rnd1. Drencrom Muff vs Fraze - MUFF WINS

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DUE TONIGHT MAY 15TH 2015 AT 3.00AM EASTERN TIME





NO SWAYING, RECYCLING, BITING OR PROP 17ING

@Drencrom Muff
@fraze

[El Muffin]

Yup.


Basically finished

Jyst dnt feel like typing righ now

[El Muffin]

Lol @inflammatory thread u Made in disc

Talked trash. That shit don't float..who's crying now
Ull be dead see if u think can swim by that assault you made lying down
ull get peppered w/ hits. Dog.. I'm overall better at this
so u can make all the racquet u wan
I'll still kill you on a whim"ll be done..I'm on my Roger Federer shit.
Nigga there's no Telling what I'd do Cause there's been Discretion
But udon want to see that Tommy get Kicked out. My Gun Martin! Get the Steppin
R..I.P CHINX Drugs. Cept you be the next one get HIT in the Lungs
I'll end your Career after that Bang'll Pull Your Hip Out Like Bo Jackson Injury Run
you got a faggot n told em to write chu that's 1 step above Pikachu
Whole Hood like a Game of Minesweeper everytime you Clique up A nigga winks at you

[El Muffin]

He can hv an ext idgaf but he better show

Wrote tgat to a beat

[fraze]

I'm showing.

[El Muffin]

Then post nigga

Fk is this brainstorming shit

[fraze]

i was at work nigga.

you’ve never been a real threat, so pussy cash your lil check,
if DM’s even a high roller…he was trying to pass a skill check...
im living life cash first, but this fucking ‘nerD got it backwards,
only prized possession muff keep in safe is his netcees password,
be honest man, someone change that shit on you your life would end,
but i’ll hack this bitch and leave him in pieces... with a knife in hand,
ask about me niggaaa... my game with nines cant be questioned man,
i’ll have two nina’s eating muff… while i’m fucking horny lesbians,
in terms of verses, you can bet you’re fucked cause you lack heart,
if people put money on drenc’s... they must be at cash bar

[El Muffin]

Thank you

Up 4 votes

[Xquisite]

Muff,

Talked trash. That shit don't float..who's crying now
Ull be dead see if u think can swim by that assault you made lying down
-- trying too hard to make this float, dead sea, swim idea work
ull get peppered w/ hits. Dog.. I'm overall better at this
so u can make all the racquet u wan
I'll still kill you on a whim"ll be done..I'm on my Roger Federer shit.
-- That wimbledon wordplay is mad forced. I'll kill you on a whim you will be done? Doesn't make sense unless you put a period after whim; which makes it even more forced.
Nigga there's no Telling what I'd do Cause there's been Discretion
But udon want to see that Tommy get Kicked out. My Gun Martin! Get the Steppin
-- sorry, over my head.
R..I.P CHINX Drugs. Cept you be the next one get HIT in the Lungs
I'll end your Career after that Bang'll Pull Your Hip Out Like Bo Jackson Injury Run
-- ok kinda of simple
you got a faggot n told em to write chu that's 1 step above Pikachu
Whole Hood like a Game of Minesweeper everytime you Clique up A nigga winks at you
-- LOL


Fraze,
you’ve never been a real threat, so pussy cash your lil check,
if DM’s even a high roller…he was trying to pass a skill check...
-- nope
im living life cash first, but this fucking ‘nerD got it backwards,
only prized possession muff keep in safe is his netcees password,
-- k, he's poor... not real clever or funny
be honest man, someone change that shit on you your life would end,
but i’ll hack this bitch and leave him in pieces... with a knife in hand,
-- nope
ask about me niggaaa... my game with nines cant be questioned man,
i’ll have two nina’s eating muff… while i’m fucking horny lesbians,
-- better... coulda worded and flipped this better though
in terms of verses, you can bet you’re fucked cause you lack heart,
if people put money on drenc’s... they must be at cash bar
-- nope


Muff's closer was LOTB and the Bo Jackson was decent...that gave him enough to edge fraze out.

