XI WK III Chat/Beef/Predictions - Page 2

Eviction · 12-21-2022, 10:39 AM

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Originally Posted by timeless

All this wrestling shit is retarded bros

Watch more real sports please.

Pharaohs Army · 12-21-2022, 10:21 PM

@Frank, did you accidentally give an extension for an extra full day? Dec. 22 not 21st?
@symetrik - Will try to drop by midnight to be fair. Only 1/4 done!

Good luck all

symetrik · 12-21-2022, 11:26 PM

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Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army

@Frank, did you accidentally give an extension for an extra full day? Dec. 22 not 21st?
@symetrik - Will try to drop by midnight to be fair. Only 1/4 done!

Good luck all

we've all seen it, take the extra day if you need it

Dope girl · 12-22-2022, 09:44 AM

I was gonna drop vs today but Frank close thread
It's all good waste vs because he didn't show

Master Rock · 12-22-2022, 11:48 AM

I'll see if I get a couple votes in today.

Eviction · 12-22-2022, 02:41 PM

if @Frank stops being frank the tank I'll vote on a few battles, not allowing people to sign out is some zelph shit.

Adverse · 12-22-2022, 07:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Eviction

if @Frank stops being frank the tank I'll vote on a few battles, not allowing people to sign out is some zelph shit.

You ever just tried, I don’t know, not showing up?

Eviction · 12-22-2022, 07:30 PM

good idea but I have a 100% show rate and don't want that messed up because frank abused his powers to inflate shit. I'm pretty proud of that. I'm certainly not counting any no shows accumulated from this.

symetrik · 12-22-2022, 07:44 PM

@brokenhal0

not sway but honestly curious how you read some of the lines (so I understand how other people read my shit) - not that it'll really change the way I write lmao... just wanna see when I'm going too far into my own head.

does this help? https://voca.ro/1bA8PxPF6stM

definitely, a long line that entered a different cadence so I feel you.

I won't touch on the fucking BARS THAT WAS.

symetrik · 12-22-2022, 07:47 PM

also I'll vote on uni/frank tomorrow jesus y'all long bar fuckers sometimes I regret stanza breakdowns already

brokenhal0 · 12-22-2022, 09:30 PM

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Originally Posted by symetrik

@brokenhal0

not sway but honestly curious how you read some of the lines (so I understand how other people read my shit) - not that it'll really change the way I write lmao... just wanna see when I'm going too far into my own head.

does this help? https://voca.ro/1bA8PxPF6stM

definitely, a long line that entered a different cadence so I feel you.

I won't touch on the fucking BARS THAT WAS.

you totally swayed bro lmao --- it's cool -- my arrogance and questionably weird subject matter has always had it's fans/critics since I started writing here.. but in terms of that story alone and this is me being subjective as the reader
it lost cadence flow bboyism in certain areas but that's just my take .. I had to vote cause it was pretty much a tie ''almost'' i thought your overall creativity was better then pharaohs army.. but certain wording just did not keep your cypher in motion...
as you can see whenever i drop beats with my verses there's a certain tempo style rhythm I personally enjoy writing and reading... it's not that you should change your writing it's the delivery to me personally as a reader on how it makes me feel reading as ''you"" while also being ''me'' if that makes any sense.
and when i say thing's like ''soft'' i don't mean it personally cause i don't even fucking know you ...i mean it in terms of the feeling it induces it's some shit a kid that shoved into a locker might say or the guy who get's beat up at the bar infront of his girlfriend after he started the fight lmao it breaks a certain standard on what i look for.. that ''battle'' or ''street'' aspect hip hop is based on... for lack of better term ... but once again it's subjective ... my style of hiphop is different then your's and that's the beauty of the art...

symetrik · 12-22-2022, 10:03 PM

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Originally Posted by brokenhal0

you totally swayed bro lmao --- it's cool -- my arrogance and questionably weird subject matter has always had it's fans/critics since I started writing here.. but in terms of that story alone and this is me being subjective as the reader
it lost cadence flow bboyism in certain areas but that's just my take .. I had to vote cause it was pretty much a tie ''almost'' i thought your overall creativity was better then pharaohs army.. but certain wording just did not keep your cypher in motion...
as you can see whenever i drop beats with my verses there's a certain tempo style rhythm I personally enjoy writing and reading... it's not that you should change your writing it's the delivery to me personally as a reader on how it makes me feel reading as ''you"" while also being ''me'' if that makes any sense.
and when i say thing's like ''soft'' i don't mean it personally cause i don't even fucking know you ...i mean it in terms of the feeling it induces it's some shit a kid that shoved into a locker might say or the guy who get's beat up at the bar infront of his girlfriend after he started the fight lmao it breaks a certain standard on what i look for.. that ''battle'' or ''street'' aspect hip hop is based on... for lack of better term ... but once again it's subjective ... my style of hiphop is different then your's and that's the beauty of the art...

kewl, I appreciate the extra feedback. I'm just here to write and get better lol

brokenhal0 · 12-22-2022, 10:21 PM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SKls1xeJN7Q

Pharaohs Army · 12-24-2022, 12:07 AM

Will try to get my votes in tomorrow night...and IF time permitting might write up a few very brief feeds for the no-showed verses.

