers, backing their names in the industry as battle artists and freestylists.
Those people are to be marked as gems.

When it comes down to it, the word of God along with your own word is the best word possible.
So, write that.
And, be true to who you are, even if you have to hide behind a fake name to conceal your real identity.

Spread the word.
There may be haters… and thats gotta be tolerable.

So, fuck the haters.
Be as real as you can be.
And, write some bad ass shit; despite what the corrupt votes may uncover.
Just be you… and write as you, and do it as well as you can.
But don't do it as much as I have…
or obviously the haters will come at you in real life.
Fo' Sho'.

[theMuzzl3]

instead of making another topic, I will write this here:

One night, I will write about the right slew of shit.
Just writing seems to be wrong.
There is no words that can say what must be said.
Instead, just shut the fuck up and listen.

The birds chirp your name, calling you out.
You're out of the nest, now blossom.

Solemn Words of Christ shout at you now.
They've been misconstrued.
The words you're receiving are not that of the Holy Blood.
You decipher them now as you know what to be true.

The words of Satan fill your mind.
They become intertwined with words of Jesus.
But, deep down, you know the difference.
You can become duped now, or stay true to yourself and God.

Speak to yourself, and let the truth seep through your pours.
Science and math become a joke when anticipation of an absolute truth begins to surface.
Forget yourself for a moment, and take loss of all ego.
Pain stricken and beauty acknowledged, the universe of our collective consciousness takes shape.

It is necessary, for all to endure the harshness of reality in order to see the beautiful sunrise again.
Just keep in mind what has been lost, in order for your consciousness to be here with us all.
Because, we all appreciate you being here with us.
And, you know that.

[Destroyer]

wtf?
name names

[Ghost1]

Wack as fuck. Fuck urself muzzle u piece of shit. Tell Terri I said I hope she chokes to death on a shit covered dick. Pussy.

[Strikta]

This shit sucked.

[Pharaohs Army]

Lol.
Well first of all Muzz I think you're takin things here a bit too seriously.
But you have the ability to make raps (i think). Why don't you take this concept and make it rhyme more, and "rhythm" more?
If it was good, I'da been like "oooh snap, he showed THEM, those snobby netcee hierarchy, or whoev you're callin out".. but since it kinda sucked I'm like "come on muzz; write some fire".
So it's not about writing the "right slew of shit"... it's about writing whatever YOU wanna write, but making it GOOD bro.
And if you're not going to use a buncha rhymes, make it good like those last 3 stanzas of the second post.. I find those to be good (props), so try to make the rest with that kind of syllables/rhythm/flow.


The words of Satan fill your mind.
They become intertwined with words of Jesus.
But, deep down, you know the difference.
You can become duped now, or stay true to yourself and God.

fill your mind/ intertwined
deep down/ duped now

Cool shit.

Speak to yourself, and let the truth seep through your pours.
Science and math become a joke when anticipation of an absolute truth begins to surface.
Forget yourself for a moment, and take loss of all ego.
Pain stricken and beauty acknowledged, the universe of our collective consciousness takes shape.

Very Good. Unlike a lot of the shitty stanzas above it.

It is necessary, for all to endure the harshness of reality in order to see the beautiful sunrise again.
Just keep in mind what has been lost, in order for your consciousness to be here with us all.
Because, we all appreciate you being here with us.
And, you know that.

I've purposefully highlighted what I consider to be good stanzas for your standards.. I realize you just wanted to write what you felt, what was in your heart or w/e.. and you went ahead with it. So me calling most of this supbar probably fits into your paradigm of unfairly judgmental critics, or w/e.. But it's my feed, and I consider myself to not fit into what you are rallying against at the beginning, so take it or leave it. lol

have a good day my brotha