Vote - Muff

[Bomb Bard]

Dren - allot of ur bars were generic or went over my head. Was only feeling your last two bars

Fraze - wasn't feeling much. The nc password was cool but everything else was played/generic. Come with more clever/fresher shit. Wordplay's and idioms man work on that cos u do got the idea

Vote dren for more quotes and better misses
Pcz

[Sharp]

Talked trash. That shit don't float..who's crying now
Ull be dead see if u think can swim by that assault you made lying down
ok
ull get peppered w/ hits. Dog.. I'm overall better at this
so u can make all the racquet u wan
I'll still kill you on a whim"ll be done..I'm on my Roger Federer shit.
If that's supposed to be whimbledon it's mad forces
Nigga there's no Telling what I'd do Cause there's been Discretion
But udon want to see that Tommy get Kicked out. My Gun Martin! Get the Steppin
I don't get it. Pm an explanation if you can
R..I.P CHINX Drugs. Cept you be the next one get HIT in the Lungs
I'll end your Career after that Bang'll Pull Your Hip Out Like Bo Jackson Injury Run
ok
you got a faggot n told em to write chu that's 1 step above Pikachu
Whole Hood like a Game of Minesweeper everytime you Clique up A nigga winks at you
nice





you’ve never been a real threat, so pussy cash your lil check,
if DM’s even a high roller…he was trying to pass a skill check...
eh
im living life cash first, but this fucking ‘nerD got it backwards,
only prized possession muff keep in safe is his netcees password,
not feeling
be honest man, someone change that shit on you your life would end,
but i’ll hack this bitch and leave him in pieces... with a knife in hand,
missing something here? Not really feeling the any kinda flip
ask about me niggaaa... my game with nines cant be questioned man,
i’ll have two nina’s eating muff… while i’m fucking horny lesbians,
that muff shit is played
in terms of verses, you can bet you’re fucked cause you lack heart,
if people put money on drenc’s... they must be at cash bar
I get the flip but the last part of the bar was eh

Fraze verse wasn't too good at all. Minesweeper was funny and muff had a few more that didn't miss.

V/muff

[Hush]

@Diode @Orc
@deadman

[dead man]

Talked trash. That shit don't float..who's crying now
Ull be dead see if u think can swim by that assault you made lying down

uhh dead sea / swim / float? that's pretty bad.

ull get peppered w/ hits. Dog.. I'm overall better at this
so u can make all the racquet u wan
I'll still kill you on a whim"ll be done..I'm on my Roger Federer shit.

i am smiling at how terrible this word play is. a little more eisenhower and a little less of this please

Nigga there's no Telling what I'd do Cause there's been Discretion
But udon want to see that Tommy get Kicked out. My Gun Martin! Get the Steppin

ehhh. i dont like this. kick out is not a turn of phrase im familiar with as far as shooting somebody. get the steppin? naw..

R..I.P CHINX Drugs. Cept you be the next one get HIT in the Lungs
I'll end your Career after that Bang'll Pull Your Hip Out Like Bo Jackson Injury Run

nice

you got a faggot n told em to write chu that's 1 step above Pikachu
Whole Hood like a Game of Minesweeper everytime you Clique up A nigga winks at you

what? cause theres a smiley face on minesweeper? this.. this doesn't make any coherent sense.


fraze or w/e


you’ve never been a real threat, so pussy cash your lil check,
if DM’s even a high roller…he was trying to pass a skill check...

i don't get it

im living life cash first, but this fucking ‘nerD got it backwards,
only prized possession muff keep in safe is his netcees password,

i always thought it was so lame to take a small portion of someone's name and flip it in some obscure way. this was bad. even
though it might be true.

be honest man, someone change that shit on you your life would end,
but i’ll hack this bitch and leave him in pieces... with a knife in hand,

? okay

ask about me niggaaa... my game with nines cant be questioned man,
i’ll have two nina’s eating muff… while i’m fucking horny lesbians,

alright.

in terms of verses, you can bet you’re fucked cause you lack heart,
if people put money on drenc’s... they must be at cash bar

drenc's = drinks? lmao

fuck this was not good, sorry guys

im voting for muff cause his bengel's line was the only really decent one in the battle.

