05-14-2018, 11:39 AM | #1 |
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WK2: Defiant 1-0 vs. Joe Boston 0-1 - JB WINS!!
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE @Defiant @Joe Boston |
05-14-2018, 05:02 PM | #3 |
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05-17-2018, 08:36 PM | #4 |
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Your relationship has problems, your bitch can name more than a few No electricity in the bedroom, you just beat her ass everytime the light bills due Watch the shitstorms you create brew up, fag better run for shelter Strapped with a glock the size of newborn, one bullet thatll kill you i call daddy's little helper 100 plus degrees ill fucking melt ya, your witnessing hot steel Chrome with the attachment all it needs is one click like gmail No one to bail him out he's buried in shit up to his waist Talking Jazz he gonna be needing one and a vehicle with handicap accessible plates All your dates been disappointments, why you never taken a bitch home let me ask this? Your no good at that Sleep Number bit, your dryhumping the wetspot on your memory foam mattress Cremate your body to ashes spread em down the river After i give you Free Smoke your gonna have to reserve another burial plot for the affected liver |
05-18-2018, 07:01 PM | #5 |
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05-20-2018, 01:07 AM | #6 |
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Your relationship has problems, your bitch can name more than a few
No electricity in the bedroom, you just beat her ass everytime the light bills due wasnt feeling this Watch the shitstorms you create brew up, fag better run for shelter Strapped with a glock the size of newborn, one bullet thatll kill you i call daddy's little helper ok much better 100 plus degrees ill fucking melt ya, your witnessing hot steel Chrome with the attachment all it needs is one click like gmail alright No one to bail him out he's buried in shit up to his waist Talking Jazz he gonna be needing one and a vehicle with handicap accessible plates ehh All your dates been disappointments, why you never taken a bitch home let me ask this? Your no good at that Sleep Number bit, your dryhumping the wetspot on your memory foam mattress start grammar checking your stuff bro Cremate your body to ashes spread em down the river After i give you Free Smoke your gonna have to reserve another burial plot for the affected liver decent I think the problem with JB isn’t that his concepts suck, I feel like he sometimes tries to do tooo much in a line. Simplify your stuff a little more bro and see how it goes. Aside from that I liked daddy’s helper and google chrome. You definitely always have fresh concepts and you’ve never been one to drop played shit, you always got the current events. Defiant won’t show and I could have told you that. Vote Jose Boston
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05-20-2018, 12:53 PM | #7 |
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Your relationship has problems, your bitch can name more than a few
No electricity in the bedroom, you just beat her ass everytime the light bills due Lol Joey What? Watch the shitstorms you create brew up, fag better run for shelter Strapped with a glock the size of newborn, one bullet thatll kill you i call daddy's little helper Actually nice here! 100 plus degrees ill fucking melt ya, your witnessing hot steel Chrome with the attachment all it needs is one click like gmail Light, but cooley No one to bail him out he's buried in shit up to his waist Talking Jazz he gonna be needing one and a vehicle with handicap accessible plates Lol I like this All your dates been disappointments, why you never taken a bitch home let me ask this? Your no good at that Sleep Number bit, your dryhumping the wetspot on your memory foam mattress Nahhh Cremate your body to ashes spread em down the river After i give you Free Smoke your gonna have to reserve another burial plot for the affected liver Ight Coo verse Joey lol, you be having some creative concepts, just shorten the bars up a little and try to not over do putting so much detail in a bar every punch or haymaker. Props tho!
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05-20-2018, 02:11 PM | #8 |
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Cool verse.
Daddy's little helper was dope, thought your opener had potential w/ the 'No electricity in the bedroom' angle, the Chrome line was fresh but didn't rhyme for me. gmail/hot steel? Maybe it's an accent thing.. Anyways, cool verse. Props for showing. |
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