12-21-2015, 02:12 AM | #1 |
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Lunchables
Grown man biz so don't monkey with apes
you all lunchables, squares with sum cheese to take nigga ... How sad fag don't got a proud dad, round jabs, you wouldn't pack a punch with brown bags I dust off my psyche, polish my thoughts from saw dust from the chainsaw - cranium trauma sawed off dog my think tank matter makes sparks fly impenetrable, can't get in my head thoughts barb wired flying objects with my mind, magneto powers, I'll move the crowd if they got metal on em I get my X on, the days of futures past "I'm just being honest" waiting the days of Future pass, the youths our future at hand grasp Mikai phifer, call yourself the future but can't rap, yea I rap and had some what of a sheltered up bringing but that's similar to Slim, at the Shelter up swinging. Last edited by Quarter O; 12-21-2015 at 09:34 PM. |
12-21-2015, 02:20 AM | #2 |
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This was not good.
U have potential tho. |
12-21-2015, 10:39 AM | #3 |
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12-21-2015, 01:07 PM | #4 |
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There is zero substance & alot of ur wording is awkward imo.
Easy to tell u rushed writing this. |
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12-21-2015, 05:19 PM | #6 |
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I liked it
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12-21-2015, 09:23 PM | #7 |
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Good lookin sral
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12-24-2015, 03:32 AM | #8 |
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Nah.
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