Pharaohs Army · 12-25-2022, 12:50 AM

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Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army

Will try to get my votes in tomorrow night...and IF time permitting might write up a few very brief feeds for the no-showed verses.

Damn, I’m sorry. Gonna have to be i the morning when I wake up after a rest. I’ll try my best to get’er done.

Diablo · 12-25-2022, 01:26 AM

@Frank I’m away on vacay with the fam over Christmas

See you all in the new year!

Scar · 12-26-2022, 05:06 AM

@Frank when is the new week starting? surely the battles are decisive enough to award a winner and loser.

Pharaohs Army · 12-26-2022, 09:09 AM

@brokenhal0

similar hip hop roots... i guess i could say i started with East Coast 90s stuff...for sure, but now have branched out considerably, as I guess you might have also.

Frank · 12-26-2022, 06:52 PM

Pharaohs Army · 12-27-2022, 01:13 PM

@Universe
I understand I challenged you on exactly ONE (1) Long Multi this week, then humbly conceded to you that I stood corrected when Symetrik pronounced it with his helpful accent.

Is this perhaps a source of your animosity towards me?
I can handle a vote against me, no problem. But you seem to have made an ad hominem attack. It was a "war report" with rhymes, plain and simple... I've done plenty of 1st persons or self expressions in the past and decided to switch it up again...You really need to get control of your emotions your jealousy is showing or you just can't admit that you're better than most YET you hold everyone to YOUR standards? Lol. I actually tried this week buddy yet it was your most explosive hate-fest yet. I'm not too bothered...you seem to need some meds, or perhaps if I were to copy your 48-64 line multi style some time it would be a perfect 5/10 for effort.

12-22-2022, 11:48 AM	#25
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,330 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599637	I'll see if I get a couple votes in today. __________________ https://www.instagram.com/master_rock1/ https://www.youtube.com/graphicalmindz

12-22-2022, 02:41 PM	#26
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	if @Frank stops being frank the tank I'll vote on a few battles, not allowing people to sign out is some zelph shit. __________________ Champed - Art Of Writing League ( beat NYCSpitz )

12-22-2022, 07:30 PM	#28
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	good idea but I have a 100% show rate and don't want that messed up because frank abused his powers to inflate shit. I'm pretty proud of that. I'm certainly not counting any no shows accumulated from this. __________________ Champed - Art Of Writing League ( beat NYCSpitz )

12-26-2022, 05:06 AM	#37
Scar Senior Member Join Date: May 2019 Posts: 530 Battle Record: 7-5 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5689706	@Frank when is the new week starting? surely the battles are decisive enough to award a winner and loser. __________________ I remember the poplar trees

12-26-2022, 06:52 PM	#39
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	__________________ *VETWORK*

12-21-2022, 10:21 PM	#22
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	@Frank, did you accidentally give an extension for an extra full day? Dec. 22 not 21st? @symetrik - Will try to drop by midnight to be fair. Only 1/4 done! Good luck all

12-22-2022, 09:44 AM	#24
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,706 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	I was gonna drop vs today but Frank close thread It's all good waste vs because he didn't show

12-22-2022, 07:44 PM	#29
symetrik Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 544 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 8664751	@brokenhal0 not sway but honestly curious how you read some of the lines (so I understand how other people read my shit) - not that it'll really change the way I write lmao... just wanna see when I'm going too far into my own head. does this help? https://voca.ro/1bA8PxPF6stM definitely, a long line that entered a different cadence so I feel you. I won't touch on the fucking BARS THAT WAS.

12-22-2022, 07:47 PM	#30
symetrik Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 544 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 8664751	also I'll vote on uni/frank tomorrow jesus y'all long bar fuckers sometimes I regret stanza breakdowns already

12-22-2022, 10:21 PM	#33
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 492 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 455117	https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SKls1xeJN7Q

12-24-2022, 12:07 AM	#34
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Will try to get my votes in tomorrow night...and IF time permitting might write up a few very brief feeds for the no-showed verses.

12-25-2022, 01:26 AM	#36
Diablo Badgerdick Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Showdown City Posts: 2,604 Battle Record: 11-2 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 22685548	@Frank I’m away on vacay with the fam over Christmas See you all in the new year!

12-26-2022, 09:09 AM	#38
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	@brokenhal0 similar hip hop roots... i guess i could say i started with East Coast 90s stuff...for sure, but now have branched out considerably, as I guess you might have also.

12-27-2022, 01:13 PM	#40
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	@Universe I understand I challenged you on exactly ONE (1) Long Multi this week, then humbly conceded to you that I stood corrected when Symetrik pronounced it with his helpful accent. Is this perhaps a source of your animosity towards me? I can handle a vote against me, no problem. But you seem to have made an ad hominem attack. It was a "war report" with rhymes, plain and simple... I've done plenty of 1st persons or self expressions in the past and decided to switch it up again...You really need to get control of your emotions your jealousy is showing or you just can't admit that you're better than most YET you hold everyone to YOUR standards? Lol. I actually tried this week buddy yet it was your most explosive hate-fest yet. I'm not too bothered...you seem to need some meds, or perhaps if I were to copy your 48-64 line multi style some time it would be a perfect 5/10 for effort.