03-06-2018, 08:57 AM | #1 |
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DynamiCz [vs] Joe Boston - DYNAMICZ WINS
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03-08-2018, 12:03 PM | #4 |
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03-08-2018, 07:25 PM | #5 |
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no doubt going 10 @DynamiCz
bitch learned his lesson the 1st time,this week he gotta pray long shot from a W,hes better off driving to mcdonalds on international womens day your gay by far, crying and bitchin aint what grown men do I question your sexuality, your more like Derrius Guice during a Radio interview i'll spew all ur over chicks glasses, gives good head but im not into flat asses Whenever i hit the BoxSpring into action,u sleep in the wetspot on ur worn out mattress u take self defense classes for protection,i got a burner with a kick like a midsection Bullets Travel at lighting speeds, see the flashback in ur head thats a Vietnam Veteran dont go second guessing yourself cuz defeating me aint that easy if these shellls can Panera persons face,it'll have yours looking like a grilled Panini |
03-09-2018, 02:57 PM | #6 |
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Some nerve, now its son day...im giving him the word
Sleep with the eagle incase its beef..Toni Braxton, I'm wakin up next to the bird The impact caused him a icepack..sharp object made contact The blade put two cuts on his smile, his face expression walmart rolled the price back Cold scene..woke like a activist..im trying to catch joe sleep in his dream Front yard of the house..hiding with the tank like a smoke screen Catch him slippin in the hallway, this friend get the money mitch Disconnected the gun from the tripod stand, made it handheld like a nintendo switch You cant be the cream of the crop, this is karma?..i came back around on the spot Thought you had something in store for me, temporary front..thats a pop up shop
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03-10-2018, 10:02 AM | #9 |
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bitch learned his lesson the 1st time,this week he gotta pray
long shot from a W,hes better off driving to mcdonalds on international womens day wow that was funny your gay by far, crying and bitchin aint what grown men do I question your sexuality, your more like Derrius Guice during a Radio interview don't know who derrius guice is but yeah... i'll spew all ur over chicks glasses, gives good head but im not into flat asses Whenever i hit the BoxSpring into action,u sleep in the wetspot on ur worn out mattress ooo that was personal I liked it u take self defense classes for protection,i got a burner with a kick like a midsection Bullets Travel at lighting speeds, see the flashback in ur head thats a Vietnam Veteran ehh not into this one seemed a bit don't know just didn't like it dont go second guessing yourself cuz defeating me aint that easy if these shellls can Panera persons face,it'll have yours looking like a grilled Panini I liked that that was funny as well Vs. Some nerve, now its son day...im giving him the word Sleep with the eagle incase its beef..Toni Braxton, I'm wakin up next to the bird nah sorry The impact caused him a icepack..sharp object made contact The blade put two cuts on his smile, his face expression walmart rolled the price back that was funny Cold scene..woke like a activist..im trying to catch joe sleep in his dream Front yard of the house..hiding with the tank like a smoke screen nah Catch him slippin in the hallway, this friend get the money mitch Disconnected the gun from the tripod stand, made it handheld like a nintendo switch eh could been better You cant be the cream of the crop, this is karma?..i came back around on the spot Thought you had something in store for me, temporary front..thats a pop up shop nah sorry didn't like this closer Vote: I think it's obvious but Joe boston
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03-10-2018, 08:31 PM | #10 |
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Dynamicz got this
W concept was relevant but poorly executed Joe actually could be a problem. if he fixed his wording, rhyming, etc Concept was there i suppose Dyn had enough to win, tripod was cool v/dynamic |
03-10-2018, 09:48 PM | #11 |
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"your gay by far, crying and bitchin aint what grown men do I question your sexuality, your more like Derrius Guice during a Radio interview" "u take self defense classes for protection,i got a burner with a kick like a midsection Bullets Travel at lighting speeds, see the flashback" DynamiCz: "Cold scene..woke like a activist..im trying to catch joe sleep in his dream Front yard of the house..hiding with the tank like a smoke screen" "Catch him slippin in the hallway, this friend get the money mitch Disconnected the gun from the tripod stand, made it handheld like a nintendo switch" "You cant be the cream of the crop, this is karma?..i came back around on the spot Thought you had something in store for me, temporary front..thats a pop up shop" The three bars for DynamiCz I quoted is when I started feeling his verse was getting the lead. Also idk to me the Toni Braxton line made it seem like you were saying you are her. Say what you want just my opinion. So kind of lost me there...Joe Boston didn't try here it seemed like couple nice lines. He usually as a more solid better worded verse. This time was different in my opinion. So even with me being a little confused at first with dyna's opener, his last 3 bars just felt they hit harder vs. what Joe put up. Voting for DynamiCz |
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i'll spew all ur over chicks glasses, gives good head but im not into flat asses
Whenever i hit the BoxSpring into action,u sleep in the wetspot on ur worn out mattress dont go second guessing yourself cuz defeating me aint that easy if these shellls can Panera persons face,it'll have yours looking like a grilled Panini Fav 2 from JB.. Cold scene..woke like a activist..im trying to catch joe sleep in his dream Front yard of the house..hiding with the tank like a smoke screen Catch him slippin in the hallway, this friend get the money mitch Disconnected the gun from the tripod stand, made it handheld like a nintendo switch Fqv 2 from dy Weak battle imo, but Joe clearly had the more solid verse. Mvgt Jb
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dope opener box spring was a cool concept but wording hurt it same w flashback, fire concept tho ur other 2 missed completely vs Dy opener had a gd concept but it was overworded +not a diss handheld was worded better, dope concept too but again.. impact was minimal due to it not really getting at him closer was cool next 2 missed completely this is close, but i def see jb taking it he just had more impact v/joe boston |
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Even though some of his execution/ wording is shaky.....clearly had the better ideas, i.e - flashback, boxspring that could've been cool, still aight tho for creativity. Dynamicz -- tripod was slick to me, alot of other stuff was indirect or overworded. U seem for for S&F. Just need more experience attackin yo opponent. |
03-11-2018, 09:37 AM | #15 |
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I have DynamiCz winning here. The last two bars were better than JBs attempts. He's been adapting well and just needs to execute a little more fluidly. Be more direct. Tighten up the wording. JB had the flashback which was nice. Some creative ideas but the wordyness let him down. Overthinking the delivery is killing you. Shorten the bars. Be concise. If a word doesnt need to be here get rid of it. Anyway I think DynamiCz edged it so I'll roll with him. Vote DynamiCz.
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03-11-2018, 09:42 AM | #16 |
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Joe Boston I only really liked the mattress line you had, and even that was a bit borderline of a quotable. Dynamicz I liked the Nintendo switch line even though it wasn’t really a punch and I liked the creativeness of ur closer. Opener had potential too, dope ass concept.
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03-11-2018, 09:55 AM | #17 |
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Joe's wording defeats him again. Jesus.
Opener had potential. Next bar was ok but light. Concept as a hole is retired. I mean how many times can people write a bar about their opponents sexuality? See where I'm going with this? Kind of like the I fucked your mom/girl concept. Box spring concept was ok but your execution was corny and really close to cringe, honestly. Need to be harsh dude. Flash backs was off. Closers wording was horrible and the WP was a reach. Dynamicz Tony Braxton was an ok concept over worded with a bad execution. Walmart roll back concept needed more. Smoke screen was a complete miss. Tripod was dope. Closer was ok. I got DynamiCz with edge here. |
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