V MUFF

[Witty]

Talked trash. That shit don't float..who's crying now
Ull be dead see if u think can swim by that assault you made lying down
I liked this lol little forced but it was funny to me
ull get peppered w/ hits. Dog.. I'm overall better at this
so u can make all the racquet u wan
I'll still kill you on a whim"ll be done..I'm on my Roger Federer shit.
No this really didn't work, actually one of the most forced wordplay's i've seen
Nigga there's no Telling what I'd do Cause there's been Discretion
But udon want to see that Tommy get Kicked out. My Gun Martin! Get the Steppin
I don't understand this :/
R..I.P CHINX Drugs. Cept you be the next one get HIT in the Lungs
I'll end your Career after that Bang'll Pull Your Hip Out Like Bo Jackson Injury Run
Cool
you got a faggot n told em to write chu that's 1 step above Pikachu
Whole Hood like a Game of Minesweeper everytime you Clique up A nigga winks at you
Best bar easily

vs

you’ve never been a real threat, so pussy cash your lil check,
if DM’s even a high roller…he was trying to pass a skill check...
You rhymed check with check :/ either way, it fell flat
im living life cash first, but this fucking ‘nerD got it backwards,
only prized possession muff keep in safe is his netcees password,
This didn't rhyme to me...not a bad idea tho
be honest man, someone change that shit on you your life would end,
but i’ll hack this bitch and leave him in pieces... with a knife in hand,
Very basic, but your best so far
ask about me niggaaa... my game with nines cant be questioned man,
i’ll have two nina’s eating muff… while i’m fucking horny lesbians,
Cool
in terms of verses, you can bet you’re fucked cause you lack heart,
if people put money on drenc’s... they must be at cash bar
huh?

This battle wasn't great, expected more from Muff tbh but he did just about enough for the win.

Vote - Muff.

[Black Mask]

that whimll be done line may be the worst line ive ever read

Still won tho

v/Muffin

[Tic]

Originally Posted by Lil Muffin

Lol @inflammatory thread u Made in disc

Talked trash. That shit don't float..who's crying now
Ull be dead see if u think can swim by that assault you made lying down
This is ok.
ull get peppered w/ hits. Dog.. I'm overall better at this
so u can make all the racquet u wan
I'll still kill you on a whim"ll be done..I'm on my Roger Federer shit.
Horrible lmao. Forced AF.
Nigga there's no Telling what I'd do Cause there's been Discretion
But udon want to see that Tommy get Kicked out. My Gun Martin! Get the Steppin
Don't like this either.
R..I.P CHINX Drugs. Cept you be the next one get HIT in the Lungs
I'll end your Career after that Bang'll Pull Your Hip Out Like Bo Jackson Injury Run
This was nice.
you got a faggot n told em to write chu that's 1 step above Pikachu
Whole Hood like a Game of Minesweeper everytime you Clique up A nigga winks at you
Ok I guess lol.

Originally Posted by fraze

i was at work nigga.

you’ve never been a real threat, so pussy cash your lil check,
if DM’s even a high roller…he was trying to pass a skill check...
Nah this doesn't hit.
im living life cash first, but this fucking ‘nerD got it backwards,
only prized possession muff keep in safe is his netcees password,
Ok.
be honest man, someone change that shit on you your life would end,
but i’ll hack this bitch and leave him in pieces... with a knife in hand,
Nah.
ask about me niggaaa... my game with nines cant be questioned man,
i’ll have two nina’s eating muff… while i’m fucking horny lesbians,
This is ok I guess.
in terms of verses, you can bet you’re fucked cause you lack heart,
if people put money on drenc’s... they must be at cash bar
Nah I don't like this.

Muff takes this with better consistency and harsher execution. I still think your style is weird, bro. But you got